Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 598,079 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

1881. Take You On Peak 2/9/2012
1882. All My Prayers 2/10/2012
1883. She Is No More 2/6/2012
1884. No Sleep 2/10/2012
1885. What Next! 2/10/2012
1886. Short But Sweet 2/13/2012
1887. It Appealed.... 2/13/2012
1888. ?? ?????.. I Was Unaware 2/14/2012
1889. You Were Never Truthful 2/16/2012
1890. Love Is Not.... 2/16/2012
1891. Smile Today 2/20/2012
1892. Gloomy Faces 2/23/2012
1893. Nice Appeal 2/25/2012
1894. Cheaters Have 2/25/2012
1895. Highest Regard From Poetess 2/26/2012
1896. Zannat...Heaven 2/27/2012
1897. Simple Imagination 2/28/2012
1898. Let Truth Prevail 2/29/2012
1899. As Warning 3/1/2012
1900. False Pride 3/1/2012
1901. Prabhu's Blessings 3/2/2012
1902. About Beautiful Life 3/2/2012
1903. One Of The Best 3/3/2012
1904. ???? ?????.. My Shadow 3/3/2012
1905. No One Will... 3/3/2012
1906. ??? ?????? ???.. Not Human Being 3/4/2012
1907. Good Bye Then 3/4/2012
1908. ???? ?????? ?? ????? ??????? Who Sank My Boat? 3/5/2012
1909. I Hear 3/6/2012
1910. Crowing Glory 2/26/2012
1911. New Born 3/7/2012
1912. International Year 3/7/2012
1913. Heart Can'T Be Stone 3/8/2012
1914. My Mother 3/8/2012
1915. Good To Know 3/9/2012
1916. How You Live In! 3/12/2012
1917. Know Your World 3/14/2012
1918. ???????.. Expectation 3/14/2012
1919. Leaving Behind 3/15/2012
1920. In My Pocket 3/15/2012

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/9/2013 7:08:00 PM)

    I love word

    Re: I love word (Score: 1)
    by Seshat_Nibada on Wednesday, October 09,2013 (12: 23: 16)
    I like how you explore topics, I feel on some level you are an ethical poet.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2013 1:31:00 AM)

    With importance...... Re: With importance (Score: 1)
    by Seshat_Nibada on Monday, October 07,2013 (22: 43: 05)
    You know Jadia, this would have sounded great in Sanskrit. There are glimmers of something very poetic here, which I can appreciate. The rhyming did not feel forced and the Brahmin (arrogance) sounded more like translated from Bengali but captured something of the vedic consciousness just the same.

    I felt the power of renunciation and surrender to shakti throughout.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2013 1:28:00 AM)

    I shall remain mother

    A voice for the mothers who face similar situations..The world over!

    Philo Francis4 minutes ago
    Grateful thanks for your depictions so deep, so strong, so powerful!
    Thank you Hasmukh.
    Comment +1
    history or fact

    Guilty Pleasure13 minutes ago
    Just a powerful poem, Well Done.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/7/2013 12:53:00 AM)

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    hussain smelter
    Really touched by your personality & the poetry, wish & pray for your long life with complete health & prosperity.
    Warm regards

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:37:00 PM)

    It pays occasionally

    Excellent you have hit the nail on the head-well done.

    stan brierly11 minutes ago
    You have a good style and I liked the poem.
    Comment +1

    malenky malenky13 minutes ago
    i love it good one
    Comment +1
    Very good

    Sean Barker12 minutes ago
    words of wisdom

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    Simple entity.....

    i loved it

    El Bayoumy El Samanoudy19 minutes ago
    That I am simple entity is the base of the whole universal
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    It was really moving

    Ryan Hill19 minutes ago
    i really like the pauses it creates within the poem for the reader to reflect on the words you have written. I like the idea of the poem talking about the soul so genuinely and freely aswell as the words you have used to describe the way you feel about life. You could feel that it was genuine which is what i personally love about reading poems like this. I think you could work on expanding the ideas that you have about the soul within the poem. but overall it was really really good.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:20:00 PM)

    If you think about it. You could of dug more deeply into your emotions. Open up.Let it all hang out.

    Tony Adamo20 minutes ago
    If you think about it. You could of dug more deeply into your emotions. Open up.Let it all hang out.
    Comment +1
    it's good

    Kam Shea Avandi22 minutes ago
    it is a good i am poem i would like it more if it was more directed at the world, the reader...bc than i could feel the emotion too

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2013 6:35:00 PM)

    The sea waves, , , , , Gibz Rising suffering due to our mad acts is a beautiful lesson from love, , but are we realy to blame for the devil manipulating minds disguised in another relm? the devil created all religion and wants humans to believe we all have free will so we blame our selves for the works of him, , this is not the same devil as ever described - its a entity that came to earth long ago, , from a far away galaxy, lost and alone it took refuge on earth and it only knows fear, , it has no other feelings, , , but likes to try to laugh, , this entity came with another, , a positive entity, its brother, , or sister you may even say, , man does not have free will once we have totaly manifested negativity, , it can enter your vessel and take over fully at any givin time if you are on a negative frequency, , all media is his tools to have fun, , believe only what your spirit is telling you when you are on a positive frequency, , mother earth is working with the devils brother/sister/positive to protect the planet and over throw the devil, , for the devil will not co-operate and is just a lost puppy full of thriving fear, , fear not the open words of the wise owl, , and understand them, , , for a war is coming, , and the devil may not get to be apart of it - if it continues to disrupt efforts, , i will have no choice but to destroy it myself
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    Sheila Ann Anderson If we do not protect and nurture Mother Earth, she will no longer be able to protect us and allow us to live upon her
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Great Greater Greatest

    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha4 minutes ago
    Wonderful writing. You are my lovely Poet.
    Comment +1
    It's good

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful. Great.

    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha1 minute ago
    With humility I submit You are a great Poet

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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