Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 565,413 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

441. A Time And Wounds 10/9/2010
442. No Appearance 10/9/2010
443. A Hold Back 10/10/2010
444. A Way Of Living 10/10/2010
445. A Pain For Birth 10/11/2010
446. A Cry From Poor 10/11/2010
447. A New Concept 10/11/2010
448. A Democracy Not Alone 10/12/2010
449. A Crazy Look 10/12/2010
450. A Wild Life 10/13/2010
451. Always Miss Me 10/13/2010
452. A Real Peace 10/13/2010
453. A Life Called Bubble 10/13/2010
454. At Sudden Death 10/13/2010
455. A Sans Conscience 10/14/2010
456. A Close End 10/14/2010
457. Am I Problem 10/16/2010
458. A Complete Resonance 10/16/2010
459. A Feeling For Poet 10/16/2010
460. A Ladies To Have 10/19/2010
461. A Shame 10/19/2010
462. A Noble Animal 10/19/2010
463. A Silence Can Keep 10/19/2010
464. A Curse To Be Sought 10/19/2010
465. A Try To Be 10/19/2010
466. A Love Is Magic 10/19/2010
467. A Inner Voice 10/19/2010
468. A Love To Be 10/19/2010
469. A Full Or Part Time 10/19/2010
470. A No To Blow 10/20/2010
471. A Last Momentum 10/20/2010
472. A Close Look 10/20/2010
473. A Many Solutions 10/20/2010
474. A Past Behind 10/21/2010
475. A Regret For Ever 10/21/2010
476. A Lone Home 10/21/2010
477. A Moon And Stars 10/23/2010
478. A Health Concept 10/23/2010
479. A Perfect Drive 10/23/2010
480. A Mistake Is To Be Pardoned 10/24/2010

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2016 6:27:00 AM)

    SoulNectar Swansh The strata in a nutshell........

    The path has to be created
    And equated
    With what went wrong
    It is time to rejoice with singing a song

    Thank you Dear Hasmukh Jee.......
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2016 5:12:00 PM)

    Ronaldo Brandao Brochado Ronaldo Brandao Brochado LIKE... your Poetry is strong and your way of writing is different of all that I have seen... need to read more to have a final idea! ! ! ! Unlike · Reply · 1 · 19 mins
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2016 12:10:00 AM)

    Hasmukh ji, thanks for your kind words about our efforts to encourage writers. I believe that the postings in Your Space - poetry, opinion, fiction - cover a wide spectrum of themes from nature, science, philosophy and human relations. Among the younger writers there could be an inclination towards nature, an easier theme. You have a tendency to look for feedbacks from readers. Given the nature and sensibilities of a group, this may or may not happen as per your expectation. We should not worry about it as we basically write to express our innermost thoughts to feel relieved and fulfilled. GSP Rao, Hyderabad Oct 1,2016
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    x I am caught reminds of Hamlet. Your best poetry is when you express your anger and despair. This is true voice of feeling. KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Oct 02,2016
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2016 12:10:00 AM)

    I appreciate....

    Hasmukh ji, thanks for your kind words about our efforts to encourage writers. I believe that the postings in Your Space - poetry, opinion, fiction - cover a wide spectrum of themes from nature, science, philosophy and human relations. Among the younger writers there could be an inclination towards nature, an easier theme. You have a tendency to look for feedbacks from readers. Given the nature and sensibilities of a group, this may or may not happen as per your expectation. We should not worry about it as we basically write to express our innermost thoughts to feel relieved and fulfilled. GSP Rao, Hyderabad Oct 1,2016
    1 Oct by hasmukh amathalal | Reply
    picture of hasmukh amathalal
    x I am caught reminds of Hamlet. Your best poetry is when you express your anger and despair. This is true voice of feeling. KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Oct 02,2016
    today

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2016 5:26:00 PM)

    Y'ove Met Kvng Favz The last line was a blast!






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    I gained and lost
    but at what cost!
    It was a priceless acquaintance
    the life with so much importance.
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    Owai John
    Owai John Nice one, a good creative touch
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    Chioma Ngaikedi
    Chioma Ngaikedi hmmmmm. you deserve a standing ovation
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2016 6:10:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Sir..thank you for responding so beautifully.
    Dear Maria, Thank you very much. I am glad you liked it.

    Supratik Sen, Kolkata
    Sep 29,2016

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2016 6:08:00 PM)

    All places...Your poetic responses are always a bonus along with the original text Hasmukh sir. Thank you.

    Shweta Tiwari, Ghaziabad
    Sep 29,2016

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2016 10:46:00 AM)

    All festivals.....I’m overwhelmed by the assessment of Mehta-Ji giving a panoramic view of the Indian communities living in harmony irrespective of religious and numerous other differences which is reflected outside our national boundary also.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2016 5:43:00 AM)

    Dear Poet your composition is from a poetic mind with great depth in life's vissitudes. I thank you profusely . Robert
    4 hours ago

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/27/2016 10:04:00 AM)

    Randhir Kaur One of the outstanding, top popular poet of poemhunter, active member on facebook as well as Google, retired Indian Army officer and an amazing fatherly figure..who have penned such a beautiful poetry for me is an achievement with any hardship.I am elevated to such a level that I can see the sight of the snowy clouds. Feeling really blessed and an honoured to receive such words from Mehta Sir. I guess thats why I am delighted in a way I have never been ere. Thank you so very much for your support dear Sir.
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Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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