Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 568,652 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

1961. About Tomorrow 7/27/2013
1962. अपना ही फ़साना.. apna hi 7/28/2013
1963. मै वो नहीं....me vo nahi 7/28/2013
1964. As Chance 7/27/2013
1965. jab khud hi... जब खूद ही पछतायेगा 7/26/2013
1966. बस भावना हो... Bas Bhavna Ho 7/26/2013
1967. धनी और बडभागी, , dhani or badbhagi 7/29/2013
1968. पर लाज तुही रखना.. par laaj tuhi 8/6/2013
1969. क्या मिला आपको ... kya milaa 8/11/2013
1970. जी छोटा ना करना.. Ji Chhoa Na Karna 8/14/2013
1971. भय पैदा करेंगे दिलो में .. Bhay Peda Karenge 8/15/2013
1972. Keep Smile On Face 8/19/2013
1973. Holy Thread 8/19/2013
1974. मजबूर तो नहीं थे majboor to nahi 8/20/2013
1975. Good Flavor 8/22/2013
1976. काश हम रो ही पाते, , kaash ham 8/24/2013
1977. में दोहराता जाउंगा.. me dohraata 8/25/2013
1978. Television Shows 8/28/2013
1979. जब आप हो पूरी तरह बेखबर.. jab aapho 8/31/2013
1980. चकनाचूर हो जाएगा chaknachur 9/1/2013
1981. आप ही बताये, , AAP HI BATAYE 9/3/2013
1982. मेरे ही दिलका मतवाला Mere Hi Dilka 9/6/2013
1983. Go Ahead 9/8/2013
1984. जबान बंद क्यों है आज तुम्हारी jaban kyo 9/9/2013
1985. Capable And Wise 9/9/2013
1986. No Joke Or Fun 9/9/2013
1987. Away 5/21/2013
1988. Must Be Blown 5/19/2013
1989. I Am Called River 9/12/2013
1990. Her Honor 9/13/2013
1991. In Orderly Way 9/16/2013
1992. All Ready And Set 9/13/2013
1993. Late To Catch 5/8/2013
1994. Happiness 5/8/2013
1995. Not The Strong 5/5/2013
1996. Prefer Journey 4/30/2013
1997. How Best We Can 9/22/2013
1998. Past Days Are Means 9/22/2013
1999. Senru 9/29/2013
2000. Sky Is.... 9/28/2013

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/10/2013 8:12:00 AM)

    Sinethemba Sindane Wow..it flows man..I dont even know who am I to judge such a great piece of work..wow!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    Great Writing Style


    Frank Klein IVLess than a minute ago
    Though I do not agree with what you wrote, and it seems very ideological, I like how you expressed your heart with words in meter that flowed like smooth butter, and no hurdles to trip up the tongue in my mind. Therefore, I am pleased to give you 5 stars. Keep up the great style of writing.
    Comment +1
    Beautiful

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    joseph harlacherLess than a minute ago
    I believe this poet believes in what he wrote
    without people like him we would not have grocery stores, effective post offices, or lawyers who care.
    keep on writing like this it moves what barricades our way to living in outer space. thanks.
    Comment +1
    ok

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2013 8:52:00 PM)

    Silvia Ferri Baloch likes this. Silvia Ferri Baloch It's more than terrible.... more than terrible... and i have no words to explain how much i am feeling bad about this all that is happening.... The Human Being is just destroying everything, and EVERYONE.... i feel shame to be part of this wrong so called HUMAN RACE.... about HUMANITY there is really nothing...7 hours ago · Edited · Unlike · 1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2013 8:51:00 PM)

    Tribhawan Kaul and Mitos Jane Nepomuceno like this.

    Tribhawan Kaul Great....you have included all gamuts of war and its repercussions on the humanity.Particularly chemical warfare.
    8 hours ago · Unlike · 1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2013 9:27:00 AM)

    Great work!


    Jenny WaltersLess than a minute ago
    One of my BEST comments on this site was this, which I now pass on to you.
    Keep writing!
    You have talent! ;)
    Comment +1
    BEAUTIFUL

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2013 6:57:00 AM)

    Janevera Vincent Mehta! ur hands r made of poem. i love da.......t 25 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2013 9:07:00 PM)

    Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
    Yes, an egotistic proclivity as well as a regular agenda of opportinistity carries questionable artistic merit. However I must say I am a bit taken aback in seeing this stance coming from someone who recommends his own work in the box that is meant to recommend poems you have read by others & were especially moved by...between that, and the obvious need to copy & paste comments you have received on other sites than this one, has admittedly got me scratching my head a tad....BTW: I believe you would garner far more positive feedback if (1) You did not alienate 80% of this sites membership by posting many of your poems in hindi, and (2) You found it in your own ego to swallow pride and actually read & critique those who have been regular loyal supporters & commentors of your work, here, on PF, despite your polarising actions. Look, don't portray me or this feedback wrogly, as it is merely an I.M.O. based on personal observation. I realise that I have NOT been one of your regular supporters, and certainly have never expected to be one of yours. I hope you take my opine and advice in as positive a vein as it may not have came across, but was meant to be. Good Luck in your literary travels & Be Well ~FjR~

    jadia4708au
    today 07.08
    i replied him as under....

    I appreciate your frankness. Some of your observations are true in the sense they are pursued by me. It is not meant to attract any attention or to get rewards.

    It is time consuming yet it has to be performed because poems must reach to readers and know who all are reading with their comments.

    I never ask anyone to read or appreciate but i am honest in putting to readers.

    I love your criticism. read and criticize. Never build opinion in haste

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2013 10:04:00 PM)

    Rufus Henderson You write so well you have a gift
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/17/2013 8:17:00 AM)

    adiqullah Khan You have a talent and your poetry is filled with simple virtues, gentle and humanistic.tc and keep writing.- :)
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Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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