Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 594,285 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

921. Some Years Ago 1/31/2011
922. Door To Door 1/31/2011
923. To Kill A Son 1/31/2011
924. Ups And Down In Life 1/31/2011
925. There Is No One 2/1/2011
926. Silence With Tongue 2/1/2011
927. Million Men March 2/1/2011
928. Life Is Mini Circus 2/1/2011
929. Totally Unaware 2/3/2011
930. Deep Troubles Sometimes 2/3/2011
931. We Have Failed To Care 2/3/2011
932. Peace March To Square 2/4/2011
933. To Learn At School 2/4/2011
934. Trace The Origin 2/4/2011
935. Many Things Are Unsaid 2/4/2011
936. To Deny Natural Divide 2/4/2011
937. With Tragic Calls 2/5/2011
938. Graced By Almighty 2/5/2011
939. Crash At The Gates 2/5/2011
940. Nothing Remains 2/5/2011
941. Love Never Ends 2/5/2011
942. Frozen Relation 1/27/2011
943. For Number Of Years 2/2/2011
944. Help Me Out 2/2/2011
945. Crisis Deepens 2/2/2011
946. Displayed At Once 2/7/2011
947. Far Beyond Horizon 2/8/2011
948. Turn To His Fold 2/8/2011
949. The Light To Go 2/8/2011
950. The Inseparable Part 2/8/2011
951. May Remain As Bye Gone 2/8/2011
952. After Sun Shine 2/9/2011
953. The Different Attitude 2/9/2011
954. Against His Will 2/6/2011
955. In All Colors 2/7/2011
956. Totally Inactive 2/9/2011
957. Nothing To Plead 2/9/2011
958. Proof Or No Proof 2/9/2011
959. Remain As Human 2/9/2011
960. Your Own Style 2/10/2011

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2015 8:25:00 PM)

    John Follett You use words makes me feel the spirit movement.In a organised way.a reality of life zest.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2015 7:02:00 PM)

    Little belief

    Juha Huovilainen (Sweden ;)
    Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time:
    6/28/2015 12: 17: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Re: Re: Re: Re: Little Belief
    I have seen the very impressive collection of your poems and quality has absolutely not been compensated by quantity. Reading your poems is a really inspiring excercise and from a songwriter point of view, you most often have a beatiful rhytm in your sentences making it easy to apply them to various melodies.
    Looking forward to be able to send you some ready or at least half-done matewrial based on your poems.


  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/27/2015 10:34:00 AM)

    In your absence....

    Susan Lacovara (6/27/2015 8: 31: 00 AM)
    Absence is hard for the soul to accept. Thus, we keep looking for familiar faces, even if circumstance erases them from our daily life. Resonating piece of poetry. PEACE (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2015 7:40:00 PM)

    Midern poetry

    Date & Time: 6/21/2015 6: 50: 00 PM
    Remove this comment

    Poem: 18063236 - Modern Poetry

    Member: Kpekot Egweteng
    Comment: You have said it all. Poetry now does not define our moment.I agree our poetic soul has died long back. But we can still exhume it.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2015 4:22:00 AM)

    It is cool...

    you're always consistent with your work good job definitely a veteran writer
    6 hours ago by Adam Sandler is God to It is cool

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2015 2:29:00 AM)

    With the reason

    All truth herein woven with such skilfull pen. I admire your choice of words, so wonderful to read. Thank you for sharing this deep poetry, and thank you for the lessons I have learned here, Hasmukh Sir.
    5 hours ago by Sylvia Frances Chan to With the reason

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/2/2015 2:07:00 AM)

    Final wish

    Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/1/2015 10: 35: 00 PM)
    Commendable work... Your last 2 stanzas are strong and eloquently express passion and romance in equivalence to the majestic beauty of the image of the Rose you posted below your poem...Try and be more cognizant of prepositions, and certain nouns that require the use of the preposition ''THE preceding it...///// IE: ' '''And staying On floor', really should read 'Staying on 'THE' floor'. And, if I could be so bold to further suggest that...''Lying on the floor' might even make your effort shine brighter...however, that's your call, not mine...Just an IMO, is all ~FjR~ (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2015 7:31:00 PM)

    Golden fame

    Dear Mehta-ji
    To share
    The knowledge of universe
    With message of co-existence and peace
    You've brought out the essence of the publication in 'The Statesman'

    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Jun 01,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/25/2015 7:51:00 PM)

    Inward happiness

    Hasmukh ji, as usual your poetic appreciation takes me years back when you had a stanza or two for each poem on Your Space. You keep the fire burning. Thank you, dear friend

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/19/2015 7:11:00 PM)

    Same way to exist...

    Omotosho Craig Olanrewaju Mr Hasmukh Mehta... You have got the rhythm, I look up to being a great writer like you when I get to your age...
    You always have my RESPECT and admiration...
    I Love what you do...Sir
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Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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