Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 439,473 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2641. A Not Very Far 11/22/2010
2642. A Trusted Friends 11/24/2010
2643. An Apology 11/24/2010
2644. A Day Ends 11/25/2010
2645. A Praise Around 11/25/2010
2646. A Praise To Go Around 11/25/2010
2647. A Long Inning 11/25/2010
2648. It Is Enough 11/26/2010
2649. At Every Stage 11/23/2010
2650. A Weak Love 11/23/2010
2651. A Massage Of Love 11/28/2010
2652. O, Soldier Sons 11/28/2010
2653. A Direct Talk 11/29/2010
2654. Moni, You Are Dear 11/29/2010
2655. Ask For Self And Justify 11/29/2010
2656. A Little Thought 11/30/2010
2657. Live With Harmony 11/30/2010
2658. No More Grief 11/30/2010
2659. My Choice 12/1/2010
2660. A Dubious Life 12/1/2010
2661. A Selfish Nature 11/27/2010
2662. A Real Deep Love 11/27/2010
2663. I May Miss Her 12/2/2010
2664. A Hidden Treasure 12/2/2010
2665. As An Artist 12/3/2010
2666. A Mental Injury 12/3/2010
2667. A Hostile Environment 12/3/2010
2668. Only One Reason 12/3/2010
2669. All Roses 12/5/2010
2670. Just Keep Them Guessing 12/6/2010
2671. A Moral Crisis 12/6/2010
2672. Bring Down Adversary 12/7/2010
2673. A Full Attention 12/7/2010
2674. An Imprint In Mind 12/7/2010
2675. A Primary Knowledge 12/7/2010
2676. Move Confidently 12/8/2010
2677. Try To Come Over 12/8/2010
2678. Woman Only 12/8/2010
2679. A Silence Is An Answer 12/8/2010
2680. Wish, He Had 12/8/2010

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:15:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 1: 53: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Sahar Sahar
    Comment: congratulations,
    with some sparkly,
    moonlight,
    filtering from jasmine,
    glowing in your home,
    and keep on with your,
    stories to friends.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:15:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 1: 53: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Sahar Sahar
    Comment: congratulations,
    with some sparkly,
    moonlight,
    filtering from jasmine,
    glowing in your home,
    and keep on with your,
    stories to friends.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:12:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/15/2010 7: 15: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18111421 - Jackson is no more
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: this is an amazing poem on an amazing man, not only was he a gr8 star but also a great humatarian, extremely generous, beautifule heart and body and above all a gr8 talent. a talent which is born only once, not in a decade or a century but only once. he would be missed and wiould continue to inspire and make his presence felt through his music, his dance, through him as a lagend. i love him more than words can describe, no one but he is the only celebrity who can make me cry. my respect and adoration for him is irreplaceable, for me it's only MJ and no one else. God bless hinm and i hope he is happy and at peace now.

    i loved the way have rhymed it and covered most part of his life, please spare some time on 'am i too big for a life? ', 'moonwalker' and 'searching eyes' by me they are based on Michael Jackson. hope you like them.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 6:55:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 4: 27: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20891385 - Freedom
    Member: Yacov Mitchenko
    Comment: A good poem. But I think that as regards freedom, it can only be won from within. When that happens, the outward follows suit. But since most people in the world are slaves psychologically - slaves to their thoughts, beliefs, conditioning, and so on - wars, intolerances, antagonisms between countries are inevitable. It is only when an individual no longer regards himself as belonging to a country, or religion, or faith, or to any group whatsoever - is is only then that freedom is. A free individual is alone in a sense.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 1:26:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/15/2010 7: 15: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18111421 - Jackson is no more
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: this is an amazing poem on an amazing man, not only was he a gr8 star but also a great humatarian, extremely generous, beautifule heart and body and above all a gr8 talent. a talent which is born only once, not in a decade or a century but only once. he would be missed and wiould continue to inspire and make his presence felt through his music, his dance, through him as a lagend. i love him more than words can describe, no one but he is the only celebrity who can make me cry. my respect and adoration for him is irreplaceable, for me it's only MJ and no one else. God bless hinm and i hope he is happy and at peace now.



    i loved the way have rhymed it and covered most part of his life, please spare some time on 'am i too big for a life? ', 'moonwalker' and 'searching eyes' by me they are based on Michael Jackson. hope you like them.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 1:24:00 AM)

    Poem: 21027430 - Why to talk
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: We should not lose hope for better tomorrow
    World at large will come to terms and follow
    It may deliver what is expected from them
    We can take free air and breathe then



    i wish the above lines were possible, this poem is extremeley descriptive and you have expressed almost all that is going around us internationally. i like the last stanza but i wonder if it would mean of any relevance to the sufferers, people around the world are suffering, the intensity of which depends on the country you are from. there are countrymen who are scared to dream a way out, even frightened to talk openly about their religion, affraid to talk about their race and the political parties ruling them. the word fear is in their veins, mixed with blood now, inseparable but again we should always hope for better.

    10++++ and i wish the morale here materializes some day.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/15/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 1/15/2010 11: 06: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20890948 - Childhood
    Member: Louie Levy - Love & Peace
    Comment: Well versed, expressed and tributed for all parental Life on earth
    I can very much heartfully relate with most all your recollections and emotions for both parents. Many of us are fortunate as to experience the needed polarity of Love and Discipline. Your parents are very well rewarded, wherever they may exist in your metaphor' heart. With Empathy, we must also express for the countless children whom are starved without Parents, Love, food and water. Their unanswered prayers must reach all our own fortunate hearts. By which-ever method, Joining hands with others on Earth All We Need is ____ to Help Them with Charitable Leadership

    I've made your - our felt poem, a favorite
    Thanks for sharing
    ...louie

    http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=Nh7D2g5v-Sg

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/14/2010 6:21:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/14/2010 6: 19: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Annabel Sheila
    Comment: Congratulations on your 400th poem.....never let anyone sway you from your passion for writing! ! ! Your thoughts are golden and sharing them with strangers is a beautiful thing to do.

    Anna

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/14/2010 6:08:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/14/2010 8: 48: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi
    Comment: 400 can’t be the finish line for a indefatigable thinker like you…with always a stint of humaneness and educative…many more thousands of 400 we’re looking for…forward…thanks Sir
    10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/13/2010 2:05:00 AM)

    Re: Closeness

    Postby Glata » Fri Jan 08,2010 6: 48 pm
    To me, this verse says more than you could possibly know...

    To cast doubt means end of cordiality
    Halt in warmth relation and start of hostility
    Hurling of abuses and accusing to each other
    May sour the relation with more to bother


    How utterly true this is! Very wonderful write, Jadia...you're a man that speaks with wisdom...
    Hugs to you, my friend...
    Glata

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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