Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 568,652 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2561. With Our Action 1/23/2015
2562. Living End 1/23/2015
2563. Magical Impact 1/23/2015
2564. Staunch 1/23/2015
2565. સમાપ્ત થઇ જાત. samaaapt thai jaat 1/24/2015
2566. Ill Gotten 1/24/2015
2567. Lively Present 1/27/2015
2568. With Promising 1/27/2015
2569. Good Slap 1/27/2015
2570. Awareness In 1/27/2015
2571. All Kinds 1/27/2015
2572. At This Time 1/28/2015
2573. Some Decisive Turn 1/30/2015
2574. Its Wisdom 1/30/2015
2575. Chase Chase 2/1/2015
2576. From Real Reality 2/2/2015
2577. Around In Hunt 2/2/2015
2578. An Ivory 2/3/2015
2579. No More Ego 2/3/2015
2580. In Simple Way 2/6/2015
2581. More You 2/7/2015
2582. On Face As Gain 2/13/2015
2583. The Phillipines 2/13/2015
2584. No Controversy 2/14/2015
2585. With Inner Feel 3/3/2015
2586. With Little Feel At 3/3/2015
2587. Let More To Preserve 3/4/2015
2588. Same Till Death 3/4/2015
2589. Power With Serenity 3/5/2015
2590. Why Does It... 3/7/2015
2591. With Hard Work Again 3/10/2015
2592. And Rewrite 3/14/2015
2593. Verses And Stanzas 3/15/2015
2594. Speaks Nothing 3/16/2015
2595. Shall So Sing 3/16/2015
2596. An Idea And 3/17/2015
2597. Love Impression 3/18/2015
2598. Speech Before Public 3/20/2015
2599. Turn Into 3/20/2015
2600. Shall Always Think 3/21/2015

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2010 2:24:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 4/9/2010 2: 02: 00 PM
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    Poem: 22249305 - A day to start with....
    Member: Mark Nwagwu
    Comment: If birds don’t ignore the nature then why do we?
    Why we remove the trees and make them refugee
    We loose the shed and they loose the home
    We know nothing and aimlessly roam

    this is brilliant, hasmukh, all of it - birds are far more sensible than we are, but they don't have a free will, we do, and what do we do with our freedom, we 'remove the trees', home of the birds. loved this a lot

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/5/2010 10:13:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 4/5/2010 9: 56: 00 PM

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    Poem: 22277802 - A poet can
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen
    Comment: Intense and very thoughtful write, Hasmukh. It seems as if you're in a minstrel courtyard, presenting your case for the poet: ' Why poets of modern age are considered pawn in their game? ' And again....' Are we not in the streets for begging paltry sum in reward? ' How philosophic can you be?

    our battlefield has become more intriguing
    so full of deception, deceit and damnation
    our ocean so immense, so complex
    as it washes all shores with litanies
    oh yes! our poems are like sea shells
    always a conch echoing in the wind of time.

    Thanx for sharing.
    Blessings.
    Leonard

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:21:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 4/2/2010 12: 42: 00 PM Remove this comment

    Poem: 22189321 - A wise to be Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK Comment: ‘…It is said you must keep mum on certain occasion…’

    Like...wise knows when to stay mum unlike fools…again poet writes, ‘…You need not open all your cards and silently resolve…’

    A ready reckoner of ‘interpersonal-conduct-protocol’…and food for thought…but must be kept in mind and followed…but to many like dumb speaks and deaf hears lolol…

    Your poem always educative…Sir I envy your untiring effort to make our society pristine with high moral and value the ‘Values’…
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:21:00 PM)

    From : Apoet Bangla (India ;)

    To : Hasmukh Amathalal

    Date Time : 4/2/2010 6: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : RE: A live together.....

    poet, you have the inner-sight to look at the truth. This vision is very important to a poet and to an artist. This Singularity perhaps differentiate one from another. Your individual style of explaining the facts of life is interesting.
    Write more. Thank you
    prab.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:07:00 PM)

    From : Deborah Cameron (United States ;)

    To : Hasmukh Amathalal

    Date Time : 4/2/2010 1: 00: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Your poems

    Thank you for recommending your poems to me. You are a thoughtful wordsmith.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2010 6:53:00 AM)

    We are all different Jadia. That's what makes us unique.. I so loved this for it's honesty inside it. The way we have to sometimes hide who we are, yet the ones we hurt are ourselves. Letting others in and know who we are, our feelings, is always the best.. It is up to them to either like us and take us for who we are, or walk away..

    Another fine write here.

    Hugs,
    Moonie xx


    © MoonStar Rose

    Thu Apr 01,2010 11: 42

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2010 6:20:00 AM)

    From : David Dale Kush (south bend United States; Male; 58)
    To : Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time : 4/1/2010 1: 07: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : Re: dear sir

    we who write from the soul like yourself are always
    wonderful to reaqd keep up thegood work for I believe words can change the world my friend

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/27/2010 7:35:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 3/27/2010 9: 25: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21967348 - A dead end
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee
    Comment: Dear Hasmukhlalji,
    Thanks for your invite to read and rate your poem 'dead end'
    We are perhaps sailing in the same boat and as such our feelings match
    This is the time to introspect through our life's journey and share the profound knowledge with the younger generation.
    Your poem is a journeyin the same direction.
    The rhyming pattern of the poem is fine maintaining AA/BB pattern but no of lines you have exceeded the meter length.
    You can easily correct those by using a few imageriesor metaphors
    I find the meter counts of stanza 2 as most appropriate for this type of poem.
    A few friendly suggestion-
    1) S1 L2- a typo 'know' should bre 'known'
    2) S1 L 4 can be changed to 'no one may learn how much I succeded' This wil also create an inter-rhyming with third line.
    3) S 2 L 3 'AT' can be deleted as superflous.
    LIKED THE POEM. RATED HIGH
    Rajkumar

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/25/2010 2:03:00 AM)

    Poem: 21096246 - Woman's womb
    Member: Zafar Tahir
    Comment: Hasmukh gee adab:
    Same blood same thinking:
    Fist lesson we were tought was; there is heaven under the feet of mother:
    That is start and end of this worthy state of our being.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/23/2010 7:34:00 AM)

    Poem: 21934573 - All answers
    Member: John Knight
    Comment: Hi Hasmukh - A very interesting and philosophic poem. V 1 Highlights the fact that 21st C Man is very materialistic and also very dissatisfied with what he has. V 2 The Holy Scriptures say 'Godliness with contentment is great gain'. V 3 We need to consider the situation of the AVERAGE MAN in the World. He has so litle compared with what we have in the UK. A comparison woulld soon make us 'Count our Blessings' for what we take for granted. V 4 A soft life erodes our resisitance and 'The moral fibre is lost'. V 5 In order to have less stress and a degree of mental peace we need to be less of the 'Now Generation' and take a long - term view. V 6 Ambition is a good thing - but it needs to be in persective. V 7 'Rejoice and participate in the thing in the natural way'. We need to take some risk - but we can't fly - remember Icarus. V 8 What great advice and what a great ending 'Doing what comes naturally'. Joy - self fulfillment - satisfaction - no pain - no rejection - So let it be.. Thanks for sharing. yours in poetry - JOHN.

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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