Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 594,788 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2681. Fearful Mind 1/2/2015
2682. Only Vitiate 1/2/2015
2683. By Money 1/3/2015
2684. Full Of Right Action 1/3/2015
2685. Wisely Said 1/4/2015
2686. As Per Will 1/6/2015
2687. On Distant Stars 1/6/2015
2688. Wonderful To Relate 1/6/2015
2689. Let People Decide 1/6/2015
2690. I Really Want 1/7/2015
2691. Only Inscribe 1/7/2015
2692. Real Help To 1/9/2015
2693. Whatever May Be 1/9/2015
2694. To Join 1/10/2015
2695. Let Someone Come 1/10/2015
2696. Best Liquor 1/11/2015
2697. Brotherhood And Shelter 1/12/2015
2698. Taking Place 1/13/2015
2699. Pitifully State 1/13/2015
2700. The Curtain To Fall 1/14/2015
2701. Be Like 1/14/2015
2702. No Turmoil 1/14/2015
2703. Simple Say 1/14/2015
2704. If You Can Extend 1/15/2015
2705. Welcome Matwale 1/15/2015
2706. Only Wild Vultures 1/15/2015
2707. Make Or Spoil 1/15/2015
2708. Unique Feeling 1/16/2015
2709. Don'T Tell 1/16/2015
2710. You Shall Find 1/17/2015
2711. After Gold 1/17/2015
2712. Now Understood 1/17/2015
2713. Must With Joy 1/17/2015
2714. કહેવા નથી બોલ.. kaheva nathi bol 1/18/2015
2715. કહેવા નથી બોલ.. kaheva nathi bol 1/18/2015
2716. કહેવા નથી બોલ.. kaheva nathi bol 1/18/2015
2717. It Flows 1/18/2015
2718. Love In Relation 1/18/2015
2719. On Arrival As Guest 1/18/2015
2720. Take Deep Breathe 1/19/2015

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/31/2010 4:25:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 1/31/2010 12: 09: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21096246 - Woman's womb
    Member: Fay Slimm
    Comment: Woman and the womb which bears the race who inhabit this planet deserve every line in this careful tribute which outlines the immensity of the task. Thank you friend.

    Date & Time: 1/31/2010 12: 05: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21216605 - Crusade or struggle
    Member: Fay Slimm
    Comment: Musings on life my friend take us to all sorts of conclusions and this well constructed rhyme is an example of poetic musing around the subject while there is still time.10 from Fay

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/30/2010 10:01:00 AM)

    Re: Crusade or struggle (Score: 1)
    by angeroseblue on Saturday, January 30,2010 (10: 32: 43)
    i enjoy your poems
    you put forth a lot of effort on them and
    it shows deeply
    Great! ! Very Happy

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/29/2010 7:07:00 PM)

    From : Vp Ramesan (India ;)
    To : Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time : 1/29/2010 1: 44: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : comments

    Dear Hasmukh,

    Poem 'Miss' was heart-rending. It is the wail of a lover who loved for his lover's gesture ho didn't turn to his advances. It is a platonic love which the opposite side never take notice of. Such instances are many among men and women. I share your sentiments that I too had undergone such situations. The poem is emotional as well as flowery. I give you ten marks for your poem.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/28/2010 11:20:00 PM)

    Re: Sentimental fool

    Postby MoonStar Rose » Thu Jan 28,2010 11: 42 pm
    Oh I so liked this Jadia. Your viewpoints were right on and made a valid point.. I think many of us look on Intelligence as a Superior thing and for many it scares them to be among those with a higher level than theirs.. They will down-grade those, calling them names to make them themselves better in their minds.. Fear is a strong factor with animals too. I think they are very intelligent creatures.. Maybe more so than the human mind. Look how they travel in packs, have to endure such treatment of all different elements and yet they still survive. For they lack one thing us humans have in our thought process. That's fear! they fear nothing, all they have to contend with is staying alive.. I envy their way of thinking.. Their logic and find such beauty in their perseverance..

    Well done my friend..

    Moonie xxx

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/28/2010 9:33:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/28/2010 9: 16: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21096246 - Woman's womb
    Member: Almedia Knight
    Comment: great honor to a Woman's womb, Hasmukh. Just as mother earth gives life to all forms and keep all forms in balance...without complaints. Women give life to human with love...just as mother earth give life to all forms but is often violated and or mistreated, like women. The creation story has placed man as the dominant power over all life form so, not until the present 'male' god is replaced or presented genderless, there will be little or no respect for the womb of mother earth or the womb of women. Nevertheless, mothers, lovers, and wives love our men just the same because we are the givers of life.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/28/2010 6:57:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/28/2010 4: 37: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21096246 - Woman's womb
    Member: Ridha Abdellaoui
    Comment: Hello Hasmukh!
    I was surprised to see that you have about (439) poems. That means you are a proliferous poet. Frankly, I am not able to read all of them at the moment. I just start with 'Woman's womb'. In its theme it is well chosen for 'Woman is half a society' as we say in Tunisia.
    Here I would like to comment upon both the 'good' and the 'bad' points of your poem. First it is good to start your poem with the four opening questions:

    'Why woman is forced upon to bear a child? '
    'Is it because she is so gracious and mild? '
    'Is that whole universe is so proud of her stature? '
    'Is she paramount factor that she cares not for her future? '

    That is great to draw the attention of the Reader / Listener to your problematicity that will be solved throughout the intervening verses but please pay attention to the grammaticality of:

    'Why woman is forced upon to bear a child? '

    Please pay attention to the inversion rule in questioning. Many poets mis-interpret the poetic license which is another matter.
    In general your poem is of great value but there is the problem of 'Directness'. In poetry one should avoid that otherwise his / her 'poem' will lose its essence.

    'No one should violate her modesty or simply dare'

    That looks like a legal order:

    'No driver should park here or dare'

    You see there is no difference between your verse and this prohibition sign!
    There are many other verses that should be re-formulated.
    Finally, this is but an opinion with all my respect and encouragement.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/28/2010 11:13:00 AM)

    From : Vp Ramesan (India ;)
    To : Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time : 1/27/2010 11: 29: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : comments

    Dear Hasmukh,

    Your concern for the Mother's womb you have to be answered by men all over the world. When religions all over the world chain the women and put her under the yoke of slavery and she is treated as a commodity to passify the lust of men there will be no end to her ordeals. You might have read the news that a sixteen year old girl from Bangladesh was impregnated my a man under the pretext that he will marry her. He was twenty. The village panchayat convened a meeting and slapped the punishment of 101 lashes by whip and threatened her family of being declared out caste and even expelled from the village in case the family is not amenable to the corporal punishment ordered by the Panchayat. The young man, the ravisher, was left scot-free. This is the very same situation in India there is a written constitution under which there is a legal system and Judiciary. Yet the politicians shut there eyes towards such heinous crimes against women. I exhort you gentle man to react sharply to such social evils emanated from religion. Congrats. I vote ten marks for you. Please visit my poems and offer me support with votes.

    Poet V.P.RAMESAN

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2010 5:27:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 1/26/2010 8: 53: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21165338 - Joint family
    Member: Indira Renganathan
    Comment: Hats off to you Hasmukh...no one can beat you...excellent

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/25/2010 7:57:00 PM)

    Divorce has happened over just this very thing, Jadia, often! My mother once told my husband, NEVER stop dating your wife. When we're dating we see only the best of one another. Once the wooing is done and the vows said, the real person shines through. There's no more courtship that once made everything so much fun. It becomes too routine, and soon it depresses men and women to see where they are in life.
    Sure-fire way to keep spark and happiness is to always be aware of the emotions of one another and to always be respectful of those...
    This is a wonderful write of one that has a second chance...
    Enjoyed this!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/24/2010 6:09:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/23/2010 9: 02: 00 PM

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    Poem: 19017989 - Simple grace
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: Women are generally kind and very tolerant
    They remain very pleasant with quality inherent
    It is their powerful weapon and very essential
    To prove its worth with element so substantial

    your words describe us the best. so good to know that in this chauvinist world there exists a man who not only admits but appreciates a woman's beauty, lovely and eternal.10++++

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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