Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 673,593 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2881. Except Him 10/5/2014
2882. One In Million 10/5/2014
2883. Its Induction 10/6/2014
2884. Love Gate 10/6/2014
2885. Selfish Approach 10/6/2014
2886. Life As Heaven 10/6/2014
2887. Fully Known 10/7/2014
2888. An Editor 10/7/2014
2889. With Mission 10/7/2014
2890. In Boom 10/7/2014
2891. Like River In 10/9/2014
2892. Nervous Animal 10/10/2014
2893. An Eclipse 10/8/2014
2894. From Deep Heart 10/10/2014
2895. Except Laying 10/10/2014
2896. God Created 10/10/2014
2897. #03 Rifles And Canvass Shoes 10/10/2014
2898. Our Life And Journey 10/11/2014
2899. मनाना तो पडेगा ... manana to padegaa 10/12/2014
2900. अपने ही परिश्रम का फल चखना.. apne hi parisram kaa 10/12/2014
2901. Another Struggle 10/12/2014
2902. Human Liking 10/12/2014
2903. Smile With Style 10/13/2014
2904. As Reward 10/13/2014
2905. Sacred Role 10/13/2014
2906. Keep Glory 10/14/2014
2907. Took Vow 10/15/2014
2908. There After 10/14/2014
2909. Only Love Word 10/16/2014
2910. Feel It Right 10/16/2014
2911. Such Cruelty 10/17/2014
2912. The Wrong Done 10/18/2014
2913. Endure 10/18/2014
2914. Travel 10/18/2014
2915. It Is Painful 10/19/2014
2916. Express Concern With Freedom 10/19/2014
2917. Factor To Realize 10/19/2014
2918. Jaw Attack 10/19/2014
2919. If Needed 10/19/2014
2920. Should Not Mind 10/20/2014

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/10/2009 6:53:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 11/10/2009 6: 31: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 20153775 - Backlash
    Member: Antonio Liao

    Comment: Beautifully landscape of poetry.....this is a poem for refreshing and for
    stress management.....just a ponder would mean a lot to unlock
    our emotional pain.....recommended for people who have no reason to
    pacify them selves....no reason the...Why of this world.....this would
    help their doubt.....thank you for sharing...and God bless you my friend
    a 10....and a Star

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/31/2009 6:06:00 AM)

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    Poem: 20033807 - I could explain
    Member: Lady Grace

    Comment: i wish you could explain sorrow
    as you see it in her eyes
    to stop you from loneliness
    keeping in your heart..

    i wish she could explain all the things
    that bothers inside you
    for it can comfort the surroundings
    and the environment within you...

    i wish i could see you in the best smile
    without jealousy and discomforts
    without hesitations and doubts
    wish a goodluck to BOTH....

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  • Mohd Murtuza Soofi (10/31/2009 3:22:00 AM)

    quiet tricky and nice use of words in most of your poetry

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  • Catrina Heart (10/30/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    My thankfulness for the sacred text
    you have engraved on my obelisk

    The hieroglyphics carved means so much
    In my journey to the seven seas

    You stood to be my beacon on the storm
    You stood as a tree seeing my history

    Thanks once again for the friendship
    Painting my days really worth remembering

    Thanks and love,
    Catrina Heart

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 9:49:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 10/28/2009 8: 59: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19017920 - Blood all over
    Member: Almedia Knight

    Comment: 'Blood spilled all over on ground' your poem is painful to read because of the truth it tells.As I write there're 2 wars spilling the blood of innocence men, women, and children. Where or who is the 'almighty'? Perhaps our hoping for 'it' to be rescued by the power of some unknown or myth, [ no respect to any one's belief just my personal opinion] seems to just give us a reason to relinquish our personal responsibilities. Hasmukh, without love in our hearts for the born and the unborn, there seems to be little hope for any changes in the minds and hearts of those who wishes to dominate and or suppress other human beings.In my country many pretend to care about the unborn but how can you be concern about the unborn but have no problem killing or having those that are born killed...it makes no sense to me.Anyway a good write. a 10+++

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 9:18:00 PM)

    Poem: 17309480 - All hopes against hope
    Member: Gracey Newman

    Comment: AHH...the ending is soo powerfull
    'Sun may go up with its destined time,
    target we should set as our object prime,
    luck may not favour but not let us down,
    plant will come up when seeds are sown '
    - beautiful

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 5:57:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/28/2009 12: 58: 00 AM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19924166 - Beautiful world
    Member: Vinod Kumar

    Comment: Nice job.. to identify and understand the almighty with the clear mind, that is this poem, in my humble openion there should be a godess to help the god that is Mother, who knows the cild`s needs well, thanks 10++

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:16:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 23: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19916139 - As a friend
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hasmukh bhai,
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem I liked the poem though I have a different style altogether-free verse..Your beginning lines make the point:
    'Can you tell me as a friend?
    Where the stars and world end
    May I fail to catch glimpse of beauty?
    Will not everyone will laugh at me with pity?
    A nicely rhymed poem. Rated high.
    Just a suggestion- a friendly one- if you want to continue with rhyming, you are to be careful about the metre as well.
    Rajkumar

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:15:00 AM)

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    Poem: 19917588 - Don't garland me
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hashmukhbhai.
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on an introspective poem of modern day degradation of values.I liked the poem and rated high. to me this is the best line of the poem:
    'tolerence is greatest key to success
    open to all and grant free access'

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:13:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 45: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19796378 - Hurt me again
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hashmukhlalbhai,
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem bubbling with confidence in Gandhian philosophy. I liked the poem though in some places you may re-work the rhyming pattern to have a better flow -personal opinion only.
    Saying that I have rated your poem highly. The beginning lines strikes me most:
    'Why don't you hurt me again?
    If that helps you to position regain
    Either way it has to be somebody's gain
    Concern and worry should not remain'
    Like an actor entering the stage, you have overwhelmed your audience simply with the beginning lines.
    Rajkumar

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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