Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 564,869 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2641. Many People Talk 5/8/2015
2642. Not Above Criticism 5/8/2015
2643. Days Are Hectic 5/9/2015
2644. O Mother No Care 5/10/2015
2645. Care And Love 5/9/2015
2646. Some Pointer 5/11/2015
2647. On Easy Steps 5/12/2015
2648. In World Politics 5/13/2015
2649. Let It Be Read 5/13/2015
2650. Your Feelings 5/17/2015
2651. At An Eleventh Hour 5/18/2015
2652. Across Fence 5/18/2015
2653. Live With Love 5/18/2015
2654. Offended Often 5/19/2015
2655. In Their Memory 5/19/2015
2656. Not Real Intenton 5/19/2015
2657. Real Sight 5/21/2015
2658. Human Race 5/21/2015
2659. The Old Scripures 5/23/2015
2660. Her Contribution 5/23/2015
2661. Owed To Them 5/23/2015
2662. To Be Free Again 5/24/2015
2663. No Hollow Words 5/25/2015
2664. As Guide 5/25/2015
2665. Often Told 5/26/2015
2666. Many Times A Day 5/26/2015
2667. I Brush Off 5/26/2015
2668. He Is 5/25/2015
2669. Found The Way 5/27/2015
2670. With Fresh Breathe 5/28/2015
2671. With Questions No More 5/28/2015
2672. Cheerfully Share 5/28/2015
2673. With Final Call 5/31/2015
2674. Ring In Ears Again 6/1/2015
2675. So Much Concern 6/2/2015
2676. And Nobility 6/3/2015
2677. Sake Of Suprmacy 6/4/2015
2678. An Ignition Key 6/4/2015
2679. Always Rejoice 6/4/2015
2680. Bow Down Again 6/4/2015

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2010 10:04:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 2/17/2010 9: 36: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 21421052 - Diamonds are forever
    Member: Joey Valenzuela

    Comment: wow...this can be a best letter to friend....a promise that freindship will never end...the value of friendship is priceless and is never changing....

    i was so pleased you invited me to read this brightest piece....

    and another one...diamond cant be created..its natural and so is friendship...
    i should have told my friends that they are diamonds....

    thanks for this....

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2010 8:10:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/15/2010 7: 07: 00 AM Remove this comment


    Poem: 21085528 - What is it to me
    Member: Pratheek Praveen Kumar

    Comment: 'Life is full circle journey to be carried on
    With half hearted attempt no battle can be won'
    - 'What is it to me'.

    Very poetic and pregnant with insight.
    .
    I read your all 459 poems and enjoyed them all,
    but ones like 'What is it to me' stand out for
    their wonderful expressions.

    Also appreciated your charming expressions deep
    from heart in 'Sister-in-law'. Truly revealing and
    enjoyable. Let god give you good luck with your
    sisters-in-law. Good luck.

    - PRATHEEK PRAVEEN KUMAR

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2010 8:10:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/15/2010 7: 07: 00 AM Remove this comment


    Poem: 21085528 - What is it to me
    Member: Pratheek Praveen Kumar

    Comment: 'Life is full circle journey to be carried on
    With half hearted attempt no battle can be won'
    - 'What is it to me'.

    Very poetic and pregnant with insight.
    .
    I read your all 459 poems and enjoyed them all,
    but ones like 'What is it to me' stand out for
    their wonderful expressions.

    Also appreciated your charming expressions deep
    from heart in 'Sister-in-law'. Truly revealing and
    enjoyable. Let god give you good luck with your
    sisters-in-law. Good luck.

    - PRATHEEK PRAVEEN KUMAR

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2010 8:08:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/16/2010 12: 25: 00 AM Remove this comment


    Poem: 20428372 - Jealousy
    Member: Joey Valenzuela

    Comment: love: hate
    good: bad
    ....and for me.......
    jealousy: acceptance

    jealousy results chaos...either deep within or physical.
    on the otherhand if 'acceptance' is present you wouldn't be envy for anybody, because you can accept that you are not as good as the other.....

    the poet criticizes jealous people by setting the point of view to himself, because more probably, the author don't want to hurt them..insult them...

    why the jealous people wont be hurted? ..
    its because they'd feel that they are not alone, and feel pity to someone like them...

    the author disguises himself as one of those jealous people to criticize them and at the same time not to be hated by those said jealous people....

    actually, the approach of the author is intellegent...and he presented good ideas....no, not just good but best ideas....the author is full of wisdom...i salute him on that....

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/7/2010 4:25:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/6/2010 9: 28: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21286019 - Unknown factor
    Member: Seema Chowdhury
    Comment: sir thankyou for sharing this wonderful piece with all.
    it reflects the depth of your thoughts and experience.
    valuable lesson to be learnt from this.

  • Miriam Maia Padua Miriam Maia Padua (2/4/2010 10:27:00 PM)

    great..
    back to stone age....nice to imagine how is life being there...
    back to medieval times...back to the past
    nice.....
    10++++

    Maia

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/31/2010 4:25:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 1/31/2010 12: 09: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21096246 - Woman's womb
    Member: Fay Slimm
    Comment: Woman and the womb which bears the race who inhabit this planet deserve every line in this careful tribute which outlines the immensity of the task. Thank you friend.



    Date & Time: 1/31/2010 12: 05: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21216605 - Crusade or struggle
    Member: Fay Slimm
    Comment: Musings on life my friend take us to all sorts of conclusions and this well constructed rhyme is an example of poetic musing around the subject while there is still time.10 from Fay

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/30/2010 10:01:00 AM)

    Re: Crusade or struggle (Score: 1)
    by angeroseblue on Saturday, January 30,2010 (10: 32: 43)
    i enjoy your poems
    you put forth a lot of effort on them and
    it shows deeply
    Great! ! Very Happy

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/29/2010 7:07:00 PM)

    From : Vp Ramesan (India ;)
    To : Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time : 1/29/2010 1: 44: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : comments

    Dear Hasmukh,

    Poem 'Miss' was heart-rending. It is the wail of a lover who loved for his lover's gesture ho didn't turn to his advances. It is a platonic love which the opposite side never take notice of. Such instances are many among men and women. I share your sentiments that I too had undergone such situations. The poem is emotional as well as flowery. I give you ten marks for your poem.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/28/2010 11:20:00 PM)

    Re: Sentimental fool

    Postby MoonStar Rose » Thu Jan 28,2010 11: 42 pm
    Oh I so liked this Jadia. Your viewpoints were right on and made a valid point.. I think many of us look on Intelligence as a Superior thing and for many it scares them to be among those with a higher level than theirs.. They will down-grade those, calling them names to make them themselves better in their minds.. Fear is a strong factor with animals too. I think they are very intelligent creatures.. Maybe more so than the human mind. Look how they travel in packs, have to endure such treatment of all different elements and yet they still survive. For they lack one thing us humans have in our thought process. That's fear! they fear nothing, all they have to contend with is staying alive.. I envy their way of thinking.. Their logic and find such beauty in their perseverance..

    Well done my friend..


    Moonie xxx

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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