Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 598,079 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2841. Not Above Criticism 5/8/2015
2842. Care And Love 5/9/2015
2843. Days Are Hectic 5/9/2015
2844. O Mother No Care 5/10/2015
2845. Some Pointer 5/11/2015
2846. On Easy Steps 5/12/2015
2847. In World Politics 5/13/2015
2848. Let It Be Read 5/13/2015
2849. Your Feelings 5/17/2015
2850. At An Eleventh Hour 5/18/2015
2851. Across Fence 5/18/2015
2852. Live With Love 5/18/2015
2853. Not Real Intenton 5/19/2015
2854. Offended Often 5/19/2015
2855. In Their Memory 5/19/2015
2856. Real Sight 5/21/2015
2857. Human Race 5/21/2015
2858. The Old Scripures 5/23/2015
2859. Her Contribution 5/23/2015
2860. Owed To Them 5/23/2015
2861. To Be Free Again 5/24/2015
2862. No Hollow Words 5/25/2015
2863. As Guide 5/25/2015
2864. He Is 5/25/2015
2865. Often Told 5/26/2015
2866. Many Times A Day 5/26/2015
2867. I Brush Off 5/26/2015
2868. Found The Way 5/27/2015
2869. With Fresh Breathe 5/28/2015
2870. With Questions No More 5/28/2015
2871. Cheerfully Share 5/28/2015
2872. With Final Call 5/31/2015
2873. Ring In Ears Again 6/1/2015
2874. So Much Concern 6/2/2015
2875. Sake Of Suprmacy 6/4/2015
2876. An Ignition Key 6/4/2015
2877. Always Rejoice 6/4/2015
2878. Bow Down Again 6/4/2015
2879. The Poor Suffers 6/5/2015
2880. And Nobility 6/3/2015

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/26/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    From: Lindani Mahlangu (Siyabuswa South Africa; Male; 19)
    To: Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time: 12/24/2009 8: 39: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: Wow wow wow

    A poem titled 'accept everything'
    thats a poem that deserve a round of applause, you are such a great writer, happy Xmas man n have a prosperous new year too. I like ur style of writing n all da courage n potential u have man, cheers

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/2/2009 10:18:00 AM)

    From: Joseph Stotz (Springfield United States; Male; 30)
    To: Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time: 12/1/2009 7: 58: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: Re: dear friend

    Sir I appreciate all kind words
    that pour from the silver breeze
    that I may find my soul and not
    mind anymore being bound by week knees
    that I may stand up with truth
    and never have to fight
    That when I have no time to read yours
    for you it is I write
    May God bless you as I may be blessed
    as you have given me faith
    that I may write for family
    soldiers that no man be left behind
    i write this now for you
    and I will post it true
    for all to read as you
    Hasmukh Amathalal
    I may be american
    but divided the whole
    earth needs to unite in spirit
    to be never torn from old

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/10/2009 6:53:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 11/10/2009 6: 31: 00 PM Remove this comment

    Poem: 20153775 - Backlash
    Member: Antonio Liao

    Comment: Beautifully landscape of poetry.....this is a poem for refreshing and for
    stress management.....just a ponder would mean a lot to unlock
    our emotional pain.....recommended for people who have no reason to
    pacify them selves....no reason the...Why of this world.....this would
    help their doubt.....thank you for sharing...and God bless you my friend
    a 10....and a Star

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/31/2009 6:06:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/31/2009 3: 04: 00 AM Remove this comment

    Poem: 20033807 - I could explain
    Member: Lady Grace

    Comment: i wish you could explain sorrow
    as you see it in her eyes
    to stop you from loneliness
    keeping in your heart..

    i wish she could explain all the things
    that bothers inside you
    for it can comfort the surroundings
    and the environment within you...

    i wish i could see you in the best smile
    without jealousy and discomforts
    without hesitations and doubts
    wish a goodluck to BOTH....

  • Mohd Murtuza Soofi (10/31/2009 3:22:00 AM)

    quiet tricky and nice use of words in most of your poetry

  • Catrina Heart (10/30/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    My thankfulness for the sacred text
    you have engraved on my obelisk

    The hieroglyphics carved means so much
    In my journey to the seven seas

    You stood to be my beacon on the storm
    You stood as a tree seeing my history

    Thanks once again for the friendship
    Painting my days really worth remembering

    Thanks and love,
    Catrina Heart

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 9:49:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 10/28/2009 8: 59: 00 PM Remove this comment

    Poem: 19017920 - Blood all over
    Member: Almedia Knight

    Comment: 'Blood spilled all over on ground' your poem is painful to read because of the truth it tells.As I write there're 2 wars spilling the blood of innocence men, women, and children. Where or who is the 'almighty'? Perhaps our hoping for 'it' to be rescued by the power of some unknown or myth, [ no respect to any one's belief just my personal opinion] seems to just give us a reason to relinquish our personal responsibilities. Hasmukh, without love in our hearts for the born and the unborn, there seems to be little hope for any changes in the minds and hearts of those who wishes to dominate and or suppress other human beings.In my country many pretend to care about the unborn but how can you be concern about the unborn but have no problem killing or having those that are born killed...it makes no sense to me.Anyway a good write. a 10+++

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 9:18:00 PM)

    Poem: 17309480 - All hopes against hope
    Member: Gracey Newman

    Comment: AHH...the ending is soo powerfull
    'Sun may go up with its destined time,
    target we should set as our object prime,
    luck may not favour but not let us down,
    plant will come up when seeds are sown '
    - beautiful

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 5:57:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/28/2009 12: 58: 00 AM Remove this comment

    Poem: 19924166 - Beautiful world
    Member: Vinod Kumar

    Comment: Nice job.. to identify and understand the almighty with the clear mind, that is this poem, in my humble openion there should be a godess to help the god that is Mother, who knows the cild`s needs well, thanks 10++

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:16:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 23: 00 PM Remove this comment

    Poem: 19916139 - As a friend
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hasmukh bhai,
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem I liked the poem though I have a different style altogether-free verse..Your beginning lines make the point:
    'Can you tell me as a friend?
    Where the stars and world end
    May I fail to catch glimpse of beauty?
    Will not everyone will laugh at me with pity?
    A nicely rhymed poem. Rated high.
    Just a suggestion- a friendly one- if you want to continue with rhyming, you are to be careful about the metre as well.

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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