Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 481,597 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2441. Courage 3/30/2015
2442. Courageous Stand 3/30/2015
2443. Miserably Fail 3/31/2015
2444. So Sorry 3/31/2015
2445. Magical Start 4/1/2015
2446. सब का सुख sabka sukh 4/2/2015
2447. Always True 4/2/2015
2448. Entire Life 4/3/2015
2449. Good Sign Or Omen 4/3/2015
2450. Bad Luck 4/4/2015
2451. Everybody Has To 4/4/2015
2452. Crimson Read 4/4/2015
2453. Gentle Blow 4/4/2015
2454. Nature Shall 4/4/2015
2455. People Together 4/5/2015
2456. With Full Care 4/5/2015
2457. Skill And Power 4/5/2015
2458. Against Wishes 4/6/2015
2459. Mogaji 4/6/2015
2460. In Mud 4/7/2015
2461. Bata De... Bata De 4/7/2015
2462. Only Mind 4/7/2015
2463. Simple Logic 4/7/2015
2464. Finest Hour 4/8/2015
2465. Truth Must Be 4/8/2015
2466. Rich Harvest 4/8/2015
2467. Old Memory 4/9/2015
2468. With Family 4/10/2015
2469. The Death Trap 4/10/2015
2470. Alteration 4/11/2015
2471. Original Smile 4/11/2015
2472. Under Fear 4/11/2015
2473. Union Shall Fade 4/16/2015
2474. Only One Single 4/16/2015
2475. Controller 4/19/2015
2476. Best Option 4/19/2015
2477. In Vicinity 4/20/2015
2478. She Never 4/20/2015
2479. Never Expect Return 4/21/2015
2480. Certainly Folly 4/23/2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/31/2010 2:11:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 5/30/2010 9: 07: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23366254 - A way to feel proud
    Member: Kaycie Cooper
    Comment: It draws a fine line for everyday fairness and equality. Your lines give you something to think about, they make me compare my own thoughts. Its a lovely read, you are a wonderful writer Hasmukh.



    Date & Time: 5/29/2010 11: 19: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23228990 - A desert ship
    Member: Ghofran Owaisheer
    Comment: i like it espacailly these two part


    The ships take us to safe end or to destiny
    It is always with the blessings from the almighty
    It is safest means to complete the journey
    It may turn tragic but remains always funny

    _______________________

    When you talk of friendship it is one kind of sacrifice
    It supplements the need or suffices
    It is blind trust and good faith
    It survives till the end of journey or death



    Date & Time: 5/29/2010 10: 42: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23168293 - A blood relation
    Member: Ramesh Adwant
    Comment: still family bond remains a complete addiction.....This addiction is the root cause of all problems. We can't give up and we can't stay together. This is the great Indian dilemma.Burying the hatchet and coming together forgetting all the differences is the only answer. A good insightful poem.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/16/2010 9:08:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 5/16/2010 2: 41: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23168293 - A blood relation
    Member: Ravi Sathasivam
    Comment: 'Brother to brother act as sworn enemy
    The relation goes on vane simply for money
    Parents watch helplessly and condemn the move
    They often curse the luck but unable to prove..'
    That's true. Well said.
    Nice poem
    Thanks for sharing with me



    Date & Time: 5/16/2010 1: 07: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23168293 - A blood relation
    Member: Apoet Bangla
    Comment: Yes, All get united when it is felt for a moment. You have told the general truths of our family bonds poetically. Scenario yet changes and the relations also vary in different classes. The values in the class-devided societies become different where money plays the king-role to make relations as commodity.
    You have, anyway painted the relations which we dream as human being in our human civilization.
    Write more poet, Live long..

    Regards,
    pranab

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/13/2010 10:01:00 PM)

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    Poem: 23133034 - A simple message
    Member: Lalitha Iyer

    Comment: what you echo was written by invisible hands
    into your heart by his own hands;
    what you see is only paintings
    which he left behind your livings;
    what you write is only the bits
    which the maker threw off
    to begging earth's aching wits..........

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/11/2010 10:55:00 PM)

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    Poem: 23113461 - Sincere prayers
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: God will definitely answer your sincere prayers one day, I am sure.



    Date & Time: 5/11/2010 9: 48: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23108631 - Air the love
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: So much is said about love, after reading this one must begin to love every creature in the world, for the reason 'Hatred begets hatred, love begets love: .

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/5/2010 8:11:00 PM)

    Re: Sixth ton
    by MoonStar Rose » Sat May 01,2010 12: 04 pm
    Re: Sixth ton

    Jadia all have words that we put forward and wonder on how it will be received by our fellow peers. You have the words of a true thinker. A poet with a heart that is vast and open as the sea. Your imagery carries us along so many places and sights and I am so thankful that you come forward and bring all you do, for it is a great joy to set my eyes upon such beauty..

    Thank you for being YOU!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/5/2010 5:16:00 AM)

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    Poem: 22849007 - At the top
    Member: Venkat Ramanna

    Comment: How do you feel at the top of the ladder?
    You may look happy with enough money as trader
    Fortune smiles with top slot in the ministry as leader
    Good contracts and successful planner as bidder...... must be unique one with satisfaction, , , , ,10





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    Poem: 17423284 - Mary to merry
    Member: Erica Santana

    Comment: Great poem it really describes what a woman thinks about when she is about to get married
    I give it a 10





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    Poem: 18451154 - Humble submission
    Member: Erica Santana

    Comment: The imagery is really great I can totally picture my self in the poem





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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Mahanish Jung Thapa

    Comment: in this post-modernism era most poems are in abstract form but simplicity and clarity counts for me and that's the best part of your poem'abhi to main jawan hoon' haha....

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/3/2010 7:53:00 PM)

    satish kumar..
    we can not describing of thes poem wat's wonderfull use a word in this poem
    have a nice day!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/3/2010 7:52:00 PM)

    Dear Mr.Hasmukh, ........Excellent poem........after reading your poem I just remember the quote of Sharon Doubiago...'My mother is a poem I'll never be able to write, though everything I write is a poem to my mother.....With love, light and peace.......Virendra Aswal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2010 8:40:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22929346 - A welcome change
    Member: warner treuter

    Comment: It's true you use an abundance of words, but then you have a lot to say. Actually a bit of an overload for most of us in thought, but your poetry, I believe, lies more in the melody and harmony than in any particular theme. It would not surprise me if you were a musician as well as a poet.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2010 9:06:00 AM)

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    Poem: 22921848 - A difficult separation
    Member: Seema Chowdhury

    Comment: sir,
    this is such a nice poem full of emotions and realities. your wife should be very proud of you and herself. while reading this beautiful poem, i could see the tenderness flowing through each word smoothly. very well written and well composed poem. thanks for sharing.

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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