Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,610 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2841. May Make You 9/27/2014
2842. Bid For Love 9/27/2014
2843. People To Starve 9/27/2014
2844. With Yes And No 9/28/2014
2845. Not Happily Driven 9/28/2014
2846. Past May Take You 9/28/2014
2847. Not Fully 9/28/2014
2848. Ask For Reprieve 9/28/2014
2849. Face Lines 9/28/2014
2850. Touch Of Humanism 9/29/2014
2851. Life Is Barren 9/30/2014
2852. Lot More To Feel 9/30/2014
2853. We Were Blessed 9/30/2014
2854. The Great People 9/30/2014
2855. Keep Feet 10/1/2014
2856. With Them 10/1/2014
2857. Be Patient 10/1/2014
2858. Special Characters 10/1/2014
2859. Rarely Seen 10/1/2014
2860. Hint 10/1/2014
2861. Human In Art 10/1/2014
2862. Well Behaved 10/1/2014
2863. Boy Last 10/2/2014
2864. Clean All 10/2/2014
2865. Special 10/2/2014
2866. Not Painful 10/3/2014
2867. At Center 10/3/2014
2868. Cruel Human 10/3/2014
2869. Peaceful Existence 10/3/2014
2870. In Purest Form 10/3/2014
2871. Presence Of Deity 10/3/2014
2872. Night Rest 10/3/2014
2873. Take Help 10/3/2014
2874. Fresh Air 10/4/2014
2875. दिन भी कयामत का होगा din bhi kayamat 10/4/2014
2876. It Is Real Test 10/4/2014
2877. Spring Or Autumn 10/4/2014
2878. No True 10/4/2014
2879. मजा कुछ और ही आएगा.. maja kuchh or hi 10/4/2014
2880. As You Like 10/4/2014

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/8/2010 10: 31: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18254711 - Bidding farewell
    Member: Alex Nodopaka
    Comment: It seems rhyme comes easy to you but I know how difficult it is. Your mastery of teh English language is commendable.

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  • John Maxwell John Maxwell (1/6/2010 12:04:00 PM)

    Thank you for your kind comment. I have just read your' Accept Everything.'
    What a great insight to ones everyday living, and life in general. Great write!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 4:30:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/2/2010 9: 08: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20864751 - Love to fly
    Member: Thomas Mofford
    Comment: I read many of your poems and they resonated for me.
    I garnered thoughts for my keeping. (thank you)
    I like poems that ask questions.
    Yah, it 'makes me think.'
    Sure, read my poems.
    I have an 'I am'poem.
    Happy New Year

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 4:29:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/2/2010 9: 08: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20864751 - Love to fly
    Member: Thomas Mofford
    Comment: I read many of your poems and they resonated for me.
    I garnered thoughts for my keeping. (thank you)
    I like poems that ask questions.
    Yah, it 'makes me think.'
    Sure, read my poems.
    I have an 'I am'poem.
    Happy New Year

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/1/2010 7:07:00 PM)

    te & Time: 1/1/2010 6: 49: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20139791 - I miss
    Member: Flames Of Desire Consumed By The Fire
    Comment: Such interesting construction of words...I'm more of a plainly spoken person than a complication of words. Still, I felt somewhat of a connection to it's meaning. You clearly have mastered the word of poetry to my knowledge. If I'm unable to fathom it wholly, It usually means I've found a more skilled, intelligent one than myself. Grand job.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/30/2009 8:30:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 12/30/2009 9: 35: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20754880 - Accept everything
    Member: Jack Price
    Comment: Dear Sir, Thank you very much for this poem. It will be moved to my favorite list. I enjoy your work and I am looking forward to reading more of your poems. There are a lot here! This is a 10 for me and that means a lot. It is hard for me to find someone who is similiar in writing style and their poems inspire me as well. I thank you for your writing style..... J. l.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/29/2009 9:47:00 PM)

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    Poem: 20817072 - At bay
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran

    Comment: You are a gifted writer and poetry flows from your pen so freely and smoothly like a running river. God bless you.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/28/2009 10:55:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 12/28/2009 9: 27: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 20754880 - Accept everything
    Member: Antonio Liao

    Comment: wow! a wonderful hope of harmony...so deep that my sphere of life.....
    rendezvous the beautiful tomorrow of my life... my success would be our
    prosperous banquet for your one of my best friend in land of poetry....
    may your poem be amongst the inspiring wisdom of these ages...
    may God bless you.... a star for you and a 10 +++++

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/26/2009 9:11:00 PM)

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    Poem: 20754857 - I will descend
    Member: Ronald Peat

    Comment: A higher power will squash us all like bugs because humans are evil. An interesting concept. I keep thinking man brings about his own demise due to his own actions. Which has little to do with God at all and has everything to do with mans greed, anger, lust, vanity and attachment to things. And that God is really only love, with the hope that we, his creation, will finally get it some day; someday before we all put an end to ourselves and the complete planet. If we could only begin with ourselves maybe the world would, could change. Every person needs to be the example. Change yourself and change the whole world. It starts with yourself in your own heart.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/26/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    From: Lindani Mahlangu (Siyabuswa South Africa; Male; 19)
    To: Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time: 12/24/2009 8: 39: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Wow wow wow


    A poem titled 'accept everything'
    thats a poem that deserve a round of applause, you are such a great writer, happy Xmas man n have a prosperous new year too. I like ur style of writing n all da courage n potential u have man, cheers

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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