Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 413,573 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2681. Displayed At Once 2/7/2011
2682. Far Beyond Horizon 2/8/2011
2683. Turn To His Fold 2/8/2011
2684. The Light To Go 2/8/2011
2685. The Inseparable Part 2/8/2011
2686. May Remain As Bye Gone 2/8/2011
2687. After Sun Shine 2/9/2011
2688. The Different Attitude 2/9/2011
2689. Totally Inactive 2/9/2011
2690. Nothing To Plead 2/9/2011
2691. Proof Or No Proof 2/9/2011
2692. Remain As Human 2/9/2011
2693. Your Own Style 2/10/2011
2694. In All Colors 2/7/2011
2695. Traitors Of Today 2/10/2011
2696. Lord Buddha Smiled 2/10/2011
2697. World May Survive 2/10/2011
2698. Who Are You 2/11/2011
2699. Difficult To Believe 2/12/2011
2700. Finally A Liberation 2/12/2011
2701. Being Very Dear 2/12/2011
2702. Hurtful Words 2/12/2011
2703. See The God In Child 2/13/2011
2704. Happy Valentine 2/13/2011
2705. Turning Barren 2/13/2011
2706. To Hold On 2/14/2011
2707. Most Effective Tools 2/15/2011
2708. All The Night 2/15/2011
2709. With Full Awareness 2/15/2011
2710. Unaware Of The Fact 2/16/2011
2711. Despair Surface 2/16/2011
2712. A Steel Wall 2/16/2011
2713. Real Lover 2/16/2011
2714. Well In Advance 2/16/2011
2715. With A Call 2/17/2011
2716. Avoid Annoyance 2/14/2011
2717. Welfare State 2/15/2011
2718. As Per His Wishes 2/18/2011
2719. Dream Palace 2/18/2011
2720. For Not What You Are 2/18/2011

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:10:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 8: 21: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20890994 - Between lines
    Member: Ricardo Flores
    Comment: This has so much potential within it.
    it is the kind of poem that brightens me with emotion in fact.
    I admire this.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:07:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 10: 55: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Romeo Della Valle
    Comment: Excellent confession! coming from the bottom of your honest heart! Poetry is a non-stop process we go through with no time limit...Inspirations come and Inspirations go, but the ones we can hold, become the centered stage of a master piece poem...10+++

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/8/2010 10: 31: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18254711 - Bidding farewell
    Member: Alex Nodopaka
    Comment: It seems rhyme comes easy to you but I know how difficult it is. Your mastery of teh English language is commendable.

  • John Maxwell John Maxwell (1/6/2010 12:04:00 PM)

    Thank you for your kind comment. I have just read your' Accept Everything.'
    What a great insight to ones everyday living, and life in general. Great write!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 4:30:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/2/2010 9: 08: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20864751 - Love to fly
    Member: Thomas Mofford
    Comment: I read many of your poems and they resonated for me.
    I garnered thoughts for my keeping. (thank you)
    I like poems that ask questions.
    Yah, it 'makes me think.'
    Sure, read my poems.
    I have an 'I am'poem.
    Happy New Year

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 4:29:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/2/2010 9: 08: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20864751 - Love to fly
    Member: Thomas Mofford
    Comment: I read many of your poems and they resonated for me.
    I garnered thoughts for my keeping. (thank you)
    I like poems that ask questions.
    Yah, it 'makes me think.'
    Sure, read my poems.
    I have an 'I am'poem.
    Happy New Year

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/1/2010 7:07:00 PM)

    te & Time: 1/1/2010 6: 49: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20139791 - I miss
    Member: Flames Of Desire Consumed By The Fire
    Comment: Such interesting construction of words...I'm more of a plainly spoken person than a complication of words. Still, I felt somewhat of a connection to it's meaning. You clearly have mastered the word of poetry to my knowledge. If I'm unable to fathom it wholly, It usually means I've found a more skilled, intelligent one than myself. Grand job.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/30/2009 8:30:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 12/30/2009 9: 35: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20754880 - Accept everything
    Member: Jack Price
    Comment: Dear Sir, Thank you very much for this poem. It will be moved to my favorite list. I enjoy your work and I am looking forward to reading more of your poems. There are a lot here! This is a 10 for me and that means a lot. It is hard for me to find someone who is similiar in writing style and their poems inspire me as well. I thank you for your writing style..... J. l.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/29/2009 9:47:00 PM)

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    Poem: 20817072 - At bay
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran

    Comment: You are a gifted writer and poetry flows from your pen so freely and smoothly like a running river. God bless you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/28/2009 10:55:00 PM)

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    Poem: 20754880 - Accept everything
    Member: Antonio Liao

    Comment: wow! a wonderful hope of harmony...so deep that my sphere of life.....
    rendezvous the beautiful tomorrow of my life... my success would be our
    prosperous banquet for your one of my best friend in land of poetry....
    may your poem be amongst the inspiring wisdom of these ages...
    may God bless you.... a star for you and a 10 +++++

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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