Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 565,413 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2081. Get Cover 8/16/2014
2082. In Lust 8/16/2014
2083. In Lust 1 8/17/2014
2084. I Shall Scoff 8/17/2014
2085. Do Not Name 8/17/2014
2086. In Real Love 8/17/2014
2087. Routine Life 8/17/2014
2088. Claim For People 8/17/2014
2089. Bas Dil Se 8/18/2014
2090. Old People Talk 8/18/2014
2091. Feel Intensely 8/18/2014
2092. Such Can Be 8/18/2014
2093. Black Sheep 8/18/2014
2094. ઘણું બધું સાન માં.. ghanu badhu saan maa 8/19/2014
2095. The Problem 8/20/2014
2096. Of Some Kind 8/20/2014
2097. Over Crowded 8/20/2014
2098. Sins May Raise 8/21/2014
2099. Not Guest 8/21/2014
2100. Turn To Flower 8/22/2014
2101. Wind Shall Blow 8/22/2014
2102. To Remain Peaceful 8/22/2014
2103. Share To Walk 8/22/2014
2104. Unknown Feeling 8/25/2014
2105. Smilng In Heaven 8/26/2014
2106. Some One May 8/26/2014
2107. Under The Depth 8/26/2014
2108. To Silence 8/27/2014
2109. With Simple Offer 8/28/2014
2110. Try To Be 8/28/2014
2111. I Bow Down 8/29/2014
2112. I Wrote O Love 8/29/2014
2113. Call A Day 8/30/2014
2114. तेरे हाथों की मेहदी... ere hathonki 8/30/2014
2115. First Unknown 8/31/2014
2116. Even Monday 8/31/2014
2117. We Have Time 9/1/2014
2118. Strike Hard 9/1/2014
2119. Claim Immunity 9/1/2014
2120. Like Rays 9/1/2014

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/31/2012 8:09:00 AM)

    Re: Not all may be (Score: 1)
    by induce on Friday, August 31,2012 (09: 02: 44)

    'I spend sleepless night when cry in bed
    All those years were ruthlessly led
    That cry from innocent people makes me restless
    So far I have lived with double face'

    This is just one stanza that stood out to me. It is very strong and meaningful in your context, I respect your words and the meaning I try to see, it does leave me with thought/s.

    keep penning,

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/27/2012 4:22:00 PM)

    Re: Go away (Score: 1)
    by Ego_Rocks2x on Sunday, June 10,2012 (10: 54: 49)
    You are so wise. All of your poems are really good, and i really liked this one. It makes sense. I feel the meaning of your words and they touch me on such a different level that I can't describe it. I'm telling you this as a friend: Never stop writing.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2012 4:33:00 AM)

    3: 01pm
    Thanks Hasmukh for accepting my friend request, much appreciated, I must also say I enjoy reading your poetry, which is always interesting. Best wishes, NEil.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2012 10:15:00 PM)

    Hasmukhji, your creativity in responding to a verse with a verse is great. Thanks for your time. Warm regards.

    Safiyyah, UK
    Aug 18,2012

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2012 2:15:00 AM)


    Somebody tells that children are the enemies of our previous birth! I don't really know. Some of them for sure, do not return love. You observe everything around, and put it in writing. Really exciting

    U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kerala
    Aug 11,2012

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2012 2:14:00 AM)

    Mehta sir, I am so fond of your poetry for they poignantly portray human values, love and affection etc.. Language and thought flow together in your poems. With regards.

    Thummuri Sharath Babu, Warangal (A.P)
    Aug 12,2012

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2012 9:10:00 PM)

    come to me....Abdul Wahab beautiful is yr poem, more beautiful is yr wisdom of rhyme, and marvellous are the thoughts expressed craftly in an exquiste poem, i love it..
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2012 7:46:00 PM)

    Dear Shri Hasmukh Mehta ji, Many many thanks for your comments and your beautiful poem. Your ability to produce instantly, meaningful and beautiful poetry is amazing Sir. With best regards,

    Sathyanarayana, Nellore
    Jul 28,2012

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2012 7:03:00 PM)

    One of the holy object....Jyotsna Gandhi thank you so much Hasmukh Mehta ji i am so much thankful for such humble and lovely words which have certainly came out of your heart. i am glad to see your generosity... thanks alot :)
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2012 6:41:00 PM)

    Ekaterina Polishchuk when i read the poem: long or short i always enjoyed the melody it sounds (since my childhood) . and i tell if the melody flows, the poem is successfull. i mean it has its own mystic energy to give us a massage. i like thi poem because of its rhyme structure and contest, it sonds bright.
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Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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