Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 596,626 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2561. Holy Link 11/17/2014
2562. An Inevitable End 11/18/2014
2563. Useless 11/18/2014
2564. Unknown Island 11/19/2014
2565. तुम्ही ही खेवैया..tum hi ho 11/20/2014
2566. Like An Earth 11/20/2014
2567. Such Facts Here 11/20/2014
2568. Directly Pinch 11/20/2014
2569. Never Feel About 11/20/2014
2570. Recite Free 11/20/2014
2571. Best Known Form 11/20/2014
2572. Sense Other Way 11/21/2014
2573. Happy Chrismas 11/21/2014
2574. Remain Pure 11/21/2014
2575. Capable And Real 11/21/2014
2576. Nice Ending 11/22/2014
2577. Not Be Easy 11/23/2014
2578. Inhuman Way 11/22/2014
2579. Let Us Welcome 11/23/2014
2580. Let It Remain 11/23/2014
2581. Sure To Over Come 11/24/2014
2582. I Shall Never Be 11/24/2014
2583. Full Interest 11/24/2014
2584. Break Pen 11/24/2014
2585. On White Page 11/24/2014
2586. Always In Memory 11/24/2014
2587. अब दीप जला है.. jab dip jala hai 11/25/2014
2588. Place In Heaven 11/25/2014
2589. From Ism 11/25/2014
2590. Joking Too 11/25/2014
2591. Now Frank 11/25/2014
2592. Any Possible Race 11/25/2014
2593. May Be Sufficient 11/25/2014
2594. To Induct Harmony 11/25/2014
2595. End In Desert 11/26/2014
2596. Love To Be Human 11/25/2014
2597. May Be Modest 11/26/2014
2598. Nothing To Recover 11/26/2014
2599. To Boost 11/26/2014
2600. Respect The Seniments 11/28/2014

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2010 10:29:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 4/18/2010 9: 51: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 22693665 - A clear emotions
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen

    Comment: A very clever play of emotions in this poem. It's like battling with the rhyme and rhythm to maintain a sober climax in its flow. I almost wanted to take each first line in the poem to create another emotional rush.....must say it's a good read.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2010 11:24:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 4/17/2010 9: 06: 00 PM

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    Poem: 22513851 - A magic in music
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: Again. This ending is not good. But this poem is a big, big improvement over 'A Desire' and it has genuine poetic qualities that I found enjoyable. The rhymes are much better and the word selections are as well. This was much, much easier to read and enjoy. In fact, I can even recommend this poem to others. I would just tell them to not pay attention to the last verse. It is really poor. This is because the worst thing you can do to a reader is not end a poem. This poem has no end. - Greenwolfe 1962

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/11/2010 9:58:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 4/11/2010 11: 16: 00 AM

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    Poem: 22395309 - A desire
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘…Love …It is beautiful union of two souls…’

    Yeah and yeah Sir…soul in our culture [Indic] is different from others… its Ataman…

    Yeah discourse of Yagyanyablaka and Maitri had talk on this Soul was discussed…
    In today’s reality the meaning of Soul has come to soul…
    Thanks Uncle
    Voted 10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2010 2:24:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 4/9/2010 2: 02: 00 PM
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    Poem: 22249305 - A day to start with....
    Member: Mark Nwagwu
    Comment: If birds don’t ignore the nature then why do we?
    Why we remove the trees and make them refugee
    We loose the shed and they loose the home
    We know nothing and aimlessly roam

    this is brilliant, hasmukh, all of it - birds are far more sensible than we are, but they don't have a free will, we do, and what do we do with our freedom, we 'remove the trees', home of the birds. loved this a lot

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/5/2010 10:13:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 4/5/2010 9: 56: 00 PM

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    Poem: 22277802 - A poet can
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen
    Comment: Intense and very thoughtful write, Hasmukh. It seems as if you're in a minstrel courtyard, presenting your case for the poet: ' Why poets of modern age are considered pawn in their game? ' And again....' Are we not in the streets for begging paltry sum in reward? ' How philosophic can you be?

    our battlefield has become more intriguing
    so full of deception, deceit and damnation
    our ocean so immense, so complex
    as it washes all shores with litanies
    oh yes! our poems are like sea shells
    always a conch echoing in the wind of time.

    Thanx for sharing.
    Blessings.
    Leonard

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:21:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 4/2/2010 12: 42: 00 PM Remove this comment

    Poem: 22189321 - A wise to be Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK Comment: ‘…It is said you must keep mum on certain occasion…’

    Like...wise knows when to stay mum unlike fools…again poet writes, ‘…You need not open all your cards and silently resolve…’

    A ready reckoner of ‘interpersonal-conduct-protocol’…and food for thought…but must be kept in mind and followed…but to many like dumb speaks and deaf hears lolol…

    Your poem always educative…Sir I envy your untiring effort to make our society pristine with high moral and value the ‘Values’…
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:21:00 PM)

    From : Apoet Bangla (India ;)

    To : Hasmukh Amathalal

    Date Time : 4/2/2010 6: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : RE: A live together.....

    poet, you have the inner-sight to look at the truth. This vision is very important to a poet and to an artist. This Singularity perhaps differentiate one from another. Your individual style of explaining the facts of life is interesting.
    Write more. Thank you
    prab.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:07:00 PM)

    From : Deborah Cameron (United States ;)

    To : Hasmukh Amathalal

    Date Time : 4/2/2010 1: 00: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Your poems

    Thank you for recommending your poems to me. You are a thoughtful wordsmith.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2010 6:53:00 AM)

    We are all different Jadia. That's what makes us unique.. I so loved this for it's honesty inside it. The way we have to sometimes hide who we are, yet the ones we hurt are ourselves. Letting others in and know who we are, our feelings, is always the best.. It is up to them to either like us and take us for who we are, or walk away..

    Another fine write here.

    Hugs,
    Moonie xx


    © MoonStar Rose

    Thu Apr 01,2010 11: 42

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2010 6:20:00 AM)

    From : David Dale Kush (south bend United States; Male; 58)
    To : Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time : 4/1/2010 1: 07: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : Re: dear sir

    we who write from the soul like yourself are always
    wonderful to reaqd keep up thegood work for I believe words can change the world my friend

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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