Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 594,788 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

761. A Real Deep Love 11/27/2010
762. I May Miss Her 12/2/2010
763. A Hidden Treasure 12/2/2010
764. As An Artist 12/3/2010
765. A Mental Injury 12/3/2010
766. A Hostile Environment 12/3/2010
767. Only One Reason 12/3/2010
768. All Roses 12/5/2010
769. Just Keep Them Guessing 12/6/2010
770. A Moral Crisis 12/6/2010
771. Bring Down Adversary 12/7/2010
772. A Full Attention 12/7/2010
773. An Imprint In Mind 12/7/2010
774. A Primary Knowledge 12/7/2010
775. Move Confidently 12/8/2010
776. Try To Come Over 12/8/2010
777. Woman Only 12/8/2010
778. A Silence Is An Answer 12/8/2010
779. Wish, He Had 12/8/2010
780. Message From Me 12/9/2010
781. To Read A Person 12/9/2010
782. The Utmost Secrecy 12/9/2010
783. A Waving Hand 12/10/2010
784. He Is Dead 12/10/2010
785. The World Peace 12/11/2010
786. Have An Answer 12/11/2010
787. Rome And Juliet 12/15/2010
788. Life Full Of Surprises 12/15/2010
789. May Surely Cease 12/16/2010
790. A Patch Up 12/16/2010
791. The Nature Is Giving Up 12/17/2010
792. Take It One And Only One 12/17/2010
793. It Is Not Good Sign 12/17/2010
794. No Hidden Agenda 12/18/2010
795. Take One Advice 12/18/2010
796. Even Epics Mention 12/18/2010
797. A Differemt World 12/18/2010
798. Ultimate Goal Of Woman 12/18/2010
799. Myself And Nobody 12/19/2010
800. Don'T Run Away 12/19/2010

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2015 4:46:00 AM)

    agdish Sahai Sharma · Friends with Shalini Samuel
    Dear brother Hasmukhmehta
    Glad to know.that
    u r a good poet.
    I find humour in ur poem.
    Loving.
    Thanks.
    Best wishes.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2015 10:49:00 PM)

    The success tale


    Date & Time: 10/10/2015 9: 12: 00 AM
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    Poem: 43419241 - The Success Tale
    Member: Luis Estable
    Comment: This reads more like a prose poem though I do not like to use the term for I am of the opinion that a poem is a poem or it is not. I like here the story that your tell even though it is not told in a very poetic way.


    I urge you to force yourself to go a bit more into the poetic way and try not to sound too much like prose, but in all fairness, I had fun reading this try.. Keep it up! You showed me that you have the ability to tell a story.

    Luis Estable

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2015 3:02:00 AM)

    The world and people

    A passionate verse, most thoughtful! Dorothy APWLTS
    8 hours ago by Dorothy A. Holmes to The world and people

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/2/2015 11:59:00 AM)

    Verily, pain, endurance and morality source a poet for his poetry........10

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2015 8:24:00 PM)

    Lovely tribute to Mother!

    When it comes to mother all become a poet. So much said and unsaid things all carry inside.

    Mom you are ‘Wow’

    But always ‘How’?



    Maaya Dev, Hyderabad
    30 Sep,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2015 8:23:00 PM)

    Lovely tribute to Mother!

    When it comes to mother all become a poet. So much said and unsaid things all carry inside.

    Mom you are ‘Wow’

    But always ‘How’?



    Maaya Dev, Hyderabad
    30 Sep,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2015 7:58:00 AM)

    Nice Tribute Hasmukh Ji. Even Modi got emotional and paid a glorious tribute to his mother during the town hall meeting a few days back in California. Tribute and dedications to all mothers, everywhere!

    ................Prabhu Bharathan, USA
    9/29/2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2015 8:33:00 AM)

    Worst sufferer

    Satyananda Sarangi likes this.
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    Satyananda Sarangi Agree sir! !
    Not a word, and a mention so rare,
    with his quest, he keeps on,
    and not a day, not a night with care,
    suffering as the destiny's son.

    Years elapse, and generations pass,
    his thought recovered from a torn diary page,
    to garner accolades, he is no more,
    having gripped by death before an age...
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2015 8:01:00 PM)

    Self indecision

    Absolutely agreeable verse with great flow to the rhymes. Nice poem.
    15 Sep by Keith Labonte to Self indecision

    Really great look on life! Its a great reminder that you're the only one who decides how you feel. Well done!
    15 Sep by Alyssa Henly to Self indecision

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/15/2015 9:52:00 AM)

    Grace Singh, Nella Loagnod, Kanusing Solanki
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Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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