Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 597,147 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2641. Nothing On Fire 8/18/2015
2642. Slow Down 8/18/2015
2643. Slow Down Again 8/18/2015
2644. Only Place 8/19/2015
2645. Same People 8/19/2015
2646. Same People Here 8/19/2015
2647. Such A Fate 8/19/2015
2648. Great Stage 8/18/2015
2649. Go To God 8/19/2015
2650. Go For The Best 8/19/2015
2651. With Feeler 8/20/2015
2652. 8/20/2015
2653. With Parenthood 8/20/2015
2654. Always Sign 8/19/2015
2655. Divine Valentine 8/20/2015
2656. Best As One 8/20/2015
2657. Entire Society 8/20/2015
2658. With All Success 8/21/2015
2659. His Grace In Life 8/21/2015
2660. La Bella 8/22/2015
2661. Family Tradition In Life 8/22/2015
2662. Resolve And Show 8/23/2015
2663. Real Sunday 8/23/2015
2664. As Reveals River 8/23/2015
2665. From Hunger 8/23/2015
2666. Always Late 8/23/2015
2667. Powerful Gsture 8/23/2015
2668. Good Wife 8/23/2015
2669. Her Image 8/25/2015
2670. After Great Struggle 8/25/2015
2671. Speak Right 8/25/2015
2672. No Security 8/25/2015
2673. Not Enough Reason 8/25/2015
2674. Impartial Judiciary 8/26/2015
2675. Cry More 8/26/2015
2676. Life Shall Cease 8/26/2015
2677. Pick New Leaf 8/26/2015
2678. Pick New Leaf Always 8/26/2015
2679. National Stage 8/26/2015
2680. Good Health 8/26/2015

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/14/2010 11:51:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 3/11/2010 8: 49: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21725273 - A 500th poem
    Member: John Knight
    Comment: Hi Hasmukh - Well done! ! 500 is a big bench mark - never attained in age but in some thinga attainable - 500 runs in cricket - 500 postage stamps in an album - 500 paintings and for some 5oo poems. But how - you ask - is this possible. Your own creative brain - yes - but also the one who held you - your family - your friends - you readers - your commentaters and last but not least GOD (V 7) . Without God we are nothing and can achieve nothing. I like the linguistic structure and the rhyme and the rhythm. The first six verses look back and the second six look forward to the 1000th. To continue (V 8) to flow freely (V 9) to find space
    (V 10) to strive hard (V 11) and to go with the natural flow (V 12) . Thanks for sharing - yours in Poetry - JOHN

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/14/2010 11:48:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 3/12/2010 3: 12: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21792387 - A Divine motherhood
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘Purtarthe Kryote Bharga’ [to get child men make wife] … as scripture says …

    Hindus believe... ‘Putt’ named door [in celestial journey of Atman] can’t be crossed unless posthumous rite done by Atmaja [comes from 2 souls] … to reach ones earned destination...

    The child born out of pure lust its called ‘Lustchild’ [LuC]… when it comes out of love its called ‘Lovechild’ [LoC]… may seem funny and bizarre how minus lust.how.. reproduction can be done…?

    It too answered in our scripture after becoming Awakened one if want carry forward the progeny [‘Purtarthe Kryote Bharga’] the sloka becomes contextually perfect …

    Life pattern and society have rolled like snow ball and become voluminous with relevancy befitting in a spatial way… various rules postulations..

    You’re poetry seems to me about ‘LoC …. To fillup the women with the joy of Motherhoodness [the final culmination] with minus lust have a child…

    Best facevalue of a woman found when she is breastfeeding her child…indeed … serene utopia … I’ve never seen such facevalue in any picture [even in most romantic] ….

    Our scripture cautioned us LoC born with high value… attributes but LuC … much much below and farrrrrrrrrrrrrr

    In Satya Yuga …. Average lifespan was about ten thousand years because of high quality [attributes values] population…and in Kali Yuga it has dwindled to about 100-125 years…

    10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

    PS: ‘…It was no game of love or hate but simple act to react…’
    I humbly agree to disagree to this line Sir excuse me … it’ll give birth to Reactive Child [RC]..lolol... eclipsed out...
    n

  • Leila Taghavi (3/11/2010 5:04:00 AM)

    Yes, we should be realistic. Thanks for your poem.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/23/2010 6:09:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/23/2010 2: 16: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21552083 - Child abuse
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: Hmmm Human Rights! ! ...Is Phonic diarrhea! Conceptual Conception? [taking from my father’s poetry]…what you say as lip service...

    The most interesting point you wrote: ‘Why it is that flower which should see light of the day is simply crushed?

    This reminds me great essayist Sd. Mujtasba Ali [in Bengali] wrote we love children do we cut their head and décor vase? Why in flower we do it?


    A humane write for Human Rights scholastic indeed...
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2010 10:06:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 2/17/2010 2: 57: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 21421052 - Diamonds are forever
    Member: John Knight

    Comment: Hi Hasmukh - Theis is a megapoem with very good rhytm and rhyme. I has good flow. V 1 Diamonds are a condensed form of carbon and are valuable because of their rarity - hardness - durability and lustre. It is magic jewel that has dazzled Kings - Knights - Knaves throughout human history. V 2 Diamonds represent wealth and stability and they are the greatest symbol of love between a man and a woman. V 3 Ladies are like diamonds - priceless and multifaceted. V 4 They glow with an inner light. V 5 Jewellry crafted with daimonds is always beautiful and alwys fashionable. V 6 Each diamomnd - like each lady - have an intrinsic beauty nothing can mar. V 7 Diamond is the hardest substance known to man. The moral is: Never mess witha woman! V 8 Never underestimate a woman - like a diamomnd her value increases day by day. An older woman brings experience to all circumastances! V 9 The depth of fire - in a diamond - is unfathamable. Likewise the depth of love and devotion is infinite compared with man's shallowness. V 10 Men forget and eliminate but (V 11) Ladies remember everything - know everything - can do everything - like diamonds their love and devotion is forever. God created Adam first - he looked at the product - rechecked and revised His blueprint and created woman - PERFECTION. Thanks for sharing - Yours in Poetry - JOHN.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2010 10:04:00 PM)

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    Poem: 21421052 - Diamonds are forever
    Member: Joey Valenzuela

    Comment: wow...this can be a best letter to friend....a promise that freindship will never end...the value of friendship is priceless and is never changing....

    i was so pleased you invited me to read this brightest piece....

    and another one...diamond cant be created..its natural and so is friendship...
    i should have told my friends that they are diamonds....

    thanks for this....

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2010 8:10:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/15/2010 7: 07: 00 AM Remove this comment


    Poem: 21085528 - What is it to me
    Member: Pratheek Praveen Kumar

    Comment: 'Life is full circle journey to be carried on
    With half hearted attempt no battle can be won'
    - 'What is it to me'.

    Very poetic and pregnant with insight.
    .
    I read your all 459 poems and enjoyed them all,
    but ones like 'What is it to me' stand out for
    their wonderful expressions.

    Also appreciated your charming expressions deep
    from heart in 'Sister-in-law'. Truly revealing and
    enjoyable. Let god give you good luck with your
    sisters-in-law. Good luck.

    - PRATHEEK PRAVEEN KUMAR

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2010 8:10:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/15/2010 7: 07: 00 AM Remove this comment


    Poem: 21085528 - What is it to me
    Member: Pratheek Praveen Kumar

    Comment: 'Life is full circle journey to be carried on
    With half hearted attempt no battle can be won'
    - 'What is it to me'.

    Very poetic and pregnant with insight.
    .
    I read your all 459 poems and enjoyed them all,
    but ones like 'What is it to me' stand out for
    their wonderful expressions.

    Also appreciated your charming expressions deep
    from heart in 'Sister-in-law'. Truly revealing and
    enjoyable. Let god give you good luck with your
    sisters-in-law. Good luck.

    - PRATHEEK PRAVEEN KUMAR

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2010 8:08:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/16/2010 12: 25: 00 AM Remove this comment


    Poem: 20428372 - Jealousy
    Member: Joey Valenzuela

    Comment: love: hate
    good: bad
    ....and for me.......
    jealousy: acceptance

    jealousy results chaos...either deep within or physical.
    on the otherhand if 'acceptance' is present you wouldn't be envy for anybody, because you can accept that you are not as good as the other.....

    the poet criticizes jealous people by setting the point of view to himself, because more probably, the author don't want to hurt them..insult them...

    why the jealous people wont be hurted? ..
    its because they'd feel that they are not alone, and feel pity to someone like them...

    the author disguises himself as one of those jealous people to criticize them and at the same time not to be hated by those said jealous people....

    actually, the approach of the author is intellegent...and he presented good ideas....no, not just good but best ideas....the author is full of wisdom...i salute him on that....

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/7/2010 4:25:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/6/2010 9: 28: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21286019 - Unknown factor
    Member: Seema Chowdhury
    Comment: sir thankyou for sharing this wonderful piece with all.
    it reflects the depth of your thoughts and experience.
    valuable lesson to be learnt from this.

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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