Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 421,662 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

17161. Butterflies Around 6/23/2009
17162. Can Any One Tell Me? 6/17/2009
17163. Close The Eyes 10/4/2009
17164. Asking More 5/29/2009
17165. Deep In Love 4/19/2009
17166. Child 4/14/2009
17167. Character Assassination 5/29/2009
17168. Dead Nights 5/26/2009
17169. Justice Delayed 9/24/2009
17170. Cry Not 4/16/2009
17171. Beauty 9/19/2009
17172. At First Sight 6/5/2009
17173. Blood All Over 8/24/2009
17174. Blot On Humanity 5/12/2009
17175. Anywhere You Like 6/30/2009
17176. At Cross Road 4/10/2009
17177. Brown Eyes 6/23/2009
17178. All Hopes Against Hope 5/11/2009
17179. A Place Called 6/4/2009
17180. All Dreams Not Come True ###309(In 500) 5/25/2009
17181. Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ### 4/17/2009

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Luwi Habte Luwi Habte (6/24/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Dear poet

    It is so hard to talk about you and about the poetry of yours too
    I really appreciate you for every thing you write and create too
    you are one of the greatest poet in our alive nation
    keep in doing on it dear
    well done and great job
    May God be with you
    luwi

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  • Joyce Lee (6/22/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    wow you sure know your work, a poet is a poet well done nicely put

  • Vanita Thakkar (6/20/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    Jai Shree Krishna, Hasmukhbhai.
    I am delighted to read poems by Gujju poets on this web-site.
    Your poems are simple and contain the essence of wisdom you have gathered in the journey of your life - very precious. We readers, owe Thanks to you for sharing the real assets of your life with us. Thanks and Regards.
    Vanita.

  • Richard Scarbrough (6/19/2009 7:40:00 PM)

    keep writing it does not matter your age
    people will still read page after page.
    i myself am 52 years of age you know,
    and several writers started off slow.

  • Shawnee Gonzalez (6/18/2009 8:29:00 PM)

    hey i've read your poems and they are amazing i hope you keep writing
    ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥

  • Oluwajobi John (5/28/2009 6:52:00 PM)

    miss u i luv that... but dont miss me bcos i dont wanna miss u too

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    I am ex-serviceman from indian air force with literary test for poems.i have composed poems on numerous subjects with simple appeal. I hope readers may like and request them to comment critically

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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