Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 598,079 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

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  • Joyce Lee (6/22/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    wow you sure know your work, a poet is a poet well done nicely put

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  • Vanita Thakkar (6/20/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    Jai Shree Krishna, Hasmukhbhai.
    I am delighted to read poems by Gujju poets on this web-site.
    Your poems are simple and contain the essence of wisdom you have gathered in the journey of your life - very precious. We readers, owe Thanks to you for sharing the real assets of your life with us. Thanks and Regards.
    Vanita.

  • Richard Scarbrough (6/19/2009 7:40:00 PM)

    keep writing it does not matter your age
    people will still read page after page.
    i myself am 52 years of age you know,
    and several writers started off slow.

  • Shawnee Gonzalez (6/18/2009 8:29:00 PM)

    hey i've read your poems and they are amazing i hope you keep writing
    ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥

  • Oluwajobi John (5/28/2009 6:52:00 PM)

    miss u i luv that... but dont miss me bcos i dont wanna miss u too

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    I am ex-serviceman from indian air force with literary test for poems.i have composed poems on numerous subjects with simple appeal. I hope readers may like and request them to comment critically

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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