Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 597,147 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

1921. Age Matters Less 3/16/2012
1922. Waits For None 3/18/2012
1923. No Worship For Failure 3/21/2012
1924. Always To Greet With 3/27/2012
1925. Feel Nice 3/29/2012
1926. Hand That Helps 3/31/2012
1927. May Be Forceful 4/2/2012
1928. What Is Expected 4/2/2012
1929. Only Way 4/2/2012
1930. Baby Girl 4/2/2012
1931. Find Mirror 4/2/2012
1932. Fight Over New Born 4/4/2012
1933. Study In Contrast 4/5/2012
1934. No One Can Defy 4/5/2012
1935. Juwita... My Girl 4/6/2012
1936. An Ego In Love 4/9/2012
1937. Child In Our Home 4/12/2012
1938. Good Relation 4/22/2012
1939. Not Late To Catch 4/29/2012
1940. Go On 5/3/2012
1941. Love Is Limitless 5/3/2012
1942. From Grave 5/3/2012
1943. Simple From Distance 5/6/2012
1944. Timely Signal 5/19/2012
1945. No Sir 5/20/2012
1946. Not Less Struggle 5/20/2012
1947. Sacred Relation 5/25/2012
1948. Very Hard 5/28/2012
1949. Human Life 5/29/2012
1950. Adopt Change 6/3/2012
1951. Solution Present 6/6/2012
1952. In World To Claim 6/9/2012
1953. With Sugar Coat 6/11/2012
1954. By Name 6/12/2012
1955. Gradual Change 6/15/2012
1956. It Will Be Unfortunte 6/20/2012
1957. Not Broken 6/22/2012
1958. Dog's Tail 6/24/2012
1959. I Am Human 6/28/2012
1960. Uncertain Stage 6/29/2012

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    Re: What kind of flower? (Score: 1)
    by piph on Saturday, September 28,2013 (18: 48: 47)
    the world i do not think has never missed the beauty
    only the men in the world who would like to claim to own this mystery

    vivid writing
    it seems maybe you are translating into english, forgive me if i am wrong
    the sometimes broken form seems to lend to this poems worth
    thank you

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    Re: What kind of flower? (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Sunday, September 29,2013 (00: 33: 26)
    never translating. it is poem coming from heart.5000 poem sso far and all have earned acclaim. it is new to you as the form is new to u

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 10:56:00 PM)

    clm down, calm down....The parts I understood were very good


    Regina Lee3 minutes ago
    The parts I understood were very good. I understand the struggle of people and relationships.
    The fear of being too slow or to fast to assist.
    The feelings of being blocked by unclear words, or opposite actions.
    learned a new word = spate
    I assume the reference to blow as in a whale, with sink in the next line referring again to nautical, sea terminology, so I don't understand previous review reference to gender preference mentioned by Donald Rogerson

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 9:05:00 PM)

    I love to hear....
    Re: I love to hear (Score: 1)
    by Pujakins on Thursday, September 26,2013 (18: 51: 16)
    This writer is consistent in his exhortations to all and I appreciate his vivid spirit and beautiful heart. A very loving effort. Thank you. Warmly, Tasha

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    What is ac?


    Steven Avolio1 hour ago
    I enjoyed reading this poem. It is heart felt and flowes well. The poor we will always have with us.Thanks for shairing. Keep them coming.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    real student

    Great! hazel Shirley6 hours ago It is worth reading and My respect always remain for the Educationist...Well written Mehtaji!

  • Rinku Tiwari Rinku Tiwari (9/25/2013 4:58:00 AM)

    you are good poem i think you can be a popular poet

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    For self obsession....great writing


    Johnson Vdev11 minutes ago
    This poem is concieved well... written well and as has brought out all thye feelings the poet wanted to express...very deep thoughts....thanks for sharing

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    Hasmukh your poem reminds me of the environmental cause a famous Axlepino poetess believes in, her name is Zhivka Baltadzhieva. Can I share your beautiful poem to read? Thank you so much!
    (Maria) Alicia

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:56:00 PM)

    Dr. Joseph W. Schnapp, Jr.8 hours ago
    This is one of the first poems I've had the pleasure to rate & read that addresses the religion of Islam and the many millions if not billions whom follow this great path...

    The abovesaid God, The Creator, The Great Spirit, First-mover and so on and so forth goes by many different languages (tongues) yet, if you take the time to really investigate these religions- nay: every religion the world has known, there run amongst and betwixt them certain truths and teachings... many of our Christian folk would readily recognize the so-called golden rule which is in essence: Do unto others as you would have them do to you. and any other number of comparable sayings and teachings...

    One minor religion oft overlooked are the Bahai's whom follow The Bob which was their most recent prophet whom was incarcerated and died in Arab prisons in the late 1800's sadly.

    So it is with absolute equity that I rate this submitted poem four (4) stars this day and primarily due to its underlying message,

    Cheers,

    -Joe

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    the images.....A real poem


    Bijim Dominic14 minutes ago
    like to read the poem, poet shares his views with heart, like to read the poem, all the best
    Comment 0
    Temple


    Jawahar Gupta15 minutes ago
    A place to live in with pride.
    But Now
    Time Changes
    With the Changing Scenario
    No one love antique
    But Novel latest models, ,
    A Very heart touching
    And speaking the real mind,
    I Love the poem, ,
    The way it moves
    so swiftly,
    Comment 0
    Very Nice


    Ruchika Sharma18 minutes ago
    This one was good...
    Comment 0
    Wonderful

    Dana Moon18 minutes ago
    lovely thought to finish on
    Comment +1
    Beautiful...


    Liril Machaiah14 minutes ago
    Your emotions as you got back to your ancestral place is very well depicted in this poem! Am sure it was nostalgic for you...

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

To The Invisible Friend

To the founder
Wednesday,17th October 2018

I have seized the chance
to write on the personality at once
not keeping in view of his status
but mainly to concentrate on his face line

what does he think?

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