Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 594,788 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2241. Single Factor 6/26/2014
2242. Our Own Action 6/26/2014
2243. Concern 7/8/2014
2244. ગુજરાતી શાંતિપ્રિય અને શાણો..gujarati 7/8/2014
2245. Life Shall Not 7/13/2014
2246. No One Shall 7/13/2014
2247. Our Peace Kite 7/16/2014
2248. Lovely Association 7/17/2014
2249. Be Beautiful 7/20/2014
2250. Leave Anchor 7/21/2014
2251. My Views 7/27/2014
2252. Divine Gift 7/27/2014
2253. Our Nest 7/27/2014
2254. Literary Sense 8/6/2014
2255. Bury The Hatred 8/6/2014
2256. The Seeds Of Hatred 8/7/2014
2257. Let War Begun 8/8/2014
2258. Wish The Journey 8/12/2014
2259. Special Position 8/13/2014
2260. Memory Shall Keep 8/14/2014
2261. Seek Blessings 8/16/2014
2262. In Lust 8/16/2014
2263. In Lust 1 8/17/2014
2264. I Shall Scoff 8/17/2014
2265. Do Not Name 8/17/2014
2266. In Real Love 8/17/2014
2267. Routine Life 8/17/2014
2268. Claim For People 8/17/2014
2269. Get Cover 8/16/2014
2270. Bas Dil Se 8/18/2014
2271. Old People Talk 8/18/2014
2272. Feel Intensely 8/18/2014
2273. Such Can Be 8/18/2014
2274. Black Sheep 8/18/2014
2275. ઘણું બધું સાન માં.. ghanu badhu saan maa 8/19/2014
2276. The Problem 8/20/2014
2277. Of Some Kind 8/20/2014
2278. Over Crowded 8/20/2014
2279. Sins May Raise 8/21/2014
2280. Not Guest 8/21/2014

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2011 7:23:00 PM)

    Dear Sir, ,
    I'm fine and what about you, sir?
    Oh, I'm so glad now for you've invited me to comment on your poem, ,
    Do you remember or not but once you did post me a message saying that you've to keep your attention in your poems and not in these ratings and they are merely some ratings! ! ! but that time I was in the 4th position in the world by popularity..
    So I could write some good poems for me... And I could find a great deal of satisfaction in my writings! ! !
    Also I could find a lot of things from your poems in what I commented but did I comment it all with what then came to my mind...but they were all my heartfelt comments! ! !
    I hope you may enjoy my comments..
    And If time permits you, please read and comment on my poems too, ,
    I'd like to get comments from a poet who have written over 2000 poems but most of everything, you are from My Country! ! ! !
    May God bless you more, ,
    With Love and Peace
    VIPINS PUTHOORAN! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/7/2011 8:49:00 PM)

    From : Jose Lu (Perth Australia; Male; 22)
    To : Mehta hasmukh amathalal
    Date Time : 12/7/2011 7: 30: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject : Re: Friend

    Thank you,

    I have seen some of your poems.There's many of it, see..More than 2000 poems just will keep me around for a year.

    Great poems, I must say.You're one of some poets I know that still use the rhyme, very good indeed.I like the style very much.

    Hope you're in a good state, with a good health and have a great day.

    Cordially, keep writing.I shall wait for another poem,

    Jose

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/7/2011 8:48:00 PM)

    Hello Mehta. I am new to this website and do not visit it too often. Thank you for your message and your trust in me to comment. My comments will not be of literary value, but only what I felt when I read it. I printed them and will read them when everything is quiet around me, but I do want to say this...reading them made me sad and am I correct to say it is your own life you are talking about? Or am I too stupid to hear? Can I send them to a friend of mine in Zimbabwe? He is also a poet and I always said he must publish his poems, but being at a University, time is limited
    Whenever this old lady has time, I am going to read your poems as it seems there are a lot.
    Keep well friend!

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (12/2/2011 3:57:00 AM)

    Sir, i bow my head before u. hw did i miss u, really i astonish. i must go trough ur all poems.i also like to get ur comments on my poems.
    with kindest regards
    ramesh rai

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2011 12:15:00 AM)

    Shaista Nayaab superb sir... about a minute ago · Like

  • Clifford Villaflores (8/16/2011 7:37:00 AM)

    The whole world comes so near
    As you are gripped with fear
    Come and feel the pulse of belonging
    As you were desperately longing

    oh how i love these lines from the latest poem you posted bout love.

    so real and true

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/25/2011 9:08:00 PM)

    Re: What is she looking at? (Score: 1)
    by ravingbeauty on Monday, April 25,2011 (17: 29: 19)
    profound and totally awesome

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/4/2011 12:55:00 AM)

    True, life is a mini-circus, where one has to practice tight-rope-walking with a stick on hand to balance both sides without falling down. It is easy to swim along with the current, but difficult to go up the river swimming against the current. You have brought these points with clear solutions in your meaningful poem. Good.



    Rajaram Ramachandran, Juhu, Mumbai
    Feb 04,2011

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/4/2010 9:23:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 8/4/2010 8: 09: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24093698 - A reality alone
    Member: Dwi Utami
    Comment: He you not alone friend.
    Reality alone everyone also have these feeling.
    Ya this make me want sitting near you.and remove your feeling alone...G(o_o) D
    good idea..10+



    Date & Time: 8/4/2010 7: 53: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24003469 - A day new one
    Member: Antonio Liao
    Comment: A resurrected call of change...pushes for a while in our dreamy eyes...
    such clever poet of the century.....you got the best for our thought
    to see, more beyond than to live of what is today...thank you and
    God bless...a 10 +++

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/1/2010 9:12:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 8/1/2010 9: 09: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23598370 - A change that was never
    Member: Okan Emanet
    Comment: Really inspirational in every respect..



    Date & Time: 8/1/2010 9: 08: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23859466 - A change for while
    Member: Okan Emanet
    Comment: A splendid poem really deserving to be made song...



    Date & Time: 8/1/2010 9: 07: 00 AM
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    Poem: 24038935 - A cause for pain
    Member: Okan Emanet
    Comment: A breathtakingly excellent characterization on the structure of love and resulting pain... I really congratulate you on such a wonderful work.... a real 10 from me...



    Date & Time: 8/1/2010 7: 51: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23948453 - A birth of poet
    Member: Apoet Bangla
    Comment: His heart pains for others agony
    H doesn’t work it for gain or money

    It is perhaps the ultimate utterance to establish the necessity of a poets birth.
    Well-written. Enjoyed.

    Regards,
    pranab

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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