Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 465,829 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2601. An Uncertain Stage 9/27/2010
2602. A Sahar, Sahar, Sahar 9/28/2010
2603. A Long Forty Years 9/28/2010
2604. A Love To Beat 9/29/2010
2605. A Rise To Top 9/29/2010
2606. A Good To Say 9/29/2010
2607. A Worth Treasure 9/29/2010
2608. A No To Look Back 9/29/2010
2609. A Wish To Talk 9/29/2010
2610. A Noble Part 9/30/2010
2611. A Months And Years 9/30/2010
2612. A Life So Colorful 9/30/2010
2613. O, My Lord 10/1/2010
2614. A Grace And Pity 10/1/2010
2615. A Pulse From Heart 10/2/2010
2616. It Is You 10/3/2010
2617. I Am Still A Boy 10/4/2010
2618. Not Yet Over 10/4/2010
2619. One Stone Two Birds 10/5/2010
2620. No, Never 10/5/2010
2621. A Faith And Truth 10/5/2010
2622. A Hold Not Firm 10/6/2010
2623. Why Do I Hate? 10/9/2010
2624. A Freedom Is Won 10/9/2010
2625. A Worth Living 10/9/2010
2626. A Shot In Air 10/9/2010
2627. A Next Uncertainty 10/9/2010
2628. A Time And Wounds 10/9/2010
2629. No Appearance 10/9/2010
2630. A Hold Back 10/10/2010
2631. A Way Of Living 10/10/2010
2632. A Pain For Birth 10/11/2010
2633. A Cry From Poor 10/11/2010
2634. A New Concept 10/11/2010
2635. A Democracy Not Alone 10/12/2010
2636. A Crazy Look 10/12/2010
2637. A Wild Life 10/13/2010
2638. Always Miss Me 10/13/2010
2639. A Real Peace 10/13/2010
2640. A Life Called Bubble 10/13/2010

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/28/2010 11:13:00 AM)

    From : Vp Ramesan (India ;)
    To : Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time : 1/27/2010 11: 29: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : comments

    Dear Hasmukh,

    Your concern for the Mother's womb you have to be answered by men all over the world. When religions all over the world chain the women and put her under the yoke of slavery and she is treated as a commodity to passify the lust of men there will be no end to her ordeals. You might have read the news that a sixteen year old girl from Bangladesh was impregnated my a man under the pretext that he will marry her. He was twenty. The village panchayat convened a meeting and slapped the punishment of 101 lashes by whip and threatened her family of being declared out caste and even expelled from the village in case the family is not amenable to the corporal punishment ordered by the Panchayat. The young man, the ravisher, was left scot-free. This is the very same situation in India there is a written constitution under which there is a legal system and Judiciary. Yet the politicians shut there eyes towards such heinous crimes against women. I exhort you gentle man to react sharply to such social evils emanated from religion. Congrats. I vote ten marks for you. Please visit my poems and offer me support with votes.

    Poet V.P.RAMESAN

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2010 5:27:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 1/26/2010 8: 53: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21165338 - Joint family
    Member: Indira Renganathan
    Comment: Hats off to you Hasmukh...no one can beat you...excellent

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/25/2010 7:57:00 PM)

    Divorce has happened over just this very thing, Jadia, often! My mother once told my husband, NEVER stop dating your wife. When we're dating we see only the best of one another. Once the wooing is done and the vows said, the real person shines through. There's no more courtship that once made everything so much fun. It becomes too routine, and soon it depresses men and women to see where they are in life.
    Sure-fire way to keep spark and happiness is to always be aware of the emotions of one another and to always be respectful of those...
    This is a wonderful write of one that has a second chance...
    Enjoyed this!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/24/2010 6:09:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/23/2010 9: 02: 00 PM

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    Poem: 19017989 - Simple grace
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: Women are generally kind and very tolerant
    They remain very pleasant with quality inherent
    It is their powerful weapon and very essential
    To prove its worth with element so substantial

    your words describe us the best. so good to know that in this chauvinist world there exists a man who not only admits but appreciates a woman's beauty, lovely and eternal.10++++

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/23/2010 9:31:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 1/23/2010 7: 21: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21096246 - Woman's womb
    Member: Indira Renganathan
    Comment: Hasmukh, you are the best son of the Goddess of genesis....endless times I bow to you....with lots of thanks lots of 10s

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/23/2010 9:28:00 AM)

    te & Time: 1/23/2010 7: 23: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21121339 - Haiti
    Member: Merna Ibrahim
    Comment: Actually the human beings polluted and destroyed the nature, so we must protect the good left part and fix the bad part, like that we will build a foundation for a better future and for the next generations.According to the natural phenomenons, God'Almighty' is only the one who can control this affair.So God help them and forgive all of us...
    A long poem but it is really good and involves a strong and crucial messages..Merna

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/20/2010 10:32:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/20/2010 10: 24: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20958338 - Pleasantry exchanges
    Member: Antonio Liao
    Comment: If only the world will only listen and read this poem.....the fume of fire
    in every heart lost its scent...and the greed of power loosen its mind, down
    to emptiness of the soul.....prayer and wish this poem will be gone to every
    one's thirst of nothingness....God bless...a 10 Star of all poems...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/20/2010 1:58:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 1/19/2010 11: 49: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21085528 - What is it to me
    Member: Yacov Mitchenko
    Comment: Actually, I enjoyed this poem more than most of your others. It is clearer, more focused, and the development of ideas is smoother. There's improvement in grammar and syntax. Yes, we need to walk alone and leave this earth a little more beautiful than it was without us. We need to proceed with the utmost passion and dedication, regardless of how well our efforts are received by others. Generally, the nobler the cause, the more ill will and resentment the individual provokes, often due to envy or to people's feeling threatened in some way. Thank you, sir.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/18/2010 6:25:00 PM)

    Re: Simple alarm (Score: 1)
    by Zbird on Monday, January 18,2010 (10: 45: 51)
    powerful write with a powerful and important message. well done.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/18/2010 4:46:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 1/17/2010 11: 43: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21060458 - Wise step
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: i like all the words written here...these are all true...i quote one stanza ''
    ''''may wait for those moments to enter in my barren age
    I shall become poet to pen down lovely feelings on page
    It may end long spell of frustration for not meeting partner
    Who could bring all happiness and prove as good listener''''....

    .perfect combination is already at your pen and in your mind
    for it will always go hand in hand to everywhere u wanted to start
    just be inspired and never take feelings of in despair
    we always love you, promise...we always want u to be inspired...smileeeeeeee dear

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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