Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 564,869 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

1921. Grandma's Death 5/14/2013
1922. My Dream 5/17/2013
1923. Love Must Be Felt 5/16/2013
1924. Not To Alter 5/17/2013
1925. No Holiday 5/18/2013
1926. Humane 5/20/2013
1927. Without Guilt 6/19/2013
1928. Welcome Enjoy And Greet 6/24/2013
1929. Idiot's Tale 6/25/2013
1930. Imagery Person 6/26/2013
1931. No Sound Sleep 6/27/2013
1932. As Proud Cover 6/28/2013
1933. Bare Facts 7/9/2013
1934. प्रेम का इतिहास...Premka Itiihaas 7/11/2013
1935. विहार करने दे मान्यवर.. vihaar karne 7/12/2013
1936. उत्तम मरना भी...uttam marna 7/14/2013
1937. Peace On 7/17/2013
1938. काहेका कोई खेरखा है Kaheka koi 7/20/2013
1939. अपने हाथों से ही बुझाते हो...Apne hathose 7/21/2013
1940. भुला नहीं कहते.. bhula nahi kehta 7/24/2013
1941. पियु मारो गयो परदेस..piyu maro gayo 7/24/2013
1942. આજ છે સત્ય Aaj Chhe Satya 7/25/2013
1943. Feel Closely 6/22/2013
1944. About Tomorrow 7/27/2013
1945. अपना ही फ़साना.. apna hi 7/28/2013
1946. मै वो नहीं....me vo nahi 7/28/2013
1947. jab khud hi... जब खूद ही पछतायेगा 7/26/2013
1948. बस भावना हो... Bas Bhavna Ho 7/26/2013
1949. धनी और बडभागी, , dhani or badbhagi 7/29/2013
1950. As Chance 7/27/2013
1951. पर लाज तुही रखना.. par laaj tuhi 8/6/2013
1952. क्या मिला आपको ... kya milaa 8/11/2013
1953. जी छोटा ना करना.. Ji Chhoa Na Karna 8/14/2013
1954. भय पैदा करेंगे दिलो में .. Bhay Peda Karenge 8/15/2013
1955. Keep Smile On Face 8/19/2013
1956. Holy Thread 8/19/2013
1957. मजबूर तो नहीं थे majboor to nahi 8/20/2013
1958. Good Flavor 8/22/2013
1959. काश हम रो ही पाते, , kaash ham 8/24/2013
1960. में दोहराता जाउंगा.. me dohraata 8/25/2013

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Rinku Tiwari Rinku Tiwari (9/25/2013 4:58:00 AM)

    you are good poem i think you can be a popular poet

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    For self obsession....great writing

    Johnson Vdev11 minutes ago
    This poem is concieved well... written well and as has brought out all thye feelings the poet wanted to express...very deep thoughts....thanks for sharing

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    Hasmukh your poem reminds me of the environmental cause a famous Axlepino poetess believes in, her name is Zhivka Baltadzhieva. Can I share your beautiful poem to read? Thank you so much!
    (Maria) Alicia

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:56:00 PM)

    Dr. Joseph W. Schnapp, Jr.8 hours ago
    This is one of the first poems I've had the pleasure to rate & read that addresses the religion of Islam and the many millions if not billions whom follow this great path...

    The abovesaid God, The Creator, The Great Spirit, First-mover and so on and so forth goes by many different languages (tongues) yet, if you take the time to really investigate these religions- nay: every religion the world has known, there run amongst and betwixt them certain truths and teachings... many of our Christian folk would readily recognize the so-called golden rule which is in essence: Do unto others as you would have them do to you. and any other number of comparable sayings and teachings...

    One minor religion oft overlooked are the Bahai's whom follow The Bob which was their most recent prophet whom was incarcerated and died in Arab prisons in the late 1800's sadly.

    So it is with absolute equity that I rate this submitted poem four (4) stars this day and primarily due to its underlying message,



  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    the images.....A real poem

    Bijim Dominic14 minutes ago
    like to read the poem, poet shares his views with heart, like to read the poem, all the best
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    Jawahar Gupta15 minutes ago
    A place to live in with pride.
    But Now
    Time Changes
    With the Changing Scenario
    No one love antique
    But Novel latest models, ,
    A Very heart touching
    And speaking the real mind,
    I Love the poem, ,
    The way it moves
    so swiftly,
    Comment 0
    Very Nice

    Ruchika Sharma18 minutes ago
    This one was good...
    Comment 0

    Dana Moon18 minutes ago
    lovely thought to finish on
    Comment +1

    Liril Machaiah14 minutes ago
    Your emotions as you got back to your ancestral place is very well depicted in this poem! Am sure it was nostalgic for you...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 6:36:00 PM)

    A wish for peace

    Lisa Spears3 days ago
    I sincerely like the message of this poem. Who would not wish for peace? I think on the last line maybe you mean Let skirmishes and bloodshed have no cause? I guess I'm confused on how the last line is worded. I would want skirmishes and bloodshed to have much pause vs. little pause. If skirmishes and bloodshed are paused, then they are not happening. Thanks for your message of peace my fellow poet.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 6:35:00 PM)

    Love the country...shows patriotism

    Maira Javaid3 days ago

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/12/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    one of the most serious and likable poem i ever read in this site. congradulations. love & regards surya

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/12/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    Ultra Violet
    Do you know the right thing to say? It can sound good, but still be a lie. Anger is true. It's you telling you that you need to listen to you. ^-^

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/10/2013 8:12:00 AM)

    Sinethemba Sindane Wow..it flows man..I dont even know who am I to judge such a great piece of work..wow!
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I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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