Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,610 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2601. Think Of Life 11/16/2013
2602. Nights Did Bother 11/28/2013
2603. One More Day 12/3/2013
2604. Life May Stay 12/6/2013
2605. Love For Peace 12/10/2013
2606. Keep No Fear 12/10/2013
2607. Less Hard Work 12/13/2013
2608. For Human Relation 12/13/2013
2609. Feel The Fragrance 12/16/2013
2610. Long Night 12/16/2013
2611. New Hope For Relation 12/29/2013
2612. On No Paper 1/1/2014
2613. New Bottle 1/4/2014
2614. लुफ्त उठाते रहे..luft uthate rahen 1/7/2014
2615. Trust Once 1/8/2014
2616. નાહક નો ગુસ્સો... nahak no gusso 1/12/2014
2617. ફૂલો તમે.. Fulo Tame 1/12/2014
2618. हर मंजिल har manjil 1/24/2014
2619. Shock Waves 1/25/2014
2620. Poetry Is No Fun 2/1/2014
2621. તમારી આ મીઠી.. tamari aa mithi 2/8/2014
2622. Human Nature Differs 2/9/2014
2623. Good Point 2/19/2014
2624. Stab From The Back 2/25/2014
2625. With Smile On Face 2/28/2014
2626. Little Girl 3/6/2014
2627. Share The Pain 3/8/2014
2628. With Flowers 3/8/2014
2629. Believe It Or 3/13/2014
2630. With All Blames 3/16/2014
2631. પ્રેમ અમૂલો છે.. Pewm Amulo Chhe 3/14/2014
2632. Change In Call 4/12/2014
2633. Simple Laugh 4/14/2014
2634. In Same Region 4/13/2014
2635. We Are Thankless 4/21/2014
2636. Happy Early Days 4/21/2014
2637. Little Silver Line 4/23/2014
2638. My Angel Love 4/27/2014
2639. Freedom In Hand 4/27/2014
2640. Traveler Must Feel 4/29/2014

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2010 10:29:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 4/18/2010 9: 51: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 22693665 - A clear emotions
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen

    Comment: A very clever play of emotions in this poem. It's like battling with the rhyme and rhythm to maintain a sober climax in its flow. I almost wanted to take each first line in the poem to create another emotional rush.....must say it's a good read.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2010 11:24:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 4/17/2010 9: 06: 00 PM

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    Poem: 22513851 - A magic in music
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: Again. This ending is not good. But this poem is a big, big improvement over 'A Desire' and it has genuine poetic qualities that I found enjoyable. The rhymes are much better and the word selections are as well. This was much, much easier to read and enjoy. In fact, I can even recommend this poem to others. I would just tell them to not pay attention to the last verse. It is really poor. This is because the worst thing you can do to a reader is not end a poem. This poem has no end. - Greenwolfe 1962

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/11/2010 9:58:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 4/11/2010 11: 16: 00 AM

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    Poem: 22395309 - A desire
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘…Love …It is beautiful union of two souls…’

    Yeah and yeah Sir…soul in our culture [Indic] is different from others… its Ataman…

    Yeah discourse of Yagyanyablaka and Maitri had talk on this Soul was discussed…
    In today’s reality the meaning of Soul has come to soul…
    Thanks Uncle
    Voted 10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2010 2:24:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 4/9/2010 2: 02: 00 PM
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    Poem: 22249305 - A day to start with....
    Member: Mark Nwagwu
    Comment: If birds don’t ignore the nature then why do we?
    Why we remove the trees and make them refugee
    We loose the shed and they loose the home
    We know nothing and aimlessly roam

    this is brilliant, hasmukh, all of it - birds are far more sensible than we are, but they don't have a free will, we do, and what do we do with our freedom, we 'remove the trees', home of the birds. loved this a lot

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/5/2010 10:13:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 4/5/2010 9: 56: 00 PM

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    Poem: 22277802 - A poet can
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen
    Comment: Intense and very thoughtful write, Hasmukh. It seems as if you're in a minstrel courtyard, presenting your case for the poet: ' Why poets of modern age are considered pawn in their game? ' And again....' Are we not in the streets for begging paltry sum in reward? ' How philosophic can you be?

    our battlefield has become more intriguing
    so full of deception, deceit and damnation
    our ocean so immense, so complex
    as it washes all shores with litanies
    oh yes! our poems are like sea shells
    always a conch echoing in the wind of time.

    Thanx for sharing.
    Blessings.
    Leonard

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:21:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 4/2/2010 12: 42: 00 PM Remove this comment

    Poem: 22189321 - A wise to be Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK Comment: ‘…It is said you must keep mum on certain occasion…’

    Like...wise knows when to stay mum unlike fools…again poet writes, ‘…You need not open all your cards and silently resolve…’

    A ready reckoner of ‘interpersonal-conduct-protocol’…and food for thought…but must be kept in mind and followed…but to many like dumb speaks and deaf hears lolol…

    Your poem always educative…Sir I envy your untiring effort to make our society pristine with high moral and value the ‘Values’…
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:21:00 PM)

    From : Apoet Bangla (India ;)

    To : Hasmukh Amathalal

    Date Time : 4/2/2010 6: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : RE: A live together.....

    poet, you have the inner-sight to look at the truth. This vision is very important to a poet and to an artist. This Singularity perhaps differentiate one from another. Your individual style of explaining the facts of life is interesting.
    Write more. Thank you
    prab.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:07:00 PM)

    From : Deborah Cameron (United States ;)

    To : Hasmukh Amathalal

    Date Time : 4/2/2010 1: 00: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Your poems

    Thank you for recommending your poems to me. You are a thoughtful wordsmith.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2010 6:53:00 AM)

    We are all different Jadia. That's what makes us unique.. I so loved this for it's honesty inside it. The way we have to sometimes hide who we are, yet the ones we hurt are ourselves. Letting others in and know who we are, our feelings, is always the best.. It is up to them to either like us and take us for who we are, or walk away..

    Another fine write here.

    Hugs,
    Moonie xx


    © MoonStar Rose

    Thu Apr 01,2010 11: 42

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2010 6:20:00 AM)

    From : David Dale Kush (south bend United States; Male; 58)
    To : Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time : 4/1/2010 1: 07: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : Re: dear sir

    we who write from the soul like yourself are always
    wonderful to reaqd keep up thegood work for I believe words can change the world my friend

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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