Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 563,786 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

1161. Cry For Her 6/16/2011
1162. A Shy Boy 6/16/2011
1163. Rained Heavily 6/16/2011
1164. Feel At Ease 6/19/2011
1165. Not For One Day 6/15/2011
1166. At Her Zenith 6/15/2011
1167. Midnight Scare 6/19/2011
1168. Loss Of Life 6/19/2011
1169. Sun Shine 6/19/2011
1170. Know Your Talent 6/21/2011
1171. Kind Of Confusion 6/22/2011
1172. Free Bird 6/22/2011
1173. Difficult To Maintian 6/23/2011
1174. As He Does 6/23/2011
1175. Set To Receive 6/25/2011
1176. Rock Has Slope 6/25/2011
1177. I Can'T Dare 6/26/2011
1178. In Heaven 6/26/2011
1179. Such Memory 6/26/2011
1180. Nothing To Complain 6/26/2011
1181. Time To Decide 6/27/2011
1182. Not To Keep Us Free 6/27/2011
1183. Dynastic Rule 6/27/2011
1184. Felt It Badly 6/28/2011
1185. Can Turn A Tide 6/28/2011
1186. Hell Will Not Fall 6/28/2011
1187. Rise And Fall Not Ultimate 6/29/2011
1188. No To Dirty Game 6/29/2011
1189. No Dirty Games 6/29/2011
1190. With Human Aspects 6/30/2011
1191. Not Exact 7/1/2011
1192. Not Too High 7/1/2011
1193. Claim True Beauty 6/24/2011
1194. Any Parallel 6/24/2011
1195. Love Is Disease 6/24/2011
1196. If There Were 6/24/2011
1197. Bitter And Sour 7/1/2011
1198. Shape And Body 7/3/2011
1199. Nothing As Promised 7/4/2011
1200. Strong Metal 7/2/2011

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2014 8:36:00 PM)

    Useless exercise..

    that we continue to believe in our thoughts... is such a fallacy


    Rhea D'souza10 minutes ago
    loved the line..and try to sleep like dead....wanting to escape.. beautiful fast pace

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/21/2014 11:20:00 PM)

    MAGICAL TUNE

    cuckoo sings

    KR BALAKRISHNAN24 minutes ago
    Your poems are like cuckoo songs, so serene, lovely, musical... Bringing peace to hearts. Keep it up please.
    Comment +1
    Very good


    Seema Ali 27 minutes ago
    Your poem talks about the touch of? God in nature excellently.The way you have described the birds is great.Thanks for sharing.Brought a smile to my eyes.
    Comment +1
    Godly beauty for the bird that sings


    Robert Andrews21 minutes ago
    a nice piece about the cuckoo Ive never heard one If you have, read it and your review will be more accurate than mine.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/16/2014 6:22:00 PM)

    Many friends...

    Fully agreed with this great poem. Thanks for sharing.


    Partha Sarathi Paul, guskara-burdwan
    Oct 16,2014

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/2/2014 7:24:00 AM)

    Dream packed drama...

    Sarah Russell Yet, power lives beyond werds... absolutely! ! ! Poet, you Rule.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2014 10:29:00 AM)

    I am happy, , , ,
    By far the best poem


    Daniel FranckLess than a minute ago
    This is the best poem I ever read on this website. It's a nice peice of art work keep up the good work

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2014 6:13:00 AM)

    Rock star...Shows you care about the world. Other than just yourself.

    Lacie Mark5 hours ago
    Keep writing poems about world changes and politics. It's your thing :)
    Comment +1
    Wonderful

    Virginia R5 hours ago
    Your ending stanza was very strong
    Comment +1
    good poem


    iron maiden fan4 hours ago
    a leader or a rock star what do we need?
    Nice


    Ahmad Al_khatat5 hours ago
    Very crate
    Comment +1
    good


    Jeckle Hyde5 hours ago
    good

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2014 2:37:00 AM)

    Real wisdom.....
    Love This


    BabyGirl26 minutes ago
    And the poor will enter God's kingdom of riches and be as kings.
    Comment +1
    wow


    Chelsea Hamel29 minutes ago
    You sir are humble and a great poet.
    Comment +1
    Yes Indeed.... Quite Impressive Work! ! ! !


    Michael Donovan27 minutes ago
    Such a nice reading experience has been provided by this formidable piece.
    Comment +1
    well done


    Sai Krishna31 minutes ago
    beautiful

  • Kassem Oude Kassem Oude (9/25/2014 9:53:00 AM)

    Hello, I am amazed by this poem and others too as I read all you show, this is a special one. I would hold your hand tightly and shake well. Thank you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2014 9:24:00 PM)

    NO one to question....

    Beautiful


    Zachary Kulkin11 minutes ago
    A true testament to this time and age.
    Comment +1
    good


    Mr. Awesome9 minutes ago
    I like how you expand to analogize the degradement you are speaking of with the entire earth falling apart, and stand for freedom no matter what gets in the way. The only punctuation in the poem is a question mark, which i like. I think the third line has a typo and should say generations.
    Comment +1
    Intriguing

    Jaime Leal10 minutes ago
    Well written poem. A beautifully worded look at the state of nature in today.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2014 8:57:00 PM)

    She does

    A true man speaking of a true woman.


    Amanda SteinbrecherLess than a minute ago
    She must really love and be dedicated to you and her family. No woman will give her best day in and day out unless they have firm reason to. Cherish her dearly!
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Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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