Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,610 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2761. Put Aside 9/11/2014
2762. Hold Me In Control 9/11/2014
2763. Let World Go 9/11/2014
2764. Child's Game 9/11/2014
2765. Cruel Joke 9/11/2014
2766. Hurdle Shall 9/11/2014
2767. Big Or Small 9/11/2014
2768. Gun Fire 9/11/2014
2769. For Reply 9/12/2014
2770. With An Open Mind 9/12/2014
2771. Happy Couple 9/12/2014
2772. Maintain Harmony 9/12/2014
2773. Hesitant 9/13/2014
2774. With Passion 9/13/2014
2775. With Ups And Down 9/13/2014
2776. Cold Ripples 9/13/2014
2777. In Spring Session 9/13/2014
2778. Toil 9/14/2014
2779. Well Knit Imagery 9/14/2014
2780. No Division 9/14/2014
2781. No Division At All 9/14/2014
2782. Lovable Color 9/14/2014
2783. Why Lord Should Look 9/14/2014
2784. I Shall Sing 9/14/2014
2785. No One Is 9/15/2014
2786. From Some Quarter 9/15/2014
2787. Water Has Central Place 9/14/2014
2788. Only Curse 9/15/2014
2789. Fever Power 9/15/2014
2790. The Difference Shall 9/15/2014
2791. I Feel Autumn 9/16/2014
2792. Love Even 9/16/2014
2793. As Major 9/15/2014
2794. What A Scene 9/16/2014
2795. Who Can 9/15/2014
2796. Malaria 9/16/2014
2797. At Our Will 9/16/2014
2798. I Seek 9/18/2014
2799. Flowers Trick 9/18/2014
2800. With Your Memory 9/19/2014

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/23/2010 9:31:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 1/23/2010 7: 21: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21096246 - Woman's womb
    Member: Indira Renganathan
    Comment: Hasmukh, you are the best son of the Goddess of genesis....endless times I bow to you....with lots of thanks lots of 10s

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/23/2010 9:28:00 AM)

    te & Time: 1/23/2010 7: 23: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21121339 - Haiti
    Member: Merna Ibrahim
    Comment: Actually the human beings polluted and destroyed the nature, so we must protect the good left part and fix the bad part, like that we will build a foundation for a better future and for the next generations.According to the natural phenomenons, God'Almighty' is only the one who can control this affair.So God help them and forgive all of us...
    A long poem but it is really good and involves a strong and crucial messages..Merna

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/20/2010 10:32:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/20/2010 10: 24: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20958338 - Pleasantry exchanges
    Member: Antonio Liao
    Comment: If only the world will only listen and read this poem.....the fume of fire
    in every heart lost its scent...and the greed of power loosen its mind, down
    to emptiness of the soul.....prayer and wish this poem will be gone to every
    one's thirst of nothingness....God bless...a 10 Star of all poems...

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/20/2010 1:58:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 1/19/2010 11: 49: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21085528 - What is it to me
    Member: Yacov Mitchenko
    Comment: Actually, I enjoyed this poem more than most of your others. It is clearer, more focused, and the development of ideas is smoother. There's improvement in grammar and syntax. Yes, we need to walk alone and leave this earth a little more beautiful than it was without us. We need to proceed with the utmost passion and dedication, regardless of how well our efforts are received by others. Generally, the nobler the cause, the more ill will and resentment the individual provokes, often due to envy or to people's feeling threatened in some way. Thank you, sir.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/18/2010 6:25:00 PM)

    Re: Simple alarm (Score: 1)
    by Zbird on Monday, January 18,2010 (10: 45: 51)
    powerful write with a powerful and important message. well done.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/18/2010 4:46:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 1/17/2010 11: 43: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21060458 - Wise step
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: i like all the words written here...these are all true...i quote one stanza ''
    ''''may wait for those moments to enter in my barren age
    I shall become poet to pen down lovely feelings on page
    It may end long spell of frustration for not meeting partner
    Who could bring all happiness and prove as good listener''''....

    .perfect combination is already at your pen and in your mind
    for it will always go hand in hand to everywhere u wanted to start
    just be inspired and never take feelings of in despair
    we always love you, promise...we always want u to be inspired...smileeeeeeee dear

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:15:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 1: 53: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Sahar Sahar
    Comment: congratulations,
    with some sparkly,
    moonlight,
    filtering from jasmine,
    glowing in your home,
    and keep on with your,
    stories to friends.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:15:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 1: 53: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Sahar Sahar
    Comment: congratulations,
    with some sparkly,
    moonlight,
    filtering from jasmine,
    glowing in your home,
    and keep on with your,
    stories to friends.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:12:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/15/2010 7: 15: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18111421 - Jackson is no more
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: this is an amazing poem on an amazing man, not only was he a gr8 star but also a great humatarian, extremely generous, beautifule heart and body and above all a gr8 talent. a talent which is born only once, not in a decade or a century but only once. he would be missed and wiould continue to inspire and make his presence felt through his music, his dance, through him as a lagend. i love him more than words can describe, no one but he is the only celebrity who can make me cry. my respect and adoration for him is irreplaceable, for me it's only MJ and no one else. God bless hinm and i hope he is happy and at peace now.

    i loved the way have rhymed it and covered most part of his life, please spare some time on 'am i too big for a life? ', 'moonwalker' and 'searching eyes' by me they are based on Michael Jackson. hope you like them.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 6:55:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 4: 27: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20891385 - Freedom
    Member: Yacov Mitchenko
    Comment: A good poem. But I think that as regards freedom, it can only be won from within. When that happens, the outward follows suit. But since most people in the world are slaves psychologically - slaves to their thoughts, beliefs, conditioning, and so on - wars, intolerances, antagonisms between countries are inevitable. It is only when an individual no longer regards himself as belonging to a country, or religion, or faith, or to any group whatsoever - is is only then that freedom is. A free individual is alone in a sense.

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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