Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 413,157 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2441. A Nation To Be Loved 11/13/2010
2442. Always Blue 11/13/2010
2443. A Very True 11/7/2010
2444. As The Days Pass By 11/7/2010
2445. A Strength In Prayer 11/7/2010
2446. A Watching Her Go 11/8/2010
2447. A Ship Need Not Be Sunk 11/9/2010
2448. A Life Need Not Teach 11/9/2010
2449. Rest Of Life 11/16/2010
2450. In Open Lines 11/16/2010
2451. Papa's Doll 11/16/2010
2452. A Response To Inner Call 11/17/2010
2453. A Change To Witness 11/17/2010
2454. A Tears For No Reason 11/17/2010
2455. Why Sex Not Dignified 11/17/2010
2456. As The Show Goes On 11/18/2010
2457. Very Real 11/18/2010
2458. Only Friendship 11/18/2010
2459. A Change To Adapt 11/19/2010
2460. Get On Well 11/19/2010
2461. Oh, Almighty 11/20/2010
2462. What Is Love? 11/20/2010
2463. He Is Gone 11/21/2010
2464. Gone Were The Days 11/21/2010
2465. A Lust For Shine 11/21/2010
2466. A Dream Only 11/21/2010
2467. A Heart And Mind 11/22/2010
2468. A Helpless Animal 11/22/2010
2469. A Not Very Far 11/22/2010
2470. A Trusted Friends 11/24/2010
2471. An Apology 11/24/2010
2472. A Day Ends 11/25/2010
2473. A Praise Around 11/25/2010
2474. A Praise To Go Around 11/25/2010
2475. A Long Inning 11/25/2010
2476. It Is Enough 11/26/2010
2477. A Day In Field 11/14/2010
2478. At Every Stage 11/23/2010
2479. A Weak Love 11/23/2010
2480. A Massage Of Love 11/28/2010

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Naomi De'Luca (4/19/2010 5:23:00 PM)

    Simply riveting! I had to read more of your verses!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/19/2010 7:42:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 4/18/2010 11: 20: 00 PM
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    Poem: 22249305 - A day to start with....
    Member: Jordan Legaspi
    Comment: Nature never deserts us and offer fine place
    How easily we can forget and replace?
    We can act thankless and invite the wrath
    It is one step away from loosing faith

    Nice poem it deals with human nature actaully -the many facets of our character, human being.
    and this verse, to me served as the focal point of the whole poem...the question on what we are doing to our 'mother earth', thus, the reality of pain and sorrow and all the unpleasant realities in our world is the cause of our human tendencies.

    all the best

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2010 10:29:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22693665 - A clear emotions
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen

    Comment: A very clever play of emotions in this poem. It's like battling with the rhyme and rhythm to maintain a sober climax in its flow. I almost wanted to take each first line in the poem to create another emotional rush.....must say it's a good read.
    Thanks for sharing.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2010 11:24:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 4/17/2010 9: 06: 00 PM

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    Poem: 22513851 - A magic in music
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: Again. This ending is not good. But this poem is a big, big improvement over 'A Desire' and it has genuine poetic qualities that I found enjoyable. The rhymes are much better and the word selections are as well. This was much, much easier to read and enjoy. In fact, I can even recommend this poem to others. I would just tell them to not pay attention to the last verse. It is really poor. This is because the worst thing you can do to a reader is not end a poem. This poem has no end. - Greenwolfe 1962

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/11/2010 9:58:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 4/11/2010 11: 16: 00 AM

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    Poem: 22395309 - A desire
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘…Love …It is beautiful union of two souls…’

    Yeah and yeah Sir…soul in our culture [Indic] is different from others… its Ataman…

    Yeah discourse of Yagyanyablaka and Maitri had talk on this Soul was discussed…
    In today’s reality the meaning of Soul has come to soul…
    Thanks Uncle
    Voted 10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2010 2:24:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 4/9/2010 2: 02: 00 PM
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    Poem: 22249305 - A day to start with....
    Member: Mark Nwagwu
    Comment: If birds don’t ignore the nature then why do we?
    Why we remove the trees and make them refugee
    We loose the shed and they loose the home
    We know nothing and aimlessly roam

    this is brilliant, hasmukh, all of it - birds are far more sensible than we are, but they don't have a free will, we do, and what do we do with our freedom, we 'remove the trees', home of the birds. loved this a lot

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/5/2010 10:13:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 4/5/2010 9: 56: 00 PM

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    Poem: 22277802 - A poet can
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen
    Comment: Intense and very thoughtful write, Hasmukh. It seems as if you're in a minstrel courtyard, presenting your case for the poet: ' Why poets of modern age are considered pawn in their game? ' And again....' Are we not in the streets for begging paltry sum in reward? ' How philosophic can you be?

    our battlefield has become more intriguing
    so full of deception, deceit and damnation
    our ocean so immense, so complex
    as it washes all shores with litanies
    oh yes! our poems are like sea shells
    always a conch echoing in the wind of time.

    Thanx for sharing.
    Blessings.
    Leonard

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:21:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22189321 - A wise to be Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK Comment: ‘…It is said you must keep mum on certain occasion…’

    Like...wise knows when to stay mum unlike fools…again poet writes, ‘…You need not open all your cards and silently resolve…’

    A ready reckoner of ‘interpersonal-conduct-protocol’…and food for thought…but must be kept in mind and followed…but to many like dumb speaks and deaf hears lolol…

    Your poem always educative…Sir I envy your untiring effort to make our society pristine with high moral and value the ‘Values’…
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:21:00 PM)

    From : Apoet Bangla (India ;)

    To : Hasmukh Amathalal

    Date Time : 4/2/2010 6: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : RE: A live together.....

    poet, you have the inner-sight to look at the truth. This vision is very important to a poet and to an artist. This Singularity perhaps differentiate one from another. Your individual style of explaining the facts of life is interesting.
    Write more. Thank you
    prab.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:07:00 PM)

    From : Deborah Cameron (United States ;)

    To : Hasmukh Amathalal

    Date Time : 4/2/2010 1: 00: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Your poems

    Thank you for recommending your poems to me. You are a thoughtful wordsmith.

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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