Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 673,593 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2521. My Dream 5/17/2013
2522. Love Must Be Felt 5/16/2013
2523. Not To Alter 5/17/2013
2524. No Holiday 5/18/2013
2525. Humane 5/20/2013
2526. Without Guilt 6/19/2013
2527. Welcome Enjoy And Greet 6/24/2013
2528. Idiot's Tale 6/25/2013
2529. Imagery Person 6/26/2013
2530. No Sound Sleep 6/27/2013
2531. As Proud Cover 6/28/2013
2532. Bare Facts 7/9/2013
2533. प्रेम का इतिहास...Premka Itiihaas 7/11/2013
2534. विहार करने दे मान्यवर.. vihaar karne 7/12/2013
2535. उत्तम मरना भी...uttam marna 7/14/2013
2536. Peace On 7/17/2013
2537. काहेका कोई खेरखा है Kaheka koi 7/20/2013
2538. अपने हाथों से ही बुझाते हो...Apne hathose 7/21/2013
2539. भुला नहीं कहते.. bhula nahi kehta 7/24/2013
2540. पियु मारो गयो परदेस..piyu maro gayo 7/24/2013
2541. આજ છે સત્ય Aaj Chhe Satya 7/25/2013
2542. Feel Closely 6/22/2013
2543. About Tomorrow 7/27/2013
2544. अपना ही फ़साना.. apna hi 7/28/2013
2545. मै वो नहीं....me vo nahi 7/28/2013
2546. As Chance 7/27/2013
2547. jab khud hi... जब खूद ही पछतायेगा 7/26/2013
2548. बस भावना हो... Bas Bhavna Ho 7/26/2013
2549. धनी और बडभागी, , dhani or badbhagi 7/29/2013
2550. पर लाज तुही रखना.. par laaj tuhi 8/6/2013
2551. क्या मिला आपको ... kya milaa 8/11/2013
2552. जी छोटा ना करना.. Ji Chhoa Na Karna 8/14/2013
2553. भय पैदा करेंगे दिलो में .. Bhay Peda Karenge 8/15/2013
2554. Keep Smile On Face 8/19/2013
2555. Holy Thread 8/19/2013
2556. मजबूर तो नहीं थे majboor to nahi 8/20/2013
2557. Good Flavor 8/22/2013
2558. काश हम रो ही पाते, , kaash ham 8/24/2013
2559. में दोहराता जाउंगा.. me dohraata 8/25/2013
2560. Television Shows 8/28/2013

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/5/2010 7:10:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/5/2010 8: 27: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23356525 - A dark clouds
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: 'Life can’t be shaped at the point of gun'
    { only who can understand beyond their need or fear can accept the karma, cycle of destiny and no body can force or make it happen without The Almighty permission}
    i really apprecieted your poem as it is at it's own class and it's for human to think more than what they see.
    Thanks

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/3/2010 9:03:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/3/2010 6: 56: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23405423 - A noble friend
    Member: Aira Olayvar
    Comment: This poem is full of meaning, I really caught with this:

    “Many friends may suggest to go to bar
    Long highway race in speeding car
    Such friends deserve complete bar
    Real friend remains very far.”

    Sometimes, actually, for the search of companionship, we are resorting to friendship, yet by far, we always end up hurting ourselves for trusting most of those we call a friend. Traitors usually come in the middle of this people. The better way we can do is to first make friends with ourselves if we are able to do that, harmony and peace will follow. No man is an island I know… but first, we must make it ourselves and then attracted the real friends. (Noble ones!)

    :)



    Date & Time: 6/3/2010 6: 48: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23394130 - A blood hots up
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: Terrorism [in the name of religion ethnicity, race, skin color economics &c] well poemed…why so much shed of blood?

    Are we civilized? Or,
    ‘Civilized Ignorant’ fanatic….

    You’ve hammered the brain of civil society me…to ponder…

    How to get out? You’ve prescribed, ‘I want to give message of peace/abhor the violence…’

    ]Will it reach to dead and silenced heart…I don’t say ear…
    10/10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/2/2010 12:12:00 PM)

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    Poem: 23394130 - A blood hots up
    Member: Aira Olayvar

    Comment: To sit together and bring an end to bloodshed, it sounds easy yeah? But it is very impossible. Well, hopefully, who knows…?

    Let’s just pray… it is really a heart-ache my friend.





    Date & Time: 6/2/2010 8: 10: 00 AM Remove this comment


    Poem: 23365932 - A beautiful song
    Member: Aira Olayvar

    Comment: “Basically human beings are social animals
    They may react lately and wait for catastrophes arrival
    It is human weakness and can’t be remedied
    It has to be given importance and studied”

    This poem indeed is very meaningful, seriously speaking; it tackles just what’s the hottest issue of this days. Though, I actually could not think of humans as animals, yet it’s true, humans are social beings, having different mind-sets, principles and beliefs and that most-often times is the same reason why we’re the once that causes the conflicts.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2010 9:51:00 PM)

    Oh I so like Graham's wonderful interpretation of this piece! I totally agree Jadia. Your pieces hold such a wonderful insight and are so inspirational, that it sometimes takes my breath away.. Keep that pen flowing my friend..


    Hugs,
    Moonie xx: friends: : friends:

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2010 9:50:00 PM)

    Re: An innovative way

    You have an insight sir of which many ignore, we may abuse our minds with little effect but to abuse our bodies is a quick step to demise, be kind to both body and mind and we will live longer and enjoy more of the fruits of life that it has to offer~Graham.


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    Mon May 31,2010 10: 58 pm

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2010 9:49:00 PM)

    Re: An innovative way

    You have an insight sir of which many ignore, we may abuse our minds with little effect but to abuse our bodies is a quick step to demise, be kind to both body and mind and we will live longer and enjoy more of the fruits of life that it has to offer~Graham.


    © penfold18

    Mon May 31,2010 10: 58 pm

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2010 9:48:00 PM)

    Re: Last leg

    Sometimes the last journet is so painful and slow that it breaks those who love the dyings hearts..It is not simple to lay to rest a parent or family member..The thing is to let them know how much they mean to you every day of their lives..while they are still with us..I hate cemetarys..lol and God bless..Kathie


    © Valentine

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2010 2:12:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/1/2010 2: 05: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23310111 - A death gap
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘The death binds people together and makes them believe in religion ‘

    Uncle death makes us in Universal One…dead body is of every ‘less’ where religion ethnicity culture profession race color of skin &c are dissolved and makes us One Kin

    Death is inevitable so accept it as it comes…no way out…one can’t wrestle with one’s shadow very wisely you’ve given that wake up call and mature and contemplative stuff
    10/10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK



    Date & Time: 5/31/2010 10: 38: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18648218 - Sky is falling
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: this is very clear that your poem based on what is the essence of human and world. you manage to bring it into words which understandable and deeper meaning for people who can read beyond sentence.



    Date & Time: 5/31/2010 10: 30: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23113461 - Sincere prayers
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: i almost cry when reading the poem, emotion and devotion almost bring me back to reality.
    it's really contribute to my unpeace heart and i find it leading my burden to a lighter road and thanks for sincere poem.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/31/2010 2:11:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 5/30/2010 9: 07: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23366254 - A way to feel proud
    Member: Kaycie Cooper
    Comment: It draws a fine line for everyday fairness and equality. Your lines give you something to think about, they make me compare my own thoughts. Its a lovely read, you are a wonderful writer Hasmukh.



    Date & Time: 5/29/2010 11: 19: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23228990 - A desert ship
    Member: Ghofran Owaisheer
    Comment: i like it espacailly these two part


    The ships take us to safe end or to destiny
    It is always with the blessings from the almighty
    It is safest means to complete the journey
    It may turn tragic but remains always funny

    _______________________

    When you talk of friendship it is one kind of sacrifice
    It supplements the need or suffices
    It is blind trust and good faith
    It survives till the end of journey or death



    Date & Time: 5/29/2010 10: 42: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23168293 - A blood relation
    Member: Ramesh Adwant
    Comment: still family bond remains a complete addiction.....This addiction is the root cause of all problems. We can't give up and we can't stay together. This is the great Indian dilemma.Burying the hatchet and coming together forgetting all the differences is the only answer. A good insightful poem.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/16/2010 9:08:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 5/16/2010 2: 41: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23168293 - A blood relation
    Member: Ravi Sathasivam
    Comment: 'Brother to brother act as sworn enemy
    The relation goes on vane simply for money
    Parents watch helplessly and condemn the move
    They often curse the luck but unable to prove..'
    That's true. Well said.
    Nice poem
    Thanks for sharing with me



    Date & Time: 5/16/2010 1: 07: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23168293 - A blood relation
    Member: Apoet Bangla
    Comment: Yes, All get united when it is felt for a moment. You have told the general truths of our family bonds poetically. Scenario yet changes and the relations also vary in different classes. The values in the class-devided societies become different where money plays the king-role to make relations as commodity.
    You have, anyway painted the relations which we dream as human being in our human civilization.
    Write more poet, Live long..

    Regards,
    pranab

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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