Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 597,147 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

1321. A Final Gift 5/28/2011
1322. From The Back 5/31/2011
1323. Leave Everything 5/27/2011
1324. Dark Days Are Over 5/27/2011
1325. But Not For Ever 5/27/2011
1326. Bribe With Conviction 6/3/2011
1327. Best Friend 6/3/2011
1328. Sun May Shine 6/3/2011
1329. Difficult As Friend 6/3/2011
1330. Life To Define 6/3/2011
1331. Feel Safe In Cell 6/4/2011
1332. Those Helpless 6/4/2011
1333. Engraved Marble 6/4/2011
1334. Quality Or Color 6/5/2011
1335. So Many Reasons 6/2/2011
1336. In Past Years 6/2/2011
1337. Endless Search 6/2/2011
1338. Can'T Do Away 6/1/2011
1339. Wish And Pray 6/5/2011
1340. Just Prayer 6/8/2011
1341. Future Dream 6/8/2011
1342. Face Some Gap 6/8/2011
1343. Don'T Run Away 6/8/2011
1344. About Illicit Relation 6/8/2011
1345. Some Importance 6/8/2011
1346. To Be Anchored 6/9/2011
1347. Don'T Hurt 6/9/2011
1348. Prayer Words 6/6/2011
1349. Rest With People 6/6/2011
1350. Towards The Sky 6/6/2011
1351. Simple Message 6/7/2011
1352. Cat Heart 6/9/2011
1353. Of Moral Standards 6/9/2011
1354. Frozen To Death 6/10/2011
1355. I Decided To Be 6/11/2011
1356. My Illusions 6/11/2011
1357. No One Realizes 6/12/2011
1358. I Feel Great 6/12/2011
1359. Divine Mission 6/12/2011
1360. Away From The Scene 6/13/2011

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/26/2014 9:10:00 AM)

    Wiih least humanity

    Denis Brezik hey old friend when the world is gone when evil weeps it will put out the fires of hell who can argue then we had our second to think.Nice to see you again in another group your writings always inspiring and stay with me seek peace in this world.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2014 8:12:00 PM)

    wise people

    Wise people- - - valuable asset of the society- -

    Subhashchandra Adhav10 hours ago
    Good poem- - -
    Good read- -

    Well done
    Comment +1
    Nice poem

    Duane Lynch10 hours ago
    It is good fortune and grace when a leader is placed amongst us, a wise man/woman with which to put out trust in but it is not luck... That person has been put there for a reason, and who are we to question that reason.

    Great write :)
    Comment +1
    this was plane wise itself

    Arsi Ibro10 hours ago
    i like it

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2014 8:08:00 PM)

    Wise people

    Perfect poem by seasoned poet

    Shantanu Chindhade10 hours ago
    Tells you a sort of philosophy of sophisticated society.Job well done,
    Shantanu chindhade
    Comment +1
    nice poem

    adam fox10 hours ago
    good work :)
    Comment +1
    I understand the neurotic thought

    Tom Kennedy10 hours ago
    Hidden one thinks

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2014 8:43:00 AM)

    Common wealth games


    darran hardwick1 minute ago
    My favorite lines are:

    Let flags of all countries rise high
    With glory and honor to our delight
    Sportsmen can create special space

    Sans color, creed and race

    Well Done.
    D. H.
    Comment +1
    great concept

    Crisanto Acenas3 minutes ago
    great mind behind piece

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/23/2014 9:23:00 PM)

    Rosy flower


    Matt Griffin3 minutes ago
    I like the use of charity and kindness is world so despair
    Comment +1
    Great use of description

    Jair Massiah2 minutes ago
    Lovely words used to describe this character Rosy. Is she human, goddess or flower? The poet paints it wonderfully and leaves it up to the interpretation of the reader. There are a few grammatical errors, but that is easily fixed! ;)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2014 6:23:00 AM)

    make others...

    Good thought over poem- - - - - -

    Subhashchandra Adhav2 hours ago
    Well composed- - - - - -
    Good read
    Comment +1
    Such Beautiful Wisdom Hasmukh!

    Krystal Koru From Down Under2 hours ago
    Love your words of wisdom...to share the truth is wonderful....to share a poem
    is an honor....

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2014 9:29:00 AM)

    It is garden

    The eclectic Mehta

    Richard Schwartz2 hours ago
    Interesting as always. The Mehta miracle vision.
    It is garden- God waters his plants.
    Ah...yes, I see and I believe too-
    The truth of this miracle is simply before us.
    Thank you my Lord for all your blessings and vision.
    I do see the rain.
    The song writer J.C. Fogerty wrote of this miracle
    and asked the question.. I want to know have you
    ever seen the rain? and he did exclaim furthet
    coming down in love again! . You just might want to have
    a listen Misseur Mehta. Happy listening! . You will enjoy...


    Comment +1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2014 7:01:00 AM)

    Why to forget?

    John Ravenscroft8 hours ago
    Hasmukh, well done! !
    Comment +1

    Melissa Carroll8 hours ago
    I love the flow. I am especially drawn to the lines, if we are in this beautiful world, nothing should be told, it has to be observed, if we feel it is deserved. For me that means that everything is beautiful, not just the things that society believes deserve to be called beautiful. I could be entirely off base here in meaning, but that's what reached out and grabbed me and what I took from it.
    Comment +1
    Everything happens for a reason and it should be embraced rather than fought

    Rebbecca Martin8 hours ago

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 7:26:00 PM)

    I write...

    Suzanne Hartman Johnson2 minutes ago
    I like it. Its light and fluffy.. check out some of mine...
    Comment +1
    Good to know

    Dumka Vincent6 minutes ago
    I feel your passion
    Comment +1
    A poem about writing, why people write and the enjoyment of writing, which as he describes is natural.

    Joshua FordLess than a minute ago
    ' I write' is a simple poem with a clear meaning, describing how natural poetry is to him, comparing to being a part of him as his body. There are five stanzas with four lines each and there is a near rhyming pattern of a, a, b, b, which gives the poem structure. At times i feel like he has forced words in to fit, or either chosen words merely on their accessibility to the poem, than the actual creative and moral effect. At times it loses interest and is hard to understand. The imagery is very good, using metaphors to get the message it across. The poem was good and the meaning was very clear. :)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 7:19:00 PM)

    Rise for all

    Rise for all- - - - -Wake up call- - -

    Subhashchandra Adhav10 hours ago
    Reflect ignorance with nature's relation- - - - - -I feel this is conveniently adopted or accepted ignorance in the name of progress and sometimes ignored ignorance for the sake of development with nature's as well as human relation too- - - - - - -I fully subscribe to the views of the poet- - - - - -
    Very thought provoking and insightful piece of work- - - - - Great job done.

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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To The Invisible Friend

To the founder
Wednesday,17th October 2018

I have seized the chance
to write on the personality at once
not keeping in view of his status
but mainly to concentrate on his face line

what does he think?

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