Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 506,061 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2801. A Mistake Is To Be Pardoned 10/24/2010
2802. A Word Slip 10/24/2010
2803. A Free Action 10/24/2010
2804. A Birth And Death 10/25/2010
2805. A Pain And Sorrow 10/27/2010
2806. A Mental Satisfaction 10/27/2010
2807. At The Time Of Disaster 10/27/2010
2808. A Human Brain 10/28/2010
2809. All So Beautiful 10/28/2010
2810. Can'T Be Left Alone 10/28/2010
2811. At What Cost? 10/28/2010
2812. A Deliberate Deception 10/28/2010
2813. Asking With Smile 10/29/2010
2814. A Deep Love 10/29/2010
2815. An Imaginary Conclusion 10/30/2010
2816. A Sleep Is Must 10/30/2010
2817. A Response To Memory 10/30/2010
2818. A No Way 10/31/2010
2819. A Love For Flower 10/31/2010
2820. A Good Change 10/31/2010
2821. Am Very Happy 11/1/2010
2822. A Time To Adjust 11/2/2010
2823. All By Gone Memory 11/2/2010
2824. A Day Never Same Again 11/2/2010
2825. A Highs Stage Fever 11/2/2010
2826. A Synonymous With Corruption 11/2/2010
2827. A Clear Cheating 11/3/2010
2828. A Woman As Strength 11/3/2010
2829. A Poet Everywhere 11/3/2010
2830. A Festival Of Lights 11/3/2010
2831. A Someone To Come Near 11/4/2010
2832. A Life In Stages 11/4/2010
2833. A Unlucky Ton 11/5/2010
2834. A Love Has No Shape 11/5/2010
2835. A Need To Come Out 11/5/2010
2836. A No Price Tag 11/5/2010
2837. A Plan In Advance 11/6/2010
2838. As You Step In 11/7/2010
2839. A Death Not Menace 11/7/2010
2840. A Corner 10/26/2010

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 5:57:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/28/2009 12: 58: 00 AM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19924166 - Beautiful world
    Member: Vinod Kumar

    Comment: Nice job.. to identify and understand the almighty with the clear mind, that is this poem, in my humble openion there should be a godess to help the god that is Mother, who knows the cild`s needs well, thanks 10++

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:16:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 23: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19916139 - As a friend
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hasmukh bhai,
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem I liked the poem though I have a different style altogether-free verse..Your beginning lines make the point:
    'Can you tell me as a friend?
    Where the stars and world end
    May I fail to catch glimpse of beauty?
    Will not everyone will laugh at me with pity?
    A nicely rhymed poem. Rated high.
    Just a suggestion- a friendly one- if you want to continue with rhyming, you are to be careful about the metre as well.
    Rajkumar

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:15:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 33: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19917588 - Don't garland me
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hashmukhbhai.
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on an introspective poem of modern day degradation of values.I liked the poem and rated high. to me this is the best line of the poem:
    'tolerence is greatest key to success
    open to all and grant free access'

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:13:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 45: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19796378 - Hurt me again
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hashmukhlalbhai,
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem bubbling with confidence in Gandhian philosophy. I liked the poem though in some places you may re-work the rhyming pattern to have a better flow -personal opinion only.
    Saying that I have rated your poem highly. The beginning lines strikes me most:
    'Why don't you hurt me again?
    If that helps you to position regain
    Either way it has to be somebody's gain
    Concern and worry should not remain'
    Like an actor entering the stage, you have overwhelmed your audience simply with the beginning lines.
    Rajkumar

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 7: 47: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 17670074 - Cowardice act
    Member: Louis Rams

    Comment: the last verse says it all
    a cowards act is not remembered, but the damage it can do will be remembered.
    and as ou said it does not only apply to war, but to everything in life.

    excellent write a aten

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:04:00 AM)

    Benjamin Hallas (10/27/2009 10: 45: 00 PM)

    I have to say that this is one of the best poems that I have ever read. The message that this poem conveys is one that we should all heed. We all need to be conscious of the earth.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:02:00 AM)

    Yacov Mitchenko (10/27/2009 1: 57: 00 AM)

    The last stanza is the most revealing here. Peace and wholeness of being are more important than all the travails associated with success. A few points about success: there are often expectations brought to bear once we have succeeded, and we're often afraid we may not meet those expectations. Moreover, successes often incite envy, and there's always someone more successful than you. They aren't permanent either. Although I don't understand many lines here (because they're too abstract) , I appreciate the thoughtfulness of the poem as a whole.

  • Catrina Heart (10/27/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Amathalal is a magnanimous dedicated modern poet of today’s’ generation. His works were all reflections of human realism in this world. Be it in individual, personal or global situations. The poet’s pieces surround to the problems arising to everyday’s life with much ado to poetic advices, claiming awareness with questions and motivations in every stanza.

    The poet makes his crafts in quatrain form of verses with fine ending rhymes. Using also vivid images so that the readers will be able to understand clearly what he wanted to convey. Grammar is less significant, bluntness or dullness of presentation is not that matters to him for he believes that the best verse will mark to the readers’ mind easily and the influence of each composition to the lives of the people is most valuable.

    Reading his works is such a pleasure and insightful. Every theme offers valuable lessons to ponder on, great take outs in eloquence.

    To the poet himself, Congratulations for the job well done! ! !

  • Kris Templin (10/11/2009 9:25:00 PM)

    hello
    I just wanted to say that this is a very awesome poem
    a lot of feeling you put into it wow thanks for sharing

  • Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (9/23/2009 7:19:00 AM)

    ........Tremendous efforts and good poetry are your forte.But the popularity terms are quite misleading for I was India`s first last year for two weeks... Efforts for transmission of thoughts must not be ever left aloof. All the best Amathalal

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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