Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 565,413 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

1881. Simple Food 1/22/2013
1882. Opposite End 1/28/2013
1883. Make It Wonder 1/28/2013
1884. Makes Me Cry 1/31/2013
1885. Ina The Early Morning 2/1/2013
1886. Myself Forever 2/1/2013
1887. Thousands May Celebrate 2/14/2013
1888. Never Be In Hurry 2/16/2013
1889. Back With Family 1/9/2013
1890. Her Voice Echoes 2/18/2013
1891. Once 2/19/2013
1892. No Sugar Coat 2/20/2013
1893. In Hurry 2/20/2013
1894. Internet World 2/21/2013
1895. In Bomb Blast 2/23/2013
1896. Pushed To Corner 3/7/2013
1897. I Drove 3/7/2013
1898. Somewhere 3/8/2013
1899. Forget Self Interest 3/9/2013
1900. Poets Are Crazy Lovers 3/10/2013
1901. Passionate Love 3/11/2013
1902. Souham 3/15/2013
1903. Even If You 3/18/2013
1904. Lathi Or Goloyaa 3/19/2013
1905. Mukh Sakshi 3/19/2013
1906. Achieve The Best 3/20/2013
1907. कभी न छोड़ना.. kabhi n chhodna 3/20/2013
1908. I Did Not Believe 4/24/2013
1909. So Do I Say 4/24/2013
1910. Milky Way 4/26/2013
1911. In Their Heart 4/26/2013
1912. Except To Adore 4/27/2013
1913. Yet To Feel 4/27/2013
1914. Poet Of The Month 4/28/2013
1915. Prefer The Journey 4/30/2013
1916. At The Point Of The Gun 5/2/2013
1917. Raise Head 5/2/2013
1918. Selfless Dedicaion 5/7/2013
1919. Try 5/7/2013
1920. No To Her Death 5/7/2013

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    Simple entity.....

    i loved it

    El Bayoumy El Samanoudy19 minutes ago
    That I am simple entity is the base of the whole universal
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    It was really moving

    Ryan Hill19 minutes ago
    i really like the pauses it creates within the poem for the reader to reflect on the words you have written. I like the idea of the poem talking about the soul so genuinely and freely aswell as the words you have used to describe the way you feel about life. You could feel that it was genuine which is what i personally love about reading poems like this. I think you could work on expanding the ideas that you have about the soul within the poem. but overall it was really really good.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:20:00 PM)

    If you think about it. You could of dug more deeply into your emotions. Open up.Let it all hang out.

    Tony Adamo20 minutes ago
    If you think about it. You could of dug more deeply into your emotions. Open up.Let it all hang out.
    Comment +1
    it's good

    Kam Shea Avandi22 minutes ago
    it is a good i am poem i would like it more if it was more directed at the world, the reader...bc than i could feel the emotion too

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2013 6:35:00 PM)

    The sea waves, , , , , Gibz Rising suffering due to our mad acts is a beautiful lesson from love, , but are we realy to blame for the devil manipulating minds disguised in another relm? the devil created all religion and wants humans to believe we all have free will so we blame our selves for the works of him, , this is not the same devil as ever described - its a entity that came to earth long ago, , from a far away galaxy, lost and alone it took refuge on earth and it only knows fear, , it has no other feelings, , , but likes to try to laugh, , this entity came with another, , a positive entity, its brother, , or sister you may even say, , man does not have free will once we have totaly manifested negativity, , it can enter your vessel and take over fully at any givin time if you are on a negative frequency, , all media is his tools to have fun, , believe only what your spirit is telling you when you are on a positive frequency, , mother earth is working with the devils brother/sister/positive to protect the planet and over throw the devil, , for the devil will not co-operate and is just a lost puppy full of thriving fear, , fear not the open words of the wise owl, , and understand them, , , for a war is coming, , and the devil may not get to be apart of it - if it continues to disrupt efforts, , i will have no choice but to destroy it myself
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    Sheila Ann Anderson If we do not protect and nurture Mother Earth, she will no longer be able to protect us and allow us to live upon her
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Great Greater Greatest

    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha4 minutes ago
    Wonderful writing. You are my lovely Poet.
    Comment +1
    It's good

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful. Great.

    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha1 minute ago
    With humility I submit You are a great Poet

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    Re: What kind of flower? (Score: 1)
    by piph on Saturday, September 28,2013 (18: 48: 47)
    the world i do not think has never missed the beauty
    only the men in the world who would like to claim to own this mystery

    vivid writing
    it seems maybe you are translating into english, forgive me if i am wrong
    the sometimes broken form seems to lend to this poems worth
    thank you

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    Re: What kind of flower? (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Sunday, September 29,2013 (00: 33: 26)
    never translating. it is poem coming from heart.5000 poem sso far and all have earned acclaim. it is new to you as the form is new to u

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 10:56:00 PM)

    clm down, calm down....The parts I understood were very good

    Regina Lee3 minutes ago
    The parts I understood were very good. I understand the struggle of people and relationships.
    The fear of being too slow or to fast to assist.
    The feelings of being blocked by unclear words, or opposite actions.
    learned a new word = spate
    I assume the reference to blow as in a whale, with sink in the next line referring again to nautical, sea terminology, so I don't understand previous review reference to gender preference mentioned by Donald Rogerson

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 9:05:00 PM)

    I love to hear....
    Re: I love to hear (Score: 1)
    by Pujakins on Thursday, September 26,2013 (18: 51: 16)
    This writer is consistent in his exhortations to all and I appreciate his vivid spirit and beautiful heart. A very loving effort. Thank you. Warmly, Tasha

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    What is ac?

    Steven Avolio1 hour ago
    I enjoyed reading this poem. It is heart felt and flowes well. The poor we will always have with us.Thanks for shairing. Keep them coming.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    real student

    Great! hazel Shirley6 hours ago It is worth reading and My respect always remain for the Educationist...Well written Mehtaji!

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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