Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 506,061 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2681. An Art Of Living 9/11/2010
2682. A Shine Like Light 9/12/2010
2683. A Word Imagery 9/13/2010
2684. A Sincere Gratitude 9/14/2010
2685. At Past Incidence 9/14/2010
2686. A Live Pulse 9/14/2010
2687. A Wish To Stay 9/14/2010
2688. A Moon And Shadow 9/15/2010
2689. A Quite True 9/15/2010
2690. A Good Or Bad 9/15/2010
2691. Accept As It Is 9/20/2010
2692. A Game Plan 9/21/2010
2693. A No Exception 9/21/2010
2694. A Lovely Expression 9/21/2010
2695. As I Cry 9/22/2010
2696. An Olive Branch 9/22/2010
2697. A Love By Default 9/22/2010
2698. An Answer You Have 9/22/2010
2699. A Success And Failure 9/22/2010
2700. I Am Lost 9/23/2010
2701. The Original Plan 9/23/2010
2702. A Fair Chance 9/23/2010
2703. Remember What We Are 9/23/2010
2704. A Light Of The Day 9/23/2010
2705. A Love Of The Day 9/23/2010
2706. I Cease To 9/23/2010
2707. A Gentle Sob 9/16/2010
2708. A Music In All 9/16/2010
2709. A Matter In Question 9/17/2010
2710. A Matter In Quesion 9/17/2010
2711. A Young Nation 9/17/2010
2712. A Fall And Shame 9/17/2010
2713. A Wish To Remain And Last 9/17/2010
2714. A Free Hand 9/18/2010
2715. An Act Of Devil 9/19/2010
2716. A Yesteryears 9/19/2010
2717. A Good Choice 9/19/2010
2718. An Anxiety Is Seen 9/19/2010
2719. A Dark Night 9/20/2010
2720. A Special Space 9/20/2010

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:15:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 1: 53: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Sahar Sahar
    Comment: congratulations,
    with some sparkly,
    moonlight,
    filtering from jasmine,
    glowing in your home,
    and keep on with your,
    stories to friends.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:12:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/15/2010 7: 15: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18111421 - Jackson is no more
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: this is an amazing poem on an amazing man, not only was he a gr8 star but also a great humatarian, extremely generous, beautifule heart and body and above all a gr8 talent. a talent which is born only once, not in a decade or a century but only once. he would be missed and wiould continue to inspire and make his presence felt through his music, his dance, through him as a lagend. i love him more than words can describe, no one but he is the only celebrity who can make me cry. my respect and adoration for him is irreplaceable, for me it's only MJ and no one else. God bless hinm and i hope he is happy and at peace now.

    i loved the way have rhymed it and covered most part of his life, please spare some time on 'am i too big for a life? ', 'moonwalker' and 'searching eyes' by me they are based on Michael Jackson. hope you like them.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 6:55:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 4: 27: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20891385 - Freedom
    Member: Yacov Mitchenko
    Comment: A good poem. But I think that as regards freedom, it can only be won from within. When that happens, the outward follows suit. But since most people in the world are slaves psychologically - slaves to their thoughts, beliefs, conditioning, and so on - wars, intolerances, antagonisms between countries are inevitable. It is only when an individual no longer regards himself as belonging to a country, or religion, or faith, or to any group whatsoever - is is only then that freedom is. A free individual is alone in a sense.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 1:26:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/15/2010 7: 15: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18111421 - Jackson is no more
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: this is an amazing poem on an amazing man, not only was he a gr8 star but also a great humatarian, extremely generous, beautifule heart and body and above all a gr8 talent. a talent which is born only once, not in a decade or a century but only once. he would be missed and wiould continue to inspire and make his presence felt through his music, his dance, through him as a lagend. i love him more than words can describe, no one but he is the only celebrity who can make me cry. my respect and adoration for him is irreplaceable, for me it's only MJ and no one else. God bless hinm and i hope he is happy and at peace now.



    i loved the way have rhymed it and covered most part of his life, please spare some time on 'am i too big for a life? ', 'moonwalker' and 'searching eyes' by me they are based on Michael Jackson. hope you like them.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 1:24:00 AM)

    Poem: 21027430 - Why to talk
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: We should not lose hope for better tomorrow
    World at large will come to terms and follow
    It may deliver what is expected from them
    We can take free air and breathe then



    i wish the above lines were possible, this poem is extremeley descriptive and you have expressed almost all that is going around us internationally. i like the last stanza but i wonder if it would mean of any relevance to the sufferers, people around the world are suffering, the intensity of which depends on the country you are from. there are countrymen who are scared to dream a way out, even frightened to talk openly about their religion, affraid to talk about their race and the political parties ruling them. the word fear is in their veins, mixed with blood now, inseparable but again we should always hope for better.

    10++++ and i wish the morale here materializes some day.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/15/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 1/15/2010 11: 06: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20890948 - Childhood
    Member: Louie Levy - Love & Peace
    Comment: Well versed, expressed and tributed for all parental Life on earth
    I can very much heartfully relate with most all your recollections and emotions for both parents. Many of us are fortunate as to experience the needed polarity of Love and Discipline. Your parents are very well rewarded, wherever they may exist in your metaphor' heart. With Empathy, we must also express for the countless children whom are starved without Parents, Love, food and water. Their unanswered prayers must reach all our own fortunate hearts. By which-ever method, Joining hands with others on Earth All We Need is ____ to Help Them with Charitable Leadership

    I've made your - our felt poem, a favorite
    Thanks for sharing
    ...louie

    http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=Nh7D2g5v-Sg

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/14/2010 6:21:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/14/2010 6: 19: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Annabel Sheila
    Comment: Congratulations on your 400th poem.....never let anyone sway you from your passion for writing! ! ! Your thoughts are golden and sharing them with strangers is a beautiful thing to do.

    Anna

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/14/2010 6:08:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/14/2010 8: 48: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi
    Comment: 400 can’t be the finish line for a indefatigable thinker like you…with always a stint of humaneness and educative…many more thousands of 400 we’re looking for…forward…thanks Sir
    10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/13/2010 2:05:00 AM)

    Re: Closeness

    Postby Glata » Fri Jan 08,2010 6: 48 pm
    To me, this verse says more than you could possibly know...

    To cast doubt means end of cordiality
    Halt in warmth relation and start of hostility
    Hurling of abuses and accusing to each other
    May sour the relation with more to bother


    How utterly true this is! Very wonderful write, Jadia...you're a man that speaks with wisdom...
    Hugs to you, my friend...
    Glata

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2010 1:14:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 11: 13: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20969953 - Poems with difference
    Member: Aira Olayvar
    Comment: Very nice!

    “Ideas may suddenly emerge in sequence
    Mind may pick up and build it as consequence.”

    It is the true way of the poets/ most of the writers, and the best part of it is when we are walking, which allows us of no readiness for pens and papers. Though most often times, when we are busy doing our job that the thoughts just suddenly emerge from nowhere.

    ‘How to project it rightly may prove as acid test
    It may be looked as fine blend of poetry and best.”

    Yeah, this is well said… because if novel were the words best arrange, poetry should be the best words in its best arrangement… that’s why I am here to practice. hehe

    “You got to sail through and find the way
    Stars and sky will be yours with more to say”

    So this is it… and that’s it.

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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