Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,117 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2921. Should Not Mind 10/20/2014
2922. Future Use 10/20/2014
2923. To Befriend 10/20/2014
2924. Factor To Realize 10/19/2014
2925. Jaw Attack 10/19/2014
2926. If Needed 10/19/2014
2927. Story To Tell 10/20/2014
2928. Simple Enough 10/20/2014
2929. If Ever I Know 10/20/2014
2930. Never Feel Alone 10/21/2014
2931. As Limit 10/21/2014
2932. Believe And Trust 10/21/2014
2933. मंज़िल की और चल देते है.. manjhil ki or 10/21/2014
2934. Beauty Only 10/21/2014
2935. Clock Back Time 10/22/2014
2936. Not All Politicians 10/22/2014
2937. Outlook 10/23/2014
2938. Remain Aware 10/24/2014
2939. Bad Luck And Story 10/25/2014
2940. Not Scared 10/28/2014
2941. Use It 10/30/2014
2942. Simply Live 10/29/2014
2943. Man Made 10/30/2014
2944. Such Fancy 11/1/2014
2945. Be Kind 11/3/2014
2946. Civil Servants 11/4/2014
2947. Human Birth 11/4/2014
2948. One Must Learn 11/4/2014
2949. With Lovely Offer 11/4/2014
2950. Bring Happiness 11/4/2014
2951. We Have Tradition 11/4/2014
2952. For Good Work 11/5/2014
2953. With Head High 11/5/2014
2954. Evenly Caught 11/7/2014
2955. Chance To Build 11/8/2014
2956. Happy Noises 11/8/2014
2957. Safe Journey 11/9/2014
2958. I Will Not Cry 11/10/2014
2959. Sweetripples 11/10/2014
2960. Ample Time 11/10/2014

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:13:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 45: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19796378 - Hurt me again
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hashmukhlalbhai,
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem bubbling with confidence in Gandhian philosophy. I liked the poem though in some places you may re-work the rhyming pattern to have a better flow -personal opinion only.
    Saying that I have rated your poem highly. The beginning lines strikes me most:
    'Why don't you hurt me again?
    If that helps you to position regain
    Either way it has to be somebody's gain
    Concern and worry should not remain'
    Like an actor entering the stage, you have overwhelmed your audience simply with the beginning lines.
    Rajkumar

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 7: 47: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 17670074 - Cowardice act
    Member: Louis Rams

    Comment: the last verse says it all
    a cowards act is not remembered, but the damage it can do will be remembered.
    and as ou said it does not only apply to war, but to everything in life.

    excellent write a aten

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:04:00 AM)

    Benjamin Hallas (10/27/2009 10: 45: 00 PM)

    I have to say that this is one of the best poems that I have ever read. The message that this poem conveys is one that we should all heed. We all need to be conscious of the earth.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:02:00 AM)

    Yacov Mitchenko (10/27/2009 1: 57: 00 AM)

    The last stanza is the most revealing here. Peace and wholeness of being are more important than all the travails associated with success. A few points about success: there are often expectations brought to bear once we have succeeded, and we're often afraid we may not meet those expectations. Moreover, successes often incite envy, and there's always someone more successful than you. They aren't permanent either. Although I don't understand many lines here (because they're too abstract) , I appreciate the thoughtfulness of the poem as a whole.

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  • Catrina Heart (10/27/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Amathalal is a magnanimous dedicated modern poet of today’s’ generation. His works were all reflections of human realism in this world. Be it in individual, personal or global situations. The poet’s pieces surround to the problems arising to everyday’s life with much ado to poetic advices, claiming awareness with questions and motivations in every stanza.

    The poet makes his crafts in quatrain form of verses with fine ending rhymes. Using also vivid images so that the readers will be able to understand clearly what he wanted to convey. Grammar is less significant, bluntness or dullness of presentation is not that matters to him for he believes that the best verse will mark to the readers’ mind easily and the influence of each composition to the lives of the people is most valuable.

    Reading his works is such a pleasure and insightful. Every theme offers valuable lessons to ponder on, great take outs in eloquence.

    To the poet himself, Congratulations for the job well done! ! !

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  • Kris Templin (10/11/2009 9:25:00 PM)

    hello
    I just wanted to say that this is a very awesome poem
    a lot of feeling you put into it wow thanks for sharing

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  • Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (9/23/2009 7:19:00 AM)

    ........Tremendous efforts and good poetry are your forte.But the popularity terms are quite misleading for I was India`s first last year for two weeks... Efforts for transmission of thoughts must not be ever left aloof. All the best Amathalal

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  • Brittney Miller (8/16/2009 9:17:00 PM)

    Very good I quit enjoyed it

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  • Tear Of An Angel S.R.B.W. (8/15/2009 1:31:00 PM)

    Your Words Flow Well With Truth And Capture The Very Essence Of The Heart. A Wonderful Poet Indeed. **Blessings**

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  • p.a. noushad p.a. noushad (8/11/2009 4:52:00 AM)

    my heart gets wings on your verses

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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