Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 566,497 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2281. Spring Or Autumn 10/4/2014
2282. No True 10/4/2014
2283. मजा कुछ और ही आएगा.. maja kuchh or hi 10/4/2014
2284. As You Like 10/4/2014
2285. With More Or Less 10/4/2014
2286. Happily Driven 10/5/2014
2287. With Great Philosophy 10/5/2014
2288. Death Shall Be 10/5/2014
2289. Otherwise Too 10/5/2014
2290. आपने ही छा जाना है AApne hi chha jaan hai 10/6/2014
2291. Forge Relation 10/6/2014
2292. Stand On Groud 10/6/2014
2293. Other Wise 10/6/2014
2294. Never Ending Scope 10/5/2014
2295. जिन्दगी को सजाना ..jindgi ko sajaanaa 10/5/2014
2296. Except Him 10/5/2014
2297. One In Million 10/5/2014
2298. Its Induction 10/6/2014
2299. Love Gate 10/6/2014
2300. Selfish Approach 10/6/2014
2301. Life As Heaven 10/6/2014
2302. Fully Known 10/7/2014
2303. An Editor 10/7/2014
2304. With Mission 10/7/2014
2305. In Boom 10/7/2014
2306. Like River In 10/9/2014
2307. Nervous Animal 10/10/2014
2308. An Eclipse 10/8/2014
2309. From Deep Heart 10/10/2014
2310. Except Laying 10/10/2014
2311. God Created 10/10/2014
2312. #03 Rifles And Canvass Shoes 10/10/2014
2313. Our Life And Journey 10/11/2014
2314. मनाना तो पडेगा ... manana to padegaa 10/12/2014
2315. अपने ही परिश्रम का फल चखना.. apne hi parisram kaa 10/12/2014
2316. Another Struggle 10/12/2014
2317. Human Liking 10/12/2014
2318. Smile With Style 10/13/2014
2319. As Reward 10/13/2014
2320. Sacred Role 10/13/2014

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/22/2010 4:12:00 AM)

    • Flow of musical words from the pen o f poet give message of all kinds! on A real poem
    From T A Ramesh 21 Jul
    • it is all you wrote on A real poem
    From carol 21 Jul
    • All these thing and sometimes anger and rage. Poems, for me are the language of the heart. on A real poem
    From Paddy Martin 21 Jul
    • A THOUGHTFUL POEM WELL WRITTEN! -Raj on A real poem
    From RAJ NANDY 21 Jul
    • methinks you've answered the question, imaginative write... on A real poem
    From wojja fink 21 Jul

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2010 9:31:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/21/2010 9: 14: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23992682 - A warm welcome
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: You have touched me like high speed wind
    I was flying with emotions and couldn’t find
    It was immense pleasure to hold on in grip
    Tears almost rolled on cheeks but couldn’t weep

    As you closed on to paste the warm welcome
    The whole world seemed to have nearly come
    I was wondering what it was all about
    It was slow whispering and not big shout...

    i like the presentation of this..it is full of sense...brief, short and rhymed is nicer dear than lengthy poem...sometimes, due of too much words, the thought is already lost so, better like this...hope u r fine....very nice presentation...



    Date & Time: 7/21/2010 7: 53: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23987484 - A real poem
    Member: Ken E Hall
    Comment: What is a real poem indeed...you have just wrote one hasmukh, a diifferent slant on poems great idea well put ++++10 regard

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/19/2010 8:28:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 7/19/2010 8: 29: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23941783 - A action to be
    Member: Mark Lewis Berryann
    Comment: The base has to be strong for any good foundation
    No one may prefer to go for or against without any recommendation
    There has to be sincere efforts for calling a day
    You can hold roots with firm commitment to say

    I find value in the entire poem still, the verse copied above was my favorite! A strong poem. Sharing value and understanding of our world!



    Date & Time: 7/19/2010 7: 14: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23951397 - A candle to melt
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: Very reflective and a poem to take every where with you. Nicely done 10



    Date & Time: 7/19/2010 3: 12: 00 AM
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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Kaa.na. Kalyanasundaram
    Comment: Great write. Thanks for sharing; Really I have not missed your pen; with good wishes: Kaa.na.kalyan.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 10:45:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 51: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23966094 - A princess of heart
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: this is beautiful. Really enjoyed it



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 48: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23951282 - A smile from Buddha
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: One Buddha is not enough to set right this world. How can Buddha smile at the violence spread everywhere?



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 44: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23938241 - A look at children
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: Children are gifts from God, as you say, and childless parents can adopt children from orphanage homes. All flowers do not grow in our gardens. Sometime we have to get them from others' gardens.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 9:10:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 06: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23948453 - A birth of poet
    Member: /Rose Koffin/
    Comment: Very interesting....insightful of the mind...moving...my friend keep writing^^



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 7: 26: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23959677 - A nice joke
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: What we wish, what we get. Eyes will tell every truth within us and sometimes in our life journey what we get, not what we want. certain aspect of life can't be written by human hand.
    Nice and real story of live.
    10 for you

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 6:17:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 5: 56: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23938241 - A look at children
    Member: Chulsoo Kim
    Comment: Days tiredness go off when you see them playing

    It's happiness. good work



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 3: 58: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23941783 - A action to be
    Member: Ken E Hall
    Comment: Action all the way aka speaks louder than a thousand words important subject to write about...+++++10.....regards



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 3: 37: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21872772 - A never ending
    Member: Elena Sandu
    Comment: 'I wish I have some treasure to share
    I searched all over but found no where'
    Well, sir, I can see your treasure
    It feeds me, I'll have a tiny slice
    if you dont mind
    Your poems, I can't measure
    nor explain how good it feels
    to have a bit of share.
    Thank you

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2010 10:25:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 50: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23820159 - A fear so often
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: This is not one poem, it is two. The first 6 stanzas are incomplete and I would finish them and using the same title rewrite that first poem. The last 8 stanzas are all about music. This should be the title of this poem. This second poem is complete and is quite nice as it is. It still needs a little work but people will still enjoy it as it is. - Greenwolfe 1962



    Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 38: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23922601 - A calm river flow
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: There is some wisdom and some nice lines in this piece but it is much too long. It needs to be cut down a bit and the author needs to focus on some aspect of the river. This will force the writer to focus on the precise specific point he wants to make about the river. If he does this, the problems this poem carries with it will disappear. - Greenwolfe 1962

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2010 9:36:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 30: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23881339 - A day without charm
    Member: Roselyn Magbojos
    Comment: Let us get straight on the subject
    If apology is offered then not to reject
    It may amount to be greatness on our part
    Well it is nice gesture with very good start

    Then... I hope my apology will be accepted.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/13/2010 5:16:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/13/2010 12: 19: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23859466 - A change for while
    Member: Whispering Rose
    Comment: 'Offer shade like tree'
    a very well written poem...contains multiple facts and very good advices
    thank you for sharing



    Date & Time: 7/13/2010 8: 32: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23779426 - A blatant lie
    Member: Apoet Bangla
    Comment: Even your enemy may not stab you from the back
    He may be your sworn enemy but not attack
    It has to be taken as reality and experience at all the stages
    Even your friends may some time surprise you in your age

    Surprisingly you are writing some truths to combat the lies. Perhaps it is the achievement of writing poem. Yes, you have got your own tongue and mission to attain. Thank you very much.

    Regards,
    10+
    Apoet Bangla

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2010 9:14:00 PM)

    But what's wrong in trying even if I'm in misery?
    Hahaha, just give me chance please
    Dr, Subhendu, I beg of you if I insist
    Hasmukh Amathalal, tell me if I shall have to quit.

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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