Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 673,593 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2801. Life As Gift 9/22/2014
2802. Holy Relation 9/22/2014
2803. Into Your Kingdom 9/21/2014
2804. No Road Sense 9/22/2014
2805. Merciful And Kind 9/22/2014
2806. Come Close 9/22/2014
2807. With Love At Once 9/22/2014
2808. Not All You Get 9/23/2014
2809. Even For Bluff 9/23/2014
2810. Better Tomorrow 9/23/2014
2811. Vast Open 9/23/2014
2812. Doubts Emerge 9/23/2014
2813. No One Can Beat 9/23/2014
2814. Let Us Dream 9/23/2014
2815. Hope And Promises 9/23/2014
2816. Endless Game 9/23/2014
2817. An Asset 9/24/2014
2818. I Make Call 9/25/2014
2819. From Darkness To 9/25/2014
2820. Color And Race 9/25/2014
2821. Simple Pause 9/25/2014
2822. Worshiped Even 9/25/2014
2823. Boundless Spell 9/24/2014
2824. You Choose 9/25/2014
2825. Humanitarian Drive 9/26/2014
2826. When Dead 9/26/2014
2827. Love Is Nice Gift 9/27/2014
2828. Flag In Air 9/27/2014
2829. May Make You 9/27/2014
2830. Bid For Love 9/27/2014
2831. People To Starve 9/27/2014
2832. With Yes And No 9/28/2014
2833. Not Happily Driven 9/28/2014
2834. Past May Take You 9/28/2014
2835. Not Fully 9/28/2014
2836. Ask For Reprieve 9/28/2014
2837. Face Lines 9/28/2014
2838. Touch Of Humanism 9/29/2014
2839. Life Is Barren 9/30/2014
2840. Lot More To Feel 9/30/2014

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 1:24:00 AM)

    Poem: 21027430 - Why to talk
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: We should not lose hope for better tomorrow
    World at large will come to terms and follow
    It may deliver what is expected from them
    We can take free air and breathe then



    i wish the above lines were possible, this poem is extremeley descriptive and you have expressed almost all that is going around us internationally. i like the last stanza but i wonder if it would mean of any relevance to the sufferers, people around the world are suffering, the intensity of which depends on the country you are from. there are countrymen who are scared to dream a way out, even frightened to talk openly about their religion, affraid to talk about their race and the political parties ruling them. the word fear is in their veins, mixed with blood now, inseparable but again we should always hope for better.

    10++++ and i wish the morale here materializes some day.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/15/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 1/15/2010 11: 06: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20890948 - Childhood
    Member: Louie Levy - Love & Peace
    Comment: Well versed, expressed and tributed for all parental Life on earth
    I can very much heartfully relate with most all your recollections and emotions for both parents. Many of us are fortunate as to experience the needed polarity of Love and Discipline. Your parents are very well rewarded, wherever they may exist in your metaphor' heart. With Empathy, we must also express for the countless children whom are starved without Parents, Love, food and water. Their unanswered prayers must reach all our own fortunate hearts. By which-ever method, Joining hands with others on Earth All We Need is ____ to Help Them with Charitable Leadership

    I've made your - our felt poem, a favorite
    Thanks for sharing
    ...louie

    http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=Nh7D2g5v-Sg

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/14/2010 6:21:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/14/2010 6: 19: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Annabel Sheila
    Comment: Congratulations on your 400th poem.....never let anyone sway you from your passion for writing! ! ! Your thoughts are golden and sharing them with strangers is a beautiful thing to do.

    Anna

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/14/2010 6:08:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/14/2010 8: 48: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi
    Comment: 400 can’t be the finish line for a indefatigable thinker like you…with always a stint of humaneness and educative…many more thousands of 400 we’re looking for…forward…thanks Sir
    10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/13/2010 2:05:00 AM)

    Re: Closeness

    Postby Glata » Fri Jan 08,2010 6: 48 pm
    To me, this verse says more than you could possibly know...

    To cast doubt means end of cordiality
    Halt in warmth relation and start of hostility
    Hurling of abuses and accusing to each other
    May sour the relation with more to bother


    How utterly true this is! Very wonderful write, Jadia...you're a man that speaks with wisdom...
    Hugs to you, my friend...
    Glata

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2010 1:14:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 11: 13: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20969953 - Poems with difference
    Member: Aira Olayvar
    Comment: Very nice!

    “Ideas may suddenly emerge in sequence
    Mind may pick up and build it as consequence.”

    It is the true way of the poets/ most of the writers, and the best part of it is when we are walking, which allows us of no readiness for pens and papers. Though most often times, when we are busy doing our job that the thoughts just suddenly emerge from nowhere.

    ‘How to project it rightly may prove as acid test
    It may be looked as fine blend of poetry and best.”

    Yeah, this is well said… because if novel were the words best arrange, poetry should be the best words in its best arrangement… that’s why I am here to practice. hehe

    “You got to sail through and find the way
    Stars and sky will be yours with more to say”

    So this is it… and that’s it.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:46:00 PM)

    From : Gomer Davis (Lakeland United States; Male; 46)
    To : Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time : 1/10/2010 8: 20: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : 400th mark

    Hasmukh, I just read 400th mark and find very entertaining. I want to ask you a question, that has nothing to do with this poem, but this question just popped in my head. Do you write the poems in your native language first, then translate them to english, or do you convert the thoughts in your mind before you transpose them to paper so to speak. or is the just a really stupid question? I apologize if the latter is your response. I will for sure read more of your poetry, as I do also hope that you will read mine.
    Thank you for your time and have pleasant day sir.

    reply....

    No dear this is reality I come across despite being so nice to our readers. They take it negative merely on the ground that we are simply troubling them. But it must be understood that it is necessity to reach to every readers and this is only medium available to us.

    You are right in your assumption that it may be first in native language then to the English. This is not the case so. I may be guided or influenced by the style in which have been exposed from childhood but let me assure you, it comes from heart and as instant idea. I thank God for the simple reason that He fills my mind with immediate thoughts and I immediately execute it. I am not aware of any apprehension but simply follow inner conscience.u r free to ask me any question.

    Dear one heartening news if you can appreciate it. World Christianity forum has accepted my poem. Lovely life as
    Their main prayer and displayed in Ezine articles.com

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:10:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 8: 21: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20890994 - Between lines
    Member: Ricardo Flores
    Comment: This has so much potential within it.
    it is the kind of poem that brightens me with emotion in fact.
    I admire this.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:07:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 10: 55: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Romeo Della Valle
    Comment: Excellent confession! coming from the bottom of your honest heart! Poetry is a non-stop process we go through with no time limit...Inspirations come and Inspirations go, but the ones we can hold, become the centered stage of a master piece poem...10+++

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/8/2010 10: 31: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18254711 - Bidding farewell
    Member: Alex Nodopaka
    Comment: It seems rhyme comes easy to you but I know how difficult it is. Your mastery of teh English language is commendable.

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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