Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 595,230 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

1561. Don'T Hate Me 8/18/2011
1562. Drastic Changes 8/19/2011
1563. World As Family 8/20/2011
1564. Wish To Flee 8/19/2011
1565. From East To West 8/23/2011
1566. Read Concerns 8/23/2011
1567. Words Spoken 8/23/2011
1568. We Claim To Be 8/22/2011
1569. Guided By Inner Call 8/23/2011
1570. No Other Go 8/23/2011
1571. Beautiful Heart 8/23/2011
1572. Life Never Understood 8/24/2011
1573. Stand There To Welcome 8/24/2011
1574. From The Outset 8/24/2011
1575. Enough Of Thought 8/25/2011
1576. Peak Top 8/26/2011
1577. We Didn'T Write 8/26/2011
1578. Blossom Everywhere 8/26/2011
1579. It Is Heart 8/26/2011
1580. Boring And Tasteless 8/26/2011
1581. Happy With Wine 8/26/2011
1582. Not In Or Outside 8/26/2011
1583. To A Friend 8/28/2011
1584. Leave Me Alone 8/20/2011
1585. Take It Over 8/20/2011
1586. Rather Unfortunate 8/21/2011
1587. Life Needs To Change 8/21/2011
1588. Without Hesitation 8/22/2011
1589. For No Concern 8/22/2011
1590. Everything Is For You 8/22/2011
1591. Someone Calls Me 8/22/2011
1592. Anna! Anna 8/27/2011
1593. Forgive 8/29/2011
1594. The Poems Can Be 8/29/2011
1595. Better To Forget 8/29/2011
1596. Eid Greetings 8/29/2011
1597. Mind Fluctuates 8/29/2011
1598. Words To Speak 8/29/2011
1599. Time And Tide 8/30/2011
1600. Ya, Allah 8/30/2011

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 7:13:00 AM)

    Spare them....


    Powerful poem Helvi Salminen1 day ago about an important topic
    today

    Broken Lullabies 7 hours ago Very true and something everyone should read! Very nicely said.
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    You express the situation well. Tracy Bollinger7 hours ago Your moral stature and compassion bleeds through the words!

    great Joshua Bissot7 hours ago very nicely done my friend
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  • Prof.satyavrat Gaur (5/13/2014 2:20:00 AM)

    Hamari parchhaiyan a contrast to Shahir Ludhyanvi 's Tasuruvaat ki parchhaiyan. There is flow there is concern and depth of ideas.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/6/2014 10:51:00 PM)

    Your choice....

    Thoughtful

    Heidi Wilson10 minutes ago
    Good flow
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    Shakespearan recital


    norbert3 minutes ago
    I think it is ok. The Shakespearean format gives it a classic style which strangely has the disadvantage of making it seem too poetic. Sometimes a poem arouses the most intense emotions when it does not seem too deliberate, when it feels like the poet just sat down and wrote down feelings, not structured sentences.

    It is a good poem for what it is, conventional poetry. But it certainly does not evoke intense emotions
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    Nicely written


    Jessica Cooley10 minutes ago
    I got to say your good at writing.. Great I say. :)

  • Richard Beevor (5/3/2014 9:55:00 AM)

    excellent work and high achievement

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2014 10:15:00 PM)

    Talk poetry.....

    I like it

    David Cook1 minute ago
    This is a nice profound teacher. I like his logic. I like the way he explains what poetry is all about. Poetry is the most beautiful gift to mankind and a poet can come from the poorest of the poorest. Could be the most happiest happiest person on the face of the earth. Poetry is like a bible
    Comment +1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    Never fades away....

    Anand Brown(4/30/2014 1: 33: 00 AM)
    Excellent poem, absorbing and engaging. It bears testament to the enduring quality of love and does so with poetic zest and class. Take a bow

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2014 10:24:00 AM)

    Compassionate mother.....

    A lovely poem on mother. Being a mother myself, can very well relate to this poem. Thanks Hasmukhji.


    Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india
    Apr 28,2014

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 9:58:00 PM)

    For protection....

    i am in love with your words of wisdom! !


    Michelle24 minutes ago
    you are truly wonderful with your energy of words and a meaningful message behind it
    Comment +1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 8:43:00 PM)

    Give chance...

    United from within

    Tracy Bollinger4 minutes ago
    Internal conflict from within as destructive power exceeding that of nature. Give the true nature of man a chance, instead of the few bent on power. This may happen if enough people believe it can.
    I love the message that only a poet can deliver.
    Comment +1
    Boosted.

    KR BALAKRISHNAN8 minutes ago
    Mehtajiii, I am glad that your poems are becoming brighter and brighter day by day. Reaching greater heights....
    Comment +1
    interestng


    Stephen Kister9 minutes ago
    good idea

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/16/2014 9:51:00 PM)

    Cuckoo remind...

    I love the abstract feeling!

    Sydney ParkLess than a minute ago
    I find it really interesting when poems are written without an explanation or without being straightforward. I love how i really had to read into it and interpret to find what I think the meaning of it is. It is not a cliche poem with lots of rhyming. This is true poetry with what seems to be a deep purpose.
    Comment +1
    Metaphor really stood as something else

    Chelsea TrianoLess than a minute ago
    Great way of expanding the idea of being inspired and changed in heart through metaphorical ways
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Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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