Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 673,593 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2561. चकनाचूर हो जाएगा chaknachur 9/1/2013
2562. आप ही बताये, , AAP HI BATAYE 9/3/2013
2563. मेरे ही दिलका मतवाला Mere Hi Dilka 9/6/2013
2564. Go Ahead 9/8/2013
2565. जबान बंद क्यों है आज तुम्हारी jaban kyo 9/9/2013
2566. Capable And Wise 9/9/2013
2567. No Joke Or Fun 9/9/2013
2568. Away 5/21/2013
2569. Must Be Blown 5/19/2013
2570. I Am Called River 9/12/2013
2571. Her Honor 9/13/2013
2572. In Orderly Way 9/16/2013
2573. All Ready And Set 9/13/2013
2574. Late To Catch 5/8/2013
2575. Happiness 5/8/2013
2576. Not The Strong 5/5/2013
2577. Prefer Journey 4/30/2013
2578. How Best We Can 9/22/2013
2579. Past Days Are Means 9/22/2013
2580. Senru 9/29/2013
2581. Sky Is.... 9/28/2013
2582. I Shall Win Over 10/13/2013
2583. We Are Duty Bound 10/14/2013
2584. In Their Company And 11/7/2013
2585. Natural Rule Of Law 11/9/2013
2586. Love Words 11/11/2013
2587. Common Bond 11/13/2013
2588. Think Of Life 11/16/2013
2589. Nights Did Bother 11/28/2013
2590. One More Day 12/3/2013
2591. Life May Stay 12/6/2013
2592. Love For Peace 12/10/2013
2593. Keep No Fear 12/10/2013
2594. Less Hard Work 12/13/2013
2595. For Human Relation 12/13/2013
2596. Feel The Fragrance 12/16/2013
2597. Long Night 12/16/2013
2598. New Hope For Relation 12/29/2013
2599. On No Paper 1/1/2014
2600. New Bottle 1/4/2014

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/11/2010 10:55:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 5/11/2010 9: 52: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23113461 - Sincere prayers
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: God will definitely answer your sincere prayers one day, I am sure.



    Date & Time: 5/11/2010 9: 48: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23108631 - Air the love
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: So much is said about love, after reading this one must begin to love every creature in the world, for the reason 'Hatred begets hatred, love begets love: .

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/5/2010 8:11:00 PM)

    Re: Sixth ton
    by MoonStar Rose » Sat May 01,2010 12: 04 pm
    Re: Sixth ton

    Jadia all have words that we put forward and wonder on how it will be received by our fellow peers. You have the words of a true thinker. A poet with a heart that is vast and open as the sea. Your imagery carries us along so many places and sights and I am so thankful that you come forward and bring all you do, for it is a great joy to set my eyes upon such beauty..

    Thank you for being YOU!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/5/2010 5:16:00 AM)

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    Poem: 22849007 - At the top
    Member: Venkat Ramanna

    Comment: How do you feel at the top of the ladder?
    You may look happy with enough money as trader
    Fortune smiles with top slot in the ministry as leader
    Good contracts and successful planner as bidder...... must be unique one with satisfaction, , , , ,10





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    Poem: 17423284 - Mary to merry
    Member: Erica Santana

    Comment: Great poem it really describes what a woman thinks about when she is about to get married
    I give it a 10





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    Poem: 18451154 - Humble submission
    Member: Erica Santana

    Comment: The imagery is really great I can totally picture my self in the poem





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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Mahanish Jung Thapa

    Comment: in this post-modernism era most poems are in abstract form but simplicity and clarity counts for me and that's the best part of your poem'abhi to main jawan hoon' haha....

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/3/2010 7:53:00 PM)

    satish kumar..
    we can not describing of thes poem wat's wonderfull use a word in this poem
    have a nice day!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/3/2010 7:52:00 PM)

    Dear Mr.Hasmukh, ........Excellent poem........after reading your poem I just remember the quote of Sharon Doubiago...'My mother is a poem I'll never be able to write, though everything I write is a poem to my mother.....With love, light and peace.......Virendra Aswal

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2010 8:40:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22929346 - A welcome change
    Member: warner treuter

    Comment: It's true you use an abundance of words, but then you have a lot to say. Actually a bit of an overload for most of us in thought, but your poetry, I believe, lies more in the melody and harmony than in any particular theme. It would not surprise me if you were a musician as well as a poet.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2010 9:06:00 AM)

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    Poem: 22921848 - A difficult separation
    Member: Seema Chowdhury

    Comment: sir,
    this is such a nice poem full of emotions and realities. your wife should be very proud of you and herself. while reading this beautiful poem, i could see the tenderness flowing through each word smoothly. very well written and well composed poem. thanks for sharing.

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  • Naomi De'Luca (4/19/2010 5:23:00 PM)

    Simply riveting! I had to read more of your verses!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/19/2010 7:42:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 4/18/2010 11: 20: 00 PM
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    Poem: 22249305 - A day to start with....
    Member: Jordan Legaspi
    Comment: Nature never deserts us and offer fine place
    How easily we can forget and replace?
    We can act thankless and invite the wrath
    It is one step away from loosing faith

    Nice poem it deals with human nature actaully -the many facets of our character, human being.
    and this verse, to me served as the focal point of the whole poem...the question on what we are doing to our 'mother earth', thus, the reality of pain and sorrow and all the unpleasant realities in our world is the cause of our human tendencies.

    all the best

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2010 10:29:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22693665 - A clear emotions
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen

    Comment: A very clever play of emotions in this poem. It's like battling with the rhyme and rhythm to maintain a sober climax in its flow. I almost wanted to take each first line in the poem to create another emotional rush.....must say it's a good read.
    Thanks for sharing.

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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