Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 673,593 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2481. No Sugar Coat 2/20/2013
2482. In Hurry 2/20/2013
2483. Her Voice Echoes 2/18/2013
2484. Internet World 2/21/2013
2485. In Bomb Blast 2/23/2013
2486. Pushed To Corner 3/7/2013
2487. Somewhere 3/8/2013
2488. Forget Self Interest 3/9/2013
2489. Poets Are Crazy Lovers 3/10/2013
2490. I Drove 3/7/2013
2491. Passionate Love 3/11/2013
2492. Souham 3/15/2013
2493. Even If You 3/18/2013
2494. Lathi Or Goloyaa 3/19/2013
2495. Mukh Sakshi 3/19/2013
2496. Achieve The Best 3/20/2013
2497. कभी न छोड़ना.. kabhi n chhodna 3/20/2013
2498. I Did Not Believe 4/24/2013
2499. So Do I Say 4/24/2013
2500. Except To Adore 4/27/2013
2501. Yet To Feel 4/27/2013
2502. Milky Way 4/26/2013
2503. In Their Heart 4/26/2013
2504. Poet Of The Month 4/28/2013
2505. Prefer The Journey 4/30/2013
2506. At The Point Of The Gun 5/2/2013
2507. Selfless Dedicaion 5/7/2013
2508. Try 5/7/2013
2509. No To Her Death 5/7/2013
2510. Would Love To Stay 5/7/2013
2511. Happy Marriage Anniversary 5/7/2013
2512. If Desired 5/7/2013
2513. Raise Head 5/2/2013
2514. Your Birhday 5/4/2013
2515. Respect 5/10/2013
2516. Ordinary Thoughts 5/10/2013
2517. Time 5/14/2013
2518. Same Environment 5/14/2013
2519. Grandma's Death 5/14/2013
2520. My Dream 5/17/2013

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2010 7:58:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/18/2010 9: 05: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23569344 - A direct attack
    Member: Swatimalya Chattopadhyay
    Comment: I was just thinking of writing a poem on global warming, Hasmukh overtook me.I was cut off from the site for quite some time and am astonished to find you have crossed 700 poems.HEARTIEST CONGRATS.My knowledge was upto your crossing 300, this is really commendable.

    The poem is very contemporary under the scorching heat prevailing for quite some time.It is well thought out.Your rhyming is always excellent.The poem reflects your enlightenment of the pertinent information and has beautifully portrayed the world bereft of soft, wet touch of the nature.I give secret voting, but of late voting no.is always slipping away.So your open vote is ten out of ten, a well deserved score.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2010 8:17:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/17/2010 11: 06: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23598370 - A change that was never
    Member: Rafique Farooqi
    Comment: simply... changes we face in our life are unavoidable, and these never in our control, and finally we find ourselves bare handed

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/16/2010 8:01:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/16/2010 11: 00: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23540272 - A bye gone is bye gone
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘It may be of no use if we lament for past and repeat same in present’…

    If stay in past and future the present we’ll loose…

    Swami Vivekananda affirmed us ‘A saint had a past and a sinner has a future’

    You’ve encouraged us to Vedic chat Charaivati [march onward] …by the way it is said that natural forgetting is but a catharsis…a vent to protect us a safety valve…

    Excellent poetry and a psychic booster and remembrencer
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10

    PS Sir with humility may I request you to delet a commentless post below mine...as I respect you so saying Sir

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/15/2010 10:37:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/15/2010 9: 53: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23475251 - A change at the end
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: I can understand why poeple can change at the end. Actually they did not change but they just revealed what is truly they are. human can not never expect anything to be the same forever and last long. Time, situation and necessity will provokes changes but the choice is open; either to be ourself or to please someone else. Both ways; there are colateral and stakes to be considered before we use our freedom of choice to make decision.
    very intense of inner and self questioning poem. very well done.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/15/2010 8:03:00 PM)

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    Poem: 23555866 - A barren way
    Member: Apoet Bangla

    Comment: So long you write with rhythm! Perhaps many of your writing is such. Run poet, run long. You have good wishes to make the earth a place as heaven. Your fight is why so tough. But you have to move forward as long as you can. In this writing also reflects your philosophy. Well, write more, live long.......

    Regards,
    Apoet

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/11/2010 6:13:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/11/2010 1: 12: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23514995 - A life is circus
    Member: Almedia Knight
    Comment: A poem of truth. 'A Life Is A Circus'...our experiences in life are played out on life's stage [ another way to put it]; we're the actors [players] our roles change when we change characters. I like the freshness of your title and the images and descriptions. Thanks for sharing. { can't vote} but I say this is 10++++



    Date & Time: 6/11/2010 8: 42: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23520377 - A strong will power
    Member: JOSEPH POEWHIT
    Comment: Reminded me of THE PETERS PRINCIPLE a book of reaching incompetency



    Date & Time: 6/11/2010 8: 31: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23365932 - A beautiful song
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: Sure Sir…’Vande Mataram’…’Jana Gana Mana... ‘’Sare Janshe Achha’……all hike patriotic adrenaline but no never fanatism…chauvinism is condemnable…

    My countries National Anthem…flowething in my blood…my National Flag fluttering my heart
    Very moving poem…Sir may I request you to write one on National Flag of my great country India...
    Ms. Nivedita

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2010 4:23:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/9/2010 3: 10: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23486084 - A Kidda is cat
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: this is nice dedication to my kida...my gosh..how i wish, he will not die..everybody loves him..even neighbors, love him too..as if i am not a successful veterinarian if i cant heal kida..coz he is our only pet here..i'll wake up in between hours at evening just to let him drink milk..and in the morning, i wrapped him a blanket and bath in the sun..but even fish he didnt eat..my gosh, only milk he want to take..i may buy pediasure so that he can recover fast, , but i dont know if he can still make it...but i am so sad, might he will die..accdg to ian, kida is old already but he is 3 years old..so, i dont know if its a sign of old age...i let him take amoxicillin 250 mg a day..hope this will work...i want to see him run and play..u know, its a grerat problem if classes will start..i cant go to work if kida is still sick..coz no one will take care for him, who will give water and milk...of course, i cant bring him to farm and office...so, thats a big problem now...and my goshhhh, ...i am thankful that u made a poem for kida..i am very proud of it...

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/8/2010 10:43:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22503984 - An open invitation
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK

    Comment: ‘Show me single place where you feel I am absent? ’…Omnipresent…

    ‘Come to me o, sons and daughters for simple salvation’…Omnipotent…Giver of salvation

    Excellent Poetry on God…Wahooo….

    Swambhabani Yoge … Yoge… Yoge ~ Gita

    Thanks Uncle for such a ‘Glory-Unto-God’ poetry

    10//10 ~ Well vote for the hallowed readers of this poetry
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/6/2010 7:50:00 PM)

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    Poem: 23434357 - A free advice
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK

    Comment: UWPRR [Un Wanted Pseudo Ready Reckoner] are of zero value…

    ‘Leaders are not crated over night…’ indeed so…reminds me Swami Vivekananda’s saying ‘first be a servant then expect to be a leader. ‘…Very much contemplative poetry Sir

    ‘It is said world can be made to bend/You act in good manner…’ wisely …prudent
    10//10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/5/2010 7:10:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/5/2010 8: 27: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23356525 - A dark clouds
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: 'Life can’t be shaped at the point of gun'
    { only who can understand beyond their need or fear can accept the karma, cycle of destiny and no body can force or make it happen without The Almighty permission}
    i really apprecieted your poem as it is at it's own class and it's for human to think more than what they see.
    Thanks

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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