Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 451,133 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2681. A Trusted Friends 11/24/2010
2682. An Apology 11/24/2010
2683. A Day Ends 11/25/2010
2684. A Praise Around 11/25/2010
2685. A Praise To Go Around 11/25/2010
2686. A Long Inning 11/25/2010
2687. It Is Enough 11/26/2010
2688. At Every Stage 11/23/2010
2689. A Weak Love 11/23/2010
2690. A Massage Of Love 11/28/2010
2691. O, Soldier Sons 11/28/2010
2692. A Direct Talk 11/29/2010
2693. Moni, You Are Dear 11/29/2010
2694. Ask For Self And Justify 11/29/2010
2695. A Little Thought 11/30/2010
2696. Live With Harmony 11/30/2010
2697. No More Grief 11/30/2010
2698. My Choice 12/1/2010
2699. A Dubious Life 12/1/2010
2700. A Selfish Nature 11/27/2010
2701. A Real Deep Love 11/27/2010
2702. I May Miss Her 12/2/2010
2703. A Hidden Treasure 12/2/2010
2704. As An Artist 12/3/2010
2705. A Mental Injury 12/3/2010
2706. A Hostile Environment 12/3/2010
2707. Only One Reason 12/3/2010
2708. All Roses 12/5/2010
2709. Just Keep Them Guessing 12/6/2010
2710. A Moral Crisis 12/6/2010
2711. Bring Down Adversary 12/7/2010
2712. A Full Attention 12/7/2010
2713. An Imprint In Mind 12/7/2010
2714. A Primary Knowledge 12/7/2010
2715. Move Confidently 12/8/2010
2716. Try To Come Over 12/8/2010
2717. Woman Only 12/8/2010
2718. A Silence Is An Answer 12/8/2010
2719. Wish, He Had 12/8/2010
2720. Message From Me 12/9/2010

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2010 1:14:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 11: 13: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20969953 - Poems with difference
    Member: Aira Olayvar
    Comment: Very nice!

    “Ideas may suddenly emerge in sequence
    Mind may pick up and build it as consequence.”

    It is the true way of the poets/ most of the writers, and the best part of it is when we are walking, which allows us of no readiness for pens and papers. Though most often times, when we are busy doing our job that the thoughts just suddenly emerge from nowhere.

    ‘How to project it rightly may prove as acid test
    It may be looked as fine blend of poetry and best.”

    Yeah, this is well said… because if novel were the words best arrange, poetry should be the best words in its best arrangement… that’s why I am here to practice. hehe

    “You got to sail through and find the way
    Stars and sky will be yours with more to say”

    So this is it… and that’s it.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:46:00 PM)

    From : Gomer Davis (Lakeland United States; Male; 46)
    To : Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time : 1/10/2010 8: 20: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : 400th mark

    Hasmukh, I just read 400th mark and find very entertaining. I want to ask you a question, that has nothing to do with this poem, but this question just popped in my head. Do you write the poems in your native language first, then translate them to english, or do you convert the thoughts in your mind before you transpose them to paper so to speak. or is the just a really stupid question? I apologize if the latter is your response. I will for sure read more of your poetry, as I do also hope that you will read mine.
    Thank you for your time and have pleasant day sir.

    reply....

    No dear this is reality I come across despite being so nice to our readers. They take it negative merely on the ground that we are simply troubling them. But it must be understood that it is necessity to reach to every readers and this is only medium available to us.

    You are right in your assumption that it may be first in native language then to the English. This is not the case so. I may be guided or influenced by the style in which have been exposed from childhood but let me assure you, it comes from heart and as instant idea. I thank God for the simple reason that He fills my mind with immediate thoughts and I immediately execute it. I am not aware of any apprehension but simply follow inner conscience.u r free to ask me any question.

    Dear one heartening news if you can appreciate it. World Christianity forum has accepted my poem. Lovely life as
    Their main prayer and displayed in Ezine articles.com

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:10:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 8: 21: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20890994 - Between lines
    Member: Ricardo Flores
    Comment: This has so much potential within it.
    it is the kind of poem that brightens me with emotion in fact.
    I admire this.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:07:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 10: 55: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Romeo Della Valle
    Comment: Excellent confession! coming from the bottom of your honest heart! Poetry is a non-stop process we go through with no time limit...Inspirations come and Inspirations go, but the ones we can hold, become the centered stage of a master piece poem...10+++

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/8/2010 10: 31: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18254711 - Bidding farewell
    Member: Alex Nodopaka
    Comment: It seems rhyme comes easy to you but I know how difficult it is. Your mastery of teh English language is commendable.

  • John Maxwell John Maxwell (1/6/2010 12:04:00 PM)

    Thank you for your kind comment. I have just read your' Accept Everything.'
    What a great insight to ones everyday living, and life in general. Great write!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 4:30:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/2/2010 9: 08: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20864751 - Love to fly
    Member: Thomas Mofford
    Comment: I read many of your poems and they resonated for me.
    I garnered thoughts for my keeping. (thank you)
    I like poems that ask questions.
    Yah, it 'makes me think.'
    Sure, read my poems.
    I have an 'I am'poem.
    Happy New Year

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 4:29:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/2/2010 9: 08: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20864751 - Love to fly
    Member: Thomas Mofford
    Comment: I read many of your poems and they resonated for me.
    I garnered thoughts for my keeping. (thank you)
    I like poems that ask questions.
    Yah, it 'makes me think.'
    Sure, read my poems.
    I have an 'I am'poem.
    Happy New Year

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/1/2010 7:07:00 PM)

    te & Time: 1/1/2010 6: 49: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20139791 - I miss
    Member: Flames Of Desire Consumed By The Fire
    Comment: Such interesting construction of words...I'm more of a plainly spoken person than a complication of words. Still, I felt somewhat of a connection to it's meaning. You clearly have mastered the word of poetry to my knowledge. If I'm unable to fathom it wholly, It usually means I've found a more skilled, intelligent one than myself. Grand job.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/30/2009 8:30:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 12/30/2009 9: 35: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20754880 - Accept everything
    Member: Jack Price
    Comment: Dear Sir, Thank you very much for this poem. It will be moved to my favorite list. I enjoy your work and I am looking forward to reading more of your poems. There are a lot here! This is a 10 for me and that means a lot. It is hard for me to find someone who is similiar in writing style and their poems inspire me as well. I thank you for your writing style..... J. l.

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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