Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 565,413 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

1721. ???????.. Expectation 3/14/2012
1722. Leaving Behind 3/15/2012
1723. In My Pocket 3/15/2012
1724. Age Matters Less 3/16/2012
1725. Waits For None 3/18/2012
1726. No Worship For Failure 3/21/2012
1727. Always To Greet With 3/27/2012
1728. Feel Nice 3/29/2012
1729. Hand That Helps 3/31/2012
1730. May Be Forceful 4/2/2012
1731. What Is Expected 4/2/2012
1732. Only Way 4/2/2012
1733. Baby Girl 4/2/2012
1734. Find Mirror 4/2/2012
1735. Fight Over New Born 4/4/2012
1736. Study In Contrast 4/5/2012
1737. No One Can Defy 4/5/2012
1738. Juwita... My Girl 4/6/2012
1739. An Ego In Love 4/9/2012
1740. Child In Our Home 4/12/2012
1741. Good Relation 4/22/2012
1742. Not Late To Catch 4/29/2012
1743. Go On 5/3/2012
1744. Love Is Limitless 5/3/2012
1745. From Grave 5/3/2012
1746. Simple From Distance 5/6/2012
1747. Timely Signal 5/19/2012
1748. No Sir 5/20/2012
1749. Not Less Struggle 5/20/2012
1750. Sacred Relation 5/25/2012
1751. Very Hard 5/28/2012
1752. Human Life 5/29/2012
1753. Adopt Change 6/3/2012
1754. Solution Present 6/6/2012
1755. In World To Claim 6/9/2012
1756. With Sugar Coat 6/11/2012
1757. By Name 6/12/2012
1758. Gradual Change 6/15/2012
1759. It Will Be Unfortunte 6/20/2012
1760. Not Broken 6/22/2012

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/5/2014 6:39:00 AM)

    Simple, person..


    Amy Noborikawa19 minutes ago
    Love this poem. It talks of a simple man who does not pick fights, but is picked upon just because he does not appear to live up to someone else's standards. He does not understand the inner dislikes that people have. As much as he tries to figure out why, it is a game that he probably cannot win. I totally identify with this poem.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2014 5:31:00 AM)

    o, rose

    Tibjee Kachroo Excellent, Once Milton was asked to admire rose in a sentence he said A rose is a rose is a rose.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2014 5:30:00 AM)

    O, rose

    My dear Hasmukh Bhai, Your poem has something rare and really great It reminds of a reply given to Romeo by Juliet A rose by any other name would smell as sweet KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 58134 Jan 04,2014.....

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/3/2014 7:45:00 PM)

    Virtue is shadow, , , , , Fantastic

    Andy Everstine10 minutes ago
    We all need support...imagine what we could accomplish in this world.
    Comment +1
    very good

    malenky malenky12 minutes ago
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    very enjoyable

    Kate Noble13 minutes ago
    interesting concepts explored

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/3/2014 7:14:00 PM)

    Little significance

    Fantastic advice and rhyme scheme

    Stephanie Marilyn22 minutes ago
    I don't think there's anything I would change about this. It's relatable, wise, and understandable. Well expressed, good job. Nice reflecting.
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    Great Poem

    Elizabeth Waters24 minutes ago
    It was full of emotion.
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  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (12/30/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    Poet Hasmukh Amathlal
    One of the talented and respected poet.
    His poems flows freely on variety of topics.
    Its a beautiful gift you are blessed with.
    Thank you supporting me in this journey of poems.
    May you keep on contributing many valuable poems to this poetic world.
    Wishing you all the best.
    God Bless!
    Congratulations Sir, On Dec 30,2013 today you have attained #301 among the top 500 poets in PH.
    Thank You!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/17/2013 7:44:00 PM)

    Hello dear

    Mohammad Jahoorul Islam carry on with these good poems...writings are real life...fresh like new winter vege....don't stop the pen...these are good advice too...these are good medicine...bless for all good utterances....
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/16/2013 9:23:00 PM)


    Think of life.....

    Archie Voaklander8 minutes ago
    This is great good job. Loved the fourth paragraph.
    Comment +1
    Well written and positive. I like it.,

    stan brierly7 minutes ago
    Yes don't waste time nor days.
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    Ahmad Al_khatat9 minutes ago
    Great epic

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/16/2013 4:32:00 AM)

    Below vast sky

    An encounter of the magical kind ending in dreamland... what could be better!

    Roger Sampson4 hours ago
    The first verse got me hooked and the last left me smiling... the way it ought to be :)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/14/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    poetical basic

    Jean Smiley The Special Souls Born With A Unique, Spiritual, N Earthly, Cosmic Realm, Can Relate 2 Your Built N Source Of Widely Vast Knowledge. That Both Your Words N Picture Conotates.2 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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