Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 564,340 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2721. Give Best In 7/7/2015
2722. Seek And Help 7/7/2015
2723. Many Things 7/7/2015
2724. Many Tnhsig Not Done 7/8/2015
2725. Against Misfortune 7/8/2015
2726. Great Essence 7/11/2015
2727. Great Essence Of 7/11/2015
2728. Love Is No Game 7/11/2015
2729. Celebrate With 7/12/2015
2730. All Round Show 7/14/2015
2731. Extra Talent 7/14/2015
2732. False Degrees 7/14/2015
2733. Fake Democracy 7/11/2015
2734. Body And Mind 7/15/2015
2735. Sole Judge 7/17/2015
2736. It Wins 7/18/2015
2737. Know It Better 7/23/2015
2738. His Last Days 7/23/2015
2739. Occasionally Force 7/24/2015
2740. The Society Shall Be 7/24/2015
2741. Out To Know 7/24/2015
2742. No Turmoil At All 7/25/2015
2743. Bid Or Chase 7/25/2015
2744. One In Million Ever 7/26/2015
2745. Let Us Change 7/27/2015
2746. Through His Vision 7/27/2015
2747. The Ruffians Are 7/27/2015
2748. Internal Connection 7/30/2015
2749. Open Question 7/31/2015
2750. Body And Relation 8/1/2015
2751. Body And Relation Terms 8/1/2015
2752. Keep On 8/1/2015
2753. Out From Home 8/1/2015
2754. Its Denal 8/1/2015
2755. Like Girl Child 8/1/2015
2756. Not Safe 8/1/2015
2757. Light And Face 8/2/2015
2758. Shed Light 8/2/2015
2759. Always Real 8/3/2015
2760. Always Realin Nature 8/3/2015

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/18/2010 6:25:00 PM)

    Re: Simple alarm (Score: 1)
    by Zbird on Monday, January 18,2010 (10: 45: 51)
    powerful write with a powerful and important message. well done.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/18/2010 4:46:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 1/17/2010 11: 43: 00 PM

    Remove this comment
    Poem: 21060458 - Wise step
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: i like all the words written here...these are all true...i quote one stanza ''
    ''''may wait for those moments to enter in my barren age
    I shall become poet to pen down lovely feelings on page
    It may end long spell of frustration for not meeting partner
    Who could bring all happiness and prove as good listener''''....

    .perfect combination is already at your pen and in your mind
    for it will always go hand in hand to everywhere u wanted to start
    just be inspired and never take feelings of in despair
    we always love you, promise...we always want u to be inspired...smileeeeeeee dear

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:15:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 1: 53: 00 PM

    Remove this comment
    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Sahar Sahar
    Comment: congratulations,
    with some sparkly,
    moonlight,
    filtering from jasmine,
    glowing in your home,
    and keep on with your,
    stories to friends.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:15:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 1: 53: 00 PM

    Remove this comment
    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Sahar Sahar
    Comment: congratulations,
    with some sparkly,
    moonlight,
    filtering from jasmine,
    glowing in your home,
    and keep on with your,
    stories to friends.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:12:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/15/2010 7: 15: 00 PM

    Remove this comment
    Poem: 18111421 - Jackson is no more
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: this is an amazing poem on an amazing man, not only was he a gr8 star but also a great humatarian, extremely generous, beautifule heart and body and above all a gr8 talent. a talent which is born only once, not in a decade or a century but only once. he would be missed and wiould continue to inspire and make his presence felt through his music, his dance, through him as a lagend. i love him more than words can describe, no one but he is the only celebrity who can make me cry. my respect and adoration for him is irreplaceable, for me it's only MJ and no one else. God bless hinm and i hope he is happy and at peace now.

    i loved the way have rhymed it and covered most part of his life, please spare some time on 'am i too big for a life? ', 'moonwalker' and 'searching eyes' by me they are based on Michael Jackson. hope you like them.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 6:55:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 4: 27: 00 AM

    Remove this comment
    Poem: 20891385 - Freedom
    Member: Yacov Mitchenko
    Comment: A good poem. But I think that as regards freedom, it can only be won from within. When that happens, the outward follows suit. But since most people in the world are slaves psychologically - slaves to their thoughts, beliefs, conditioning, and so on - wars, intolerances, antagonisms between countries are inevitable. It is only when an individual no longer regards himself as belonging to a country, or religion, or faith, or to any group whatsoever - is is only then that freedom is. A free individual is alone in a sense.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 1:26:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/15/2010 7: 15: 00 PM

    Remove this comment
    Poem: 18111421 - Jackson is no more
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: this is an amazing poem on an amazing man, not only was he a gr8 star but also a great humatarian, extremely generous, beautifule heart and body and above all a gr8 talent. a talent which is born only once, not in a decade or a century but only once. he would be missed and wiould continue to inspire and make his presence felt through his music, his dance, through him as a lagend. i love him more than words can describe, no one but he is the only celebrity who can make me cry. my respect and adoration for him is irreplaceable, for me it's only MJ and no one else. God bless hinm and i hope he is happy and at peace now.



    i loved the way have rhymed it and covered most part of his life, please spare some time on 'am i too big for a life? ', 'moonwalker' and 'searching eyes' by me they are based on Michael Jackson. hope you like them.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 1:24:00 AM)

    Poem: 21027430 - Why to talk
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: We should not lose hope for better tomorrow
    World at large will come to terms and follow
    It may deliver what is expected from them
    We can take free air and breathe then



    i wish the above lines were possible, this poem is extremeley descriptive and you have expressed almost all that is going around us internationally. i like the last stanza but i wonder if it would mean of any relevance to the sufferers, people around the world are suffering, the intensity of which depends on the country you are from. there are countrymen who are scared to dream a way out, even frightened to talk openly about their religion, affraid to talk about their race and the political parties ruling them. the word fear is in their veins, mixed with blood now, inseparable but again we should always hope for better.

    10++++ and i wish the morale here materializes some day.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/15/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 1/15/2010 11: 06: 00 AM

    Remove this comment
    Poem: 20890948 - Childhood
    Member: Louie Levy - Love & Peace
    Comment: Well versed, expressed and tributed for all parental Life on earth
    I can very much heartfully relate with most all your recollections and emotions for both parents. Many of us are fortunate as to experience the needed polarity of Love and Discipline. Your parents are very well rewarded, wherever they may exist in your metaphor' heart. With Empathy, we must also express for the countless children whom are starved without Parents, Love, food and water. Their unanswered prayers must reach all our own fortunate hearts. By which-ever method, Joining hands with others on Earth All We Need is ____ to Help Them with Charitable Leadership

    I've made your - our felt poem, a favorite
    Thanks for sharing
    ...louie

    http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=Nh7D2g5v-Sg

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/14/2010 6:21:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/14/2010 6: 19: 00 PM

    Remove this comment
    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Annabel Sheila
    Comment: Congratulations on your 400th poem.....never let anyone sway you from your passion for writing! ! ! Your thoughts are golden and sharing them with strangers is a beautiful thing to do.

    Anna

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

[Report Error]