Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 595,699 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2721. Must With Joy 1/17/2015
2722. કહેવા નથી બોલ.. kaheva nathi bol 1/18/2015
2723. કહેવા નથી બોલ.. kaheva nathi bol 1/18/2015
2724. કહેવા નથી બોલ.. kaheva nathi bol 1/18/2015
2725. It Flows 1/18/2015
2726. Love In Relation 1/18/2015
2727. On Arrival As Guest 1/18/2015
2728. Take Deep Breathe 1/19/2015
2729. For You Ever 1/20/2015
2730. Bold Move 1/22/2015
2731. Feel Rich 1/22/2015
2732. Where Is Face 1/22/2015
2733. With Our Action 1/23/2015
2734. Living End 1/23/2015
2735. Magical Impact 1/23/2015
2736. Staunch 1/23/2015
2737. સમાપ્ત થઇ જાત. samaaapt thai jaat 1/24/2015
2738. Ill Gotten 1/24/2015
2739. Lively Present 1/27/2015
2740. With Promising 1/27/2015
2741. Good Slap 1/27/2015
2742. Beautiful Nature 1/23/2015
2743. Awareness In 1/27/2015
2744. All Kinds 1/27/2015
2745. At This Time 1/28/2015
2746. Some Decisive Turn 1/30/2015
2747. Its Wisdom 1/30/2015
2748. From Real Reality 2/2/2015
2749. Around In Hunt 2/2/2015
2750. An Ivory 2/3/2015
2751. Chase Chase 2/1/2015
2752. No More Ego 2/3/2015
2753. In Simple Way 2/6/2015
2754. More You 2/7/2015
2755. On Face As Gain 2/13/2015
2756. The Phillipines 2/13/2015
2757. No Controversy 2/14/2015
2758. With Inner Feel 3/3/2015
2759. With Little Feel At 3/3/2015
2760. Let More To Preserve 3/4/2015

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/23/2010 9:31:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 1/23/2010 7: 21: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21096246 - Woman's womb
    Member: Indira Renganathan
    Comment: Hasmukh, you are the best son of the Goddess of genesis....endless times I bow to you....with lots of thanks lots of 10s

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/23/2010 9:28:00 AM)

    te & Time: 1/23/2010 7: 23: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21121339 - Haiti
    Member: Merna Ibrahim
    Comment: Actually the human beings polluted and destroyed the nature, so we must protect the good left part and fix the bad part, like that we will build a foundation for a better future and for the next generations.According to the natural phenomenons, God'Almighty' is only the one who can control this affair.So God help them and forgive all of us...
    A long poem but it is really good and involves a strong and crucial messages..Merna

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/20/2010 10:32:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/20/2010 10: 24: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20958338 - Pleasantry exchanges
    Member: Antonio Liao
    Comment: If only the world will only listen and read this poem.....the fume of fire
    in every heart lost its scent...and the greed of power loosen its mind, down
    to emptiness of the soul.....prayer and wish this poem will be gone to every
    one's thirst of nothingness....God bless...a 10 Star of all poems...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/20/2010 1:58:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 1/19/2010 11: 49: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21085528 - What is it to me
    Member: Yacov Mitchenko
    Comment: Actually, I enjoyed this poem more than most of your others. It is clearer, more focused, and the development of ideas is smoother. There's improvement in grammar and syntax. Yes, we need to walk alone and leave this earth a little more beautiful than it was without us. We need to proceed with the utmost passion and dedication, regardless of how well our efforts are received by others. Generally, the nobler the cause, the more ill will and resentment the individual provokes, often due to envy or to people's feeling threatened in some way. Thank you, sir.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/18/2010 6:25:00 PM)

    Re: Simple alarm (Score: 1)
    by Zbird on Monday, January 18,2010 (10: 45: 51)
    powerful write with a powerful and important message. well done.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/18/2010 4:46:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 1/17/2010 11: 43: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21060458 - Wise step
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: i like all the words written here...these are all true...i quote one stanza ''
    ''''may wait for those moments to enter in my barren age
    I shall become poet to pen down lovely feelings on page
    It may end long spell of frustration for not meeting partner
    Who could bring all happiness and prove as good listener''''....

    .perfect combination is already at your pen and in your mind
    for it will always go hand in hand to everywhere u wanted to start
    just be inspired and never take feelings of in despair
    we always love you, promise...we always want u to be inspired...smileeeeeeee dear

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:15:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 1: 53: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Sahar Sahar
    Comment: congratulations,
    with some sparkly,
    moonlight,
    filtering from jasmine,
    glowing in your home,
    and keep on with your,
    stories to friends.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:15:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 1: 53: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Sahar Sahar
    Comment: congratulations,
    with some sparkly,
    moonlight,
    filtering from jasmine,
    glowing in your home,
    and keep on with your,
    stories to friends.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 7:12:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/15/2010 7: 15: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18111421 - Jackson is no more
    Member: Rinki Nandy
    Comment: this is an amazing poem on an amazing man, not only was he a gr8 star but also a great humatarian, extremely generous, beautifule heart and body and above all a gr8 talent. a talent which is born only once, not in a decade or a century but only once. he would be missed and wiould continue to inspire and make his presence felt through his music, his dance, through him as a lagend. i love him more than words can describe, no one but he is the only celebrity who can make me cry. my respect and adoration for him is irreplaceable, for me it's only MJ and no one else. God bless hinm and i hope he is happy and at peace now.

    i loved the way have rhymed it and covered most part of his life, please spare some time on 'am i too big for a life? ', 'moonwalker' and 'searching eyes' by me they are based on Michael Jackson. hope you like them.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2010 6:55:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/16/2010 4: 27: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20891385 - Freedom
    Member: Yacov Mitchenko
    Comment: A good poem. But I think that as regards freedom, it can only be won from within. When that happens, the outward follows suit. But since most people in the world are slaves psychologically - slaves to their thoughts, beliefs, conditioning, and so on - wars, intolerances, antagonisms between countries are inevitable. It is only when an individual no longer regards himself as belonging to a country, or religion, or faith, or to any group whatsoever - is is only then that freedom is. A free individual is alone in a sense.

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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