Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 594,285 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2281. Not Guest 8/21/2014
2282. Turn To Flower 8/22/2014
2283. Wind Shall Blow 8/22/2014
2284. To Remain Peaceful 8/22/2014
2285. Share To Walk 8/22/2014
2286. Unknown Feeling 8/25/2014
2287. Smilng In Heaven 8/26/2014
2288. Some One May 8/26/2014
2289. Under The Depth 8/26/2014
2290. To Silence 8/27/2014
2291. With Simple Offer 8/28/2014
2292. Try To Be 8/28/2014
2293. I Bow Down 8/29/2014
2294. I Wrote O Love 8/29/2014
2295. Call A Day 8/30/2014
2296. तेरे हाथों की मेहदी... ere hathonki 8/30/2014
2297. First Unknown 8/31/2014
2298. Even Monday 8/31/2014
2299. We Have Time 9/1/2014
2300. Strike Hard 9/1/2014
2301. Like Rays 9/1/2014
2302. I Hear Again 9/2/2014
2303. Claim Immunity 9/1/2014
2304. In Tune 9/1/2014
2305. Ulterior Motive 9/2/2014
2306. No Heat 9/3/2014
2307. I Expect Good Return 9/3/2014
2308. For Almighty 9/4/2014
2309. Long For You 9/5/2014
2310. With My Offer 9/5/2014
2311. I Present 9/5/2014
2312. The Next Move 9/5/2014
2313. Only Solution 9/5/2014
2314. False Nationhood 9/5/2014
2315. Flower's Beauty 9/5/2014
2316. With Lots Of Care 9/5/2014
2317. Simple Man And Woman 9/6/2014
2318. Hunger Keeps 9/6/2014
2319. Indecent Messsages 9/6/2014
2320. No Inkling 9/7/2014

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/31/2010 10:19:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 7/31/2010 9: 21: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24038935 - A cause for pain
    Member: Danielle Pongi
    Comment: This poem? my favourite(:
    thanks for posting.

    Date & Time: 7/31/2010 9: 19: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24087649 - All of my love
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: Was it love or mere infatuation?
    Was it only eagerness for continuation?

    ...True love is in the heart. Really easy to say but hard to some. But we can never stop searching. True love never gives up.

    Date & Time: 7/31/2010 9: 16: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23922601 - A calm river flow
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: You can hear from distance very gently...I grew up by the lake and that line evokes great memories...That's the beauty of poetry, that everyone might find different ideas from just one piece. Thanks for sharing.

    Date & Time: 7/31/2010 9: 11: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24066972 - A known enemy
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: Today doesn’t belong to me or not in my hand
    The memory clearly plays as true friend
    I shall not make it known to the world
    I wish only to become part and come in your fold

    ....A good expression of openness and honest invitation to a friend. It lends itself to forgiveness and accepting one another. Good job

    Date & Time: 7/31/2010 9: 10: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24035209 - A real friendship
    Member: Roselyn Magbojos
    Comment: Your poem pictures out the true meaning of real friendship. It really reflects on your personality, a very faithful pal indeed.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2010 7:53:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 7/24/2010 1: 44: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23927983 - After all
    Member: Hans VR
    Comment: A very important message in this poem. I think we are slowly moving to a more caring wrorld. It takes time, but once we reach a certain number of people really caring it may accelerate very fast.

    Date & Time: 7/24/2010 1: 11: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23984747 - An unusual meeting
    Member: Hans VR
    Comment: There is a lot of feeling in this poem. Great use of images and very smooth rhyme. Good work,

    Date & Time: 7/24/2010 12: 58: 00 AM
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    Poem: 24011496 - A time to think
    Member: Hans VR
    Comment: Very nice indeed to sit down and reflect.
    I really believe all of us should do this more often, just take some time to think. The reflection in this poem seems to be far reaching. It made me think a bit about the famous song, I did it my way. I throughly enjoyed reading the poem, reflection is all important. Thanks for sharing this wonderful write.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/23/2010 7:47:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 7/23/2010 7: 35: 00 AM
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    Poem: 24004619 - All eyes
    Member: Unwritten Soul
    Comment: wow this is so worth to ponder! Everyone may ask 1000 question, anything that God creates can question all of them..and everything make us close to Him if we always think! ..
    That make this poem so worth, stand with it's own value..love it, thanks for sharing

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/22/2010 4:12:00 AM)

    • 21 Jul
    • I like the intent of the poem here. But many of the lines seemed forced for the rhyme. Writing the meaning through the rhyme will help the contextual flow of the lines. And a stronger internal rhythm to the lines will be accomplished as well. Just a thought. A set rhyme scheme will also set a pace to the music of the rhymes as well. A poet friend// RH Peat on Any aim
    From Ron Peat 21 Jul
    • Interesting rhymes. But I'm not so sure poetry is nice words at all. This is one of big misnomers about writing poetry. Poetry is meant to enflame or move readers toward new concepts, physically, emotionally, & spiritually which means a poem needs internal conflict of some sort in its turning point, which is later conjoined in some way with the opening of the poem, when the closure on the poem is finally made. Stephen Crane's 'black rider' poems from the 1800's are haunting, scary, fearful and fearless. Yet they reveal much about people and various kinds of closed consciousness. (a knell) is a bell ringing for a death, a for whom the bell tolls kind of a thing. I think you mean 'kneel.' I misspell words all the time and I really appreciate it when someone brings it to my attention. I hope you are the same way. a poet friend/RH Peat on A poetic world
    From Ron Peat 21 J

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/22/2010 4:12:00 AM)

    • Flow of musical words from the pen o f poet give message of all kinds! on A real poem
    From T A Ramesh 21 Jul
    • it is all you wrote on A real poem
    From carol 21 Jul
    • All these thing and sometimes anger and rage. Poems, for me are the language of the heart. on A real poem
    From Paddy Martin 21 Jul
    • A THOUGHTFUL POEM WELL WRITTEN! -Raj on A real poem
    From RAJ NANDY 21 Jul
    • methinks you've answered the question, imaginative write... on A real poem
    From wojja fink 21 Jul

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2010 9:31:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/21/2010 9: 14: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23992682 - A warm welcome
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: You have touched me like high speed wind
    I was flying with emotions and couldn’t find
    It was immense pleasure to hold on in grip
    Tears almost rolled on cheeks but couldn’t weep

    As you closed on to paste the warm welcome
    The whole world seemed to have nearly come
    I was wondering what it was all about
    It was slow whispering and not big shout...

    i like the presentation of this..it is full of sense...brief, short and rhymed is nicer dear than lengthy poem...sometimes, due of too much words, the thought is already lost so, better like this...hope u r fine....very nice presentation...

    Date & Time: 7/21/2010 7: 53: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23987484 - A real poem
    Member: Ken E Hall
    Comment: What is a real poem indeed...you have just wrote one hasmukh, a diifferent slant on poems great idea well put ++++10 regard

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/19/2010 8:28:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 7/19/2010 8: 29: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23941783 - A action to be
    Member: Mark Lewis Berryann
    Comment: The base has to be strong for any good foundation
    No one may prefer to go for or against without any recommendation
    There has to be sincere efforts for calling a day
    You can hold roots with firm commitment to say

    I find value in the entire poem still, the verse copied above was my favorite! A strong poem. Sharing value and understanding of our world!

    Date & Time: 7/19/2010 7: 14: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23951397 - A candle to melt
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: Very reflective and a poem to take every where with you. Nicely done 10

    Date & Time: 7/19/2010 3: 12: 00 AM
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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Kaa.na. Kalyanasundaram
    Comment: Great write. Thanks for sharing; Really I have not missed your pen; with good wishes: Kaa.na.kalyan.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 10:45:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 51: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23966094 - A princess of heart
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: this is beautiful. Really enjoyed it

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 48: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23951282 - A smile from Buddha
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: One Buddha is not enough to set right this world. How can Buddha smile at the violence spread everywhere?

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 44: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23938241 - A look at children
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: Children are gifts from God, as you say, and childless parents can adopt children from orphanage homes. All flowers do not grow in our gardens. Sometime we have to get them from others' gardens.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 9:10:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 06: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23948453 - A birth of poet
    Member: /Rose Koffin/
    Comment: Very interesting....insightful of the mind...moving...my friend keep writing^^

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 7: 26: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23959677 - A nice joke
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: What we wish, what we get. Eyes will tell every truth within us and sometimes in our life journey what we get, not what we want. certain aspect of life can't be written by human hand.
    Nice and real story of live.
    10 for you

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 6:17:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 5: 56: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23938241 - A look at children
    Member: Chulsoo Kim
    Comment: Days tiredness go off when you see them playing

    It's happiness. good work

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 3: 58: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23941783 - A action to be
    Member: Ken E Hall
    Comment: Action all the way aka speaks louder than a thousand words important subject to write about...+++++10.....regards

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 3: 37: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21872772 - A never ending
    Member: Elena Sandu
    Comment: 'I wish I have some treasure to share
    I searched all over but found no where'
    Well, sir, I can see your treasure
    It feeds me, I'll have a tiny slice
    if you dont mind
    Your poems, I can't measure
    nor explain how good it feels
    to have a bit of share.
    Thank you

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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