Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 436,703 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2761. All Woman 9/25/2015
2762. Till The Cessation 9/26/2015
2763. Till It Arrives 9/26/2015
2764. Some More Deaths 9/26/2015
2765. Countdown 9/27/2015
2766. Cheers And Happiness 9/27/2015
2767. Problem At Present 9/27/2015
2768. No Concession 9/29/2015
2769. Weak Human Beings 9/29/2015
2770. With Nature Again 9/29/2015
2771. No Wisdom 9/29/2015
2772. No Wisdom In It 9/29/2015
2773. With Turn Out 9/30/2015
2774. Life Is Not Continuous 9/30/2015
2775. Life Is Not Continuous 9/30/2015
2776. Unrest And Peace 9/30/2015
2777. Seize The Chance 9/29/2015
2778. Rush Out Side 9/30/2015
2779. Active Association 9/30/2015
2780. Not Later 9/30/2015
2781. The Point Of Relation 10/2/2015
2782. In Blood 10/3/2015
2783. Unfairly Seen 10/5/2015
2784. Her Angle... View Point 10/5/2015
2785. Swing Into Action 10/5/2015
2786. Unfair To See 10/6/2015
2787. Restlessness 10/6/2015
2788. Mutual Consent 10/6/2015
2789. Change Life Later 10/7/2015
2790. Convinient Dates 10/7/2015
2791. Stand Erect 10/7/2015
2792. Stand Erect Always 10/7/2015
2793. Real Spirit 10/9/2015
2794. For Assumption 10/9/2015
2795. From By Gone 10/9/2015
2796. Essential For Relation 10/10/2015
2797. Wrong Insistencce 10/11/2015
2798. Differently Preach 10/11/2015
2799. Religious Fervor 10/11/2015
2800. Something Worth Value 10/12/2015

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 9:18:00 PM)

    Poem: 17309480 - All hopes against hope
    Member: Gracey Newman

    Comment: AHH...the ending is soo powerfull
    'Sun may go up with its destined time,
    target we should set as our object prime,
    luck may not favour but not let us down,
    plant will come up when seeds are sown '
    - beautiful

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 5:57:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/28/2009 12: 58: 00 AM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19924166 - Beautiful world
    Member: Vinod Kumar

    Comment: Nice job.. to identify and understand the almighty with the clear mind, that is this poem, in my humble openion there should be a godess to help the god that is Mother, who knows the cild`s needs well, thanks 10++

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:16:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 23: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19916139 - As a friend
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hasmukh bhai,
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem I liked the poem though I have a different style altogether-free verse..Your beginning lines make the point:
    'Can you tell me as a friend?
    Where the stars and world end
    May I fail to catch glimpse of beauty?
    Will not everyone will laugh at me with pity?
    A nicely rhymed poem. Rated high.
    Just a suggestion- a friendly one- if you want to continue with rhyming, you are to be careful about the metre as well.
    Rajkumar

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:15:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 33: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19917588 - Don't garland me
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hashmukhbhai.
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on an introspective poem of modern day degradation of values.I liked the poem and rated high. to me this is the best line of the poem:
    'tolerence is greatest key to success
    open to all and grant free access'

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:13:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 45: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19796378 - Hurt me again
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hashmukhlalbhai,
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem bubbling with confidence in Gandhian philosophy. I liked the poem though in some places you may re-work the rhyming pattern to have a better flow -personal opinion only.
    Saying that I have rated your poem highly. The beginning lines strikes me most:
    'Why don't you hurt me again?
    If that helps you to position regain
    Either way it has to be somebody's gain
    Concern and worry should not remain'
    Like an actor entering the stage, you have overwhelmed your audience simply with the beginning lines.
    Rajkumar

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 7: 47: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 17670074 - Cowardice act
    Member: Louis Rams

    Comment: the last verse says it all
    a cowards act is not remembered, but the damage it can do will be remembered.
    and as ou said it does not only apply to war, but to everything in life.

    excellent write a aten

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:04:00 AM)

    Benjamin Hallas (10/27/2009 10: 45: 00 PM)

    I have to say that this is one of the best poems that I have ever read. The message that this poem conveys is one that we should all heed. We all need to be conscious of the earth.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:02:00 AM)

    Yacov Mitchenko (10/27/2009 1: 57: 00 AM)

    The last stanza is the most revealing here. Peace and wholeness of being are more important than all the travails associated with success. A few points about success: there are often expectations brought to bear once we have succeeded, and we're often afraid we may not meet those expectations. Moreover, successes often incite envy, and there's always someone more successful than you. They aren't permanent either. Although I don't understand many lines here (because they're too abstract) , I appreciate the thoughtfulness of the poem as a whole.

  • Catrina Heart (10/27/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Amathalal is a magnanimous dedicated modern poet of today’s’ generation. His works were all reflections of human realism in this world. Be it in individual, personal or global situations. The poet’s pieces surround to the problems arising to everyday’s life with much ado to poetic advices, claiming awareness with questions and motivations in every stanza.

    The poet makes his crafts in quatrain form of verses with fine ending rhymes. Using also vivid images so that the readers will be able to understand clearly what he wanted to convey. Grammar is less significant, bluntness or dullness of presentation is not that matters to him for he believes that the best verse will mark to the readers’ mind easily and the influence of each composition to the lives of the people is most valuable.

    Reading his works is such a pleasure and insightful. Every theme offers valuable lessons to ponder on, great take outs in eloquence.

    To the poet himself, Congratulations for the job well done! ! !

  • Kris Templin (10/11/2009 9:25:00 PM)

    hello
    I just wanted to say that this is a very awesome poem
    a lot of feeling you put into it wow thanks for sharing

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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