Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 566,497 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

921. From Thousand Of Miles 3/17/2011
922. Not Forgotten 3/17/2011
923. Doom For Relation 3/18/2011
924. Tsunami And After 3/18/2011
925. Distinct From Others 3/18/2011
926. Shy And Shame 3/18/2011
927. It Will Tell 3/19/2011
928. I Am Blind 3/5/2011
929. Miles Away 3/5/2011
930. Live Without Him 3/5/2011
931. Ordinary Man 3/6/2011
932. Like Infant 3/6/2011
933. Only To Be Blamed 3/6/2011
934. Modern And Educated World 3/6/2011
935. Difficult To Forget 3/6/2011
936. Different Tratment 3/6/2011
937. Her Mind 3/6/2011
938. Lost And Forgotten 3/7/2011
939. Should Not Happen 3/7/2011
940. Lost In Crowd 3/19/2011
941. Claim On High Note 3/20/2011
942. Life Is Perfect 3/20/2011
943. A Lovely And Beautiful Song 3/20/2011
944. Choose The Right 3/21/2011
945. We Always Pray 3/21/2011
946. Own Perception 3/22/2011
947. In The Field 3/22/2011
948. Destined To Be 3/22/2011
949. No Longer Carry 3/23/2011
950. Difficult To Contain 3/23/2011
951. Chance To Rise 3/23/2011
952. Take Her Over 3/23/2011
953. Liz No More 3/23/2011
954. Best And Fine Qualities 3/24/2011
955. Dreamy Mind 3/24/2011
956. Believe The Eyes 3/24/2011
957. Without Interruptions 3/24/2011
958. Work Hard 3/25/2011
959. God And Master 3/29/2011
960. In Positive Manner 3/29/2011

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2015 4:22:00 AM)

    It is cool...

    you're always consistent with your work good job definitely a veteran writer
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2015 2:29:00 AM)

    With the reason

    All truth herein woven with such skilfull pen. I admire your choice of words, so wonderful to read. Thank you for sharing this deep poetry, and thank you for the lessons I have learned here, Hasmukh Sir.
    5 hours ago by Sylvia Frances Chan to With the reason

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/2/2015 2:07:00 AM)

    Final wish

    Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/1/2015 10: 35: 00 PM)
    Commendable work... Your last 2 stanzas are strong and eloquently express passion and romance in equivalence to the majestic beauty of the image of the Rose you posted below your poem...Try and be more cognizant of prepositions, and certain nouns that require the use of the preposition ''THE preceding it...///// IE: ' '''And staying On floor', really should read 'Staying on 'THE' floor'. And, if I could be so bold to further suggest that...''Lying on the floor' might even make your effort shine brighter...however, that's your call, not mine...Just an IMO, is all ~FjR~ (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2015 7:31:00 PM)

    Golden fame

    Dear Mehta-ji
    To share
    The knowledge of universe
    With message of co-existence and peace
    You've brought out the essence of the publication in 'The Statesman'


    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Jun 01,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/25/2015 7:51:00 PM)

    Inward happiness

    Hasmukh ji, as usual your poetic appreciation takes me years back when you had a stanza or two for each poem on Your Space. You keep the fire burning. Thank you, dear friend

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/19/2015 7:11:00 PM)

    Same way to exist...

    Omotosho Craig Olanrewaju Mr Hasmukh Mehta... You have got the rhythm, I look up to being a great writer like you when I get to your age...
    You always have my RESPECT and admiration...
    I Love what you do...Sir
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2015 6:24:00 AM)

    Life is exciting...

    Unni Krishnan Atiyodi Birth days come and go/ How fruitfully we use our time is important/In that you have every reason to be satisfied/You spend time fruitfully/Your poems may be thousands in number!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/17/2015 7:54:00 PM)

    Life is exciting...

    Pamela Moorehead I to like to rhyme it sounds good phoenetically and takes on the rhythm of music. Poetry is also about vibration for me as a writer, meter registers for me in rhyme or I choose not to rhyme. I personally have no favorite style of poetry when it comes to enjoying others. Happy Birthday MV Venkatraman, fluent Poet and smooth to my ear
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/17/2015 6:59:00 AM)

    God shall not

    Malik Zafar likes this.

    Malik Zafar Yes of course heaven is in the feet of mothers. He who make her happy will be granted best place in heaven. Love mums eaen heaven and alse get blessings of Allah
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/16/2015 7:06:00 PM)

    In waste seldom

    This is a poem from a true soldier which is inspiring. Many thanks for this poetic gift to me.


    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    May 16,2015

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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