Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 439,473 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2521. Found The Way 5/27/2015
2522. With Fresh Breathe 5/28/2015
2523. With Questions No More 5/28/2015
2524. Cheerfully Share 5/28/2015
2525. With Final Call 5/31/2015
2526. Ring In Ears Again 6/1/2015
2527. So Much Concern 6/2/2015
2528. And Nobility 6/3/2015
2529. Sake Of Suprmacy 6/4/2015
2530. An Ignition Key 6/4/2015
2531. Always Rejoice 6/4/2015
2532. Bow Down Again 6/4/2015
2533. The Poor Suffers 6/5/2015
2534. And Thunder 6/6/2015
2535. It Is State Of Mind 6/6/2015
2536. Try Not To Know 6/11/2015
2537. Good Start With 6/11/2015
2538. Shall Obey 6/11/2015
2539. At This End 6/12/2015
2540. People And World 6/12/2015
2541. Parade On Donkey 6/14/2015
2542. With So Much 6/14/2015
2543. Not Necessary At All 6/15/2015
2544. In His Possession 6/18/2015
2545. The Message Of Love 6/18/2015
2546. The Message Of Love And Peace 6/18/2015
2547. Man Is No Liabiliy 6/20/2015
2548. No Hate 6/22/2015
2549. On Maggie Food 6/24/2015
2550. Into Good Will 6/25/2015
2551. Reach Daily 6/26/2015
2552. Do Not Present 6/26/2015
2553. Harp, On 6/27/2015
2554. With Cheerfulness 6/28/2015
2555. Think For A While 7/1/2015
2556. Some Influence 7/3/2015
2557. Mass Annihilation 7/3/2015
2558. No Birds Around 7/3/2015
2559. When Things 7/3/2015
2560. The Menace 7/3/2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2010 5:29:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 3/18/2010 7: 36: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21874612 - A different challenge
    Member: Will F. D. Blackman
    Comment: I liked the way you built on the notes
    played from line to line. Not all storytellers
    are poets but all poets are storytellers.
    A very fine job telling this one.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/17/2010 8:24:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 3/17/2010 8: 22: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21874612 - A different challenge
    Member: Sridevi Datta
    Comment: Don’t cry for somebody’s action and fault
    It might have been insult and somersault
    You got to forget and brace for new lease of life
    You may prove very good mother and honored wife
    yes....at some point of time...we need to put our past behind us and stop blaming ourselves...that will liberate us in the real sense.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/14/2010 11:52:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 3/11/2010 7: 06: 00 AM
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    Poem: 18181249 - Anywhere you like
    Member: Adnan Khalifeh
    Comment: Nice one........I like most of it........Especially:
    We exchanged so many pleasantries,
    No distance seemed between ocean and countries,
    Neither mountains, hills nor any boundaries,
    Eyes met and said to one another,
    Was it not necessary before we marry?
    He was hesitant for slight moment,
    I offered my self for holy deal,
    I was there for his wounds to heal,
    With only condition for him to be real,
    Waited for approval for the final seal
    ...................
    Yours truly,
    Adnan

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/14/2010 11:51:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 3/11/2010 8: 49: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21725273 - A 500th poem
    Member: John Knight
    Comment: Hi Hasmukh - Well done! ! 500 is a big bench mark - never attained in age but in some thinga attainable - 500 runs in cricket - 500 postage stamps in an album - 500 paintings and for some 5oo poems. But how - you ask - is this possible. Your own creative brain - yes - but also the one who held you - your family - your friends - you readers - your commentaters and last but not least GOD (V 7) . Without God we are nothing and can achieve nothing. I like the linguistic structure and the rhyme and the rhythm. The first six verses look back and the second six look forward to the 1000th. To continue (V 8) to flow freely (V 9) to find space
    (V 10) to strive hard (V 11) and to go with the natural flow (V 12) . Thanks for sharing - yours in Poetry - JOHN

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/14/2010 11:48:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 3/12/2010 3: 12: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21792387 - A Divine motherhood
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘Purtarthe Kryote Bharga’ [to get child men make wife] … as scripture says …

    Hindus believe... ‘Putt’ named door [in celestial journey of Atman] can’t be crossed unless posthumous rite done by Atmaja [comes from 2 souls] … to reach ones earned destination...

    The child born out of pure lust its called ‘Lustchild’ [LuC]… when it comes out of love its called ‘Lovechild’ [LoC]… may seem funny and bizarre how minus lust.how.. reproduction can be done…?

    It too answered in our scripture after becoming Awakened one if want carry forward the progeny [‘Purtarthe Kryote Bharga’] the sloka becomes contextually perfect …

    Life pattern and society have rolled like snow ball and become voluminous with relevancy befitting in a spatial way… various rules postulations..

    You’re poetry seems to me about ‘LoC …. To fillup the women with the joy of Motherhoodness [the final culmination] with minus lust have a child…

    Best facevalue of a woman found when she is breastfeeding her child…indeed … serene utopia … I’ve never seen such facevalue in any picture [even in most romantic] ….

    Our scripture cautioned us LoC born with high value… attributes but LuC … much much below and farrrrrrrrrrrrrr

    In Satya Yuga …. Average lifespan was about ten thousand years because of high quality [attributes values] population…and in Kali Yuga it has dwindled to about 100-125 years…

    10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

    PS: ‘…It was no game of love or hate but simple act to react…’
    I humbly agree to disagree to this line Sir excuse me … it’ll give birth to Reactive Child [RC]..lolol... eclipsed out...
    n

  • Leila Taghavi (3/11/2010 5:04:00 AM)

    Yes, we should be realistic. Thanks for your poem.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/23/2010 6:09:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/23/2010 2: 16: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21552083 - Child abuse
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: Hmmm Human Rights! ! ...Is Phonic diarrhea! Conceptual Conception? [taking from my father’s poetry]…what you say as lip service...

    The most interesting point you wrote: ‘Why it is that flower which should see light of the day is simply crushed?

    This reminds me great essayist Sd. Mujtasba Ali [in Bengali] wrote we love children do we cut their head and décor vase? Why in flower we do it?


    A humane write for Human Rights scholastic indeed...
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2010 10:06:00 PM)

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    Poem: 21421052 - Diamonds are forever
    Member: John Knight

    Comment: Hi Hasmukh - Theis is a megapoem with very good rhytm and rhyme. I has good flow. V 1 Diamonds are a condensed form of carbon and are valuable because of their rarity - hardness - durability and lustre. It is magic jewel that has dazzled Kings - Knights - Knaves throughout human history. V 2 Diamonds represent wealth and stability and they are the greatest symbol of love between a man and a woman. V 3 Ladies are like diamonds - priceless and multifaceted. V 4 They glow with an inner light. V 5 Jewellry crafted with daimonds is always beautiful and alwys fashionable. V 6 Each diamomnd - like each lady - have an intrinsic beauty nothing can mar. V 7 Diamond is the hardest substance known to man. The moral is: Never mess witha woman! V 8 Never underestimate a woman - like a diamomnd her value increases day by day. An older woman brings experience to all circumastances! V 9 The depth of fire - in a diamond - is unfathamable. Likewise the depth of love and devotion is infinite compared with man's shallowness. V 10 Men forget and eliminate but (V 11) Ladies remember everything - know everything - can do everything - like diamonds their love and devotion is forever. God created Adam first - he looked at the product - rechecked and revised His blueprint and created woman - PERFECTION. Thanks for sharing - Yours in Poetry - JOHN.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2010 10:04:00 PM)

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    Poem: 21421052 - Diamonds are forever
    Member: Joey Valenzuela

    Comment: wow...this can be a best letter to friend....a promise that freindship will never end...the value of friendship is priceless and is never changing....

    i was so pleased you invited me to read this brightest piece....

    and another one...diamond cant be created..its natural and so is friendship...
    i should have told my friends that they are diamonds....

    thanks for this....

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2010 8:10:00 AM)

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    Poem: 21085528 - What is it to me
    Member: Pratheek Praveen Kumar

    Comment: 'Life is full circle journey to be carried on
    With half hearted attempt no battle can be won'
    - 'What is it to me'.

    Very poetic and pregnant with insight.
    .
    I read your all 459 poems and enjoyed them all,
    but ones like 'What is it to me' stand out for
    their wonderful expressions.

    Also appreciated your charming expressions deep
    from heart in 'Sister-in-law'. Truly revealing and
    enjoyable. Let god give you good luck with your
    sisters-in-law. Good luck.

    - PRATHEEK PRAVEEN KUMAR

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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