Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 595,230 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

1521. For People To Digest 8/9/2011
1522. Rare Gesture 8/9/2011
1523. Down The Line 8/10/2011
1524. Safety And Demand 8/10/2011
1525. Llittle Quiet 8/10/2011
1526. Never Lets You To Sleep 8/11/2011
1527. Fire Rages 8/10/2011
1528. Money Love 8/11/2011
1529. Holy Home 8/10/2011
1530. Look Back 8/10/2011
1531. Little Quiet 8/11/2011
1532. Love That Makes You 8/11/2011
1533. Love To Speak 8/12/2011
1534. Important Place 8/5/2011
1535. Simple Act 8/4/2011
1536. Life In Motion 8/5/2011
1537. If The Wealth... 8/6/2011
1538. Above The Level 8/7/2011
1539. To Go Off 8/7/2011
1540. Friendship Day Appeal 8/7/2011
1541. You Dear Father 8/12/2011
1542. All May Not Believe 8/13/2011
1543. Save The Country 8/13/2011
1544. One Sided 8/13/2011
1545. Root Out Corruption 8/13/2011
1546. In Midst Of Crowd 8/12/2011
1547. Mental Peace 8/14/2011
1548. Either Perform Or Perish 8/13/2011
1549. Oh, Love 8/14/2011
1550. Not All Of Sudden 8/16/2011
1551. On Threshold 8/16/2011
1552. You Really Bother 8/16/2011
1553. Cleverly Laid 8/17/2011
1554. In Any Case 8/17/2011
1555. How Gone Tomorrow! 8/18/2011
1556. Grow The Seeds 8/17/2011
1557. Adore Donkey 8/18/2011
1558. Not Regular Visitor 8/5/2011
1559. Seldom Won 8/13/2011
1560. Choice Of Life Time 8/13/2011

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Richard Beevor (5/29/2014 2:33:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comments, much appreciated and an honour from someone as you, I would like to be considered one of the top 500 poets, you stand in exalted company and well deserved too, I have read many of your poems and they are extremely high standard, please keep writing, its a pleasure to read your work.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/28/2014 5:46:00 PM)

    You write......Feeling the Nature around

    Bhuwan Joshi20 hours ago
    Definitely a nice pointer to those of us who have no time to stand and stare the gifts of Nature......
    Comment +1
    Good but could be better

    Arsi Anon20 hours ago
    It sounds incomplete. You should revise the ending. Also, you have a few grammar mistakes. But the idea is there and it is strong. It's a pretty creative idea, I guess, writing about writing. I like it, but you could improve it. :)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/28/2014 5:25:00 PM)

    Let nobody......Thank you! I think that relationships between man and man or woman or woman are not as strong...the thing is if I am a woman, I already know what a woman is like so it is somewhat boring to keep on experiencing the same thing and if I make friends with a man it will be different and it tends to be more fun because I am learning how man are like. Beautiful write but I think woman and woman or man and man can get along fine, it is a matter of understanding that is all.
    9 hours ago by Munashe Mumbama | Reply

  • Richard Beevor (5/24/2014 10:12:00 AM)

    excellent poems sir, I wonder if you could read some of mine and give me your advice please, I would like to improve, thank you, I am http: //www.poemhunter.com/richard-allen-beevor/

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2014 12:20:00 AM)

    I turn 67...

    Re: I turn sixty seven (Score: 1)
    by maryanns on Saturday, May 17,2014 (12: 12: 02)
    From another one maintaining in time I must applaud this lovely piece of thoughtful artwork - and wish you a very happy birthday, too!

    Love that last stanza; good for you! Smile

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 8:45:00 AM)

    Story of desertion....

    chills chills wow

    Joshua Bissot6 minutes ago
    i totally understand my mother has gone through that same loss and i feel so bad for her it deeply hurts her and by virtue hurts me: (thank you for sharing such a personal introspective poem it is really good

    i recently attempted suicide and was found basically found dead -
    here is my recollection of where i was. http: //www.poetry.com/poems/1257276-content-n-resolve-

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 7:31:00 AM)

    Re: Quite happy (Score: 1)
    by b.b.w.(Tulsa) on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (22: 20: 05)
    These are honest emotions well expressed. There is an old proverb:
    The best reply to ignorance is silence. Don't be discouraged. Keep
    up the good work.

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    Re: Quite happy (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Thursday, May 15,2014 (08: 29: 38)
    Oh sir so nice of you. I am guest poet here. readers keep distance from me here. I still give best of me to them.. regards

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 6:50:00 AM)

    By behavior...

    Re: By behavior (Score: 1)
    by b.b.w.(Tulsa) on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (22: 07: 53)
    I enjoyed your poem. It's good to keep in mind that there are true
    rhymes and half (or inexact) rhymes. Also, rhyme schemes can be
    irregular. Experienced poets sometimes alternate true rhymes and
    half rhymes and use irregularity for effect. To call this schizo shows
    ignorance of poetic devices. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: By behavior (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Thursday, May 15,2014 (07: 49: 10)
    so encouraging words sir. Poets need to reform n say what his soul really wants to convey instead of keeping confined to rhymes or no rhymes.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 9:01:00 PM)

    Simple exercise....

    x lone shoe in a dryer Daniel GarnreiterLess than a minute ago I tumble through this poem as the I feel the thoughts do in your mind. They jar against the sides of the machine banging away with such noise. Waiting and waiting for the cycle to finish. In that time we are left to wait we can be of use in so many ways and with those ways a thousand actions to do more to show who and what we are to improve ourselves so that the presence we offer is the best we can. True though, sometimes it's just time to wait. To watch the tumult inside but being there offers possibilities as well. for should the door be hit and come loose we are there to catch what falls out and to assist as we couldn't if we'd gone away

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 8:28:00 PM)

    By behavior....

    Lovely work

    Olwen Cuttita9 hours ago
    Well done. Many take amiss of what really matters and focus on only the little things that don't really compare or stand up to other matters. This is said and written very well.

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###


Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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