Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 565,413 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2841. In Our Blood 8/28/2015
2842. We Are Same 8/29/2015
2843. Shock And Anger 8/29/2015
2844. Filled With 8/29/2015
2845. Beautiful Face 8/29/2015
2846. With Happiness 8/30/2015
2847. I Remember It 8/30/2015
2848. The Country Faces 8/30/2015
2849. My Ground 8/31/2015
2850. Think Of Love 8/31/2015
2851. Their Trade 8/31/2015
2852. Dark Lit 8/31/2015
2853. On Floor 8/31/2015
2854. Keep Silence 8/31/2015
2855. No Less Sacred 8/30/2015
2856. Powerful King 8/31/2015
2857. Love Shall Need 8/31/2015
2858. Not Deception 8/31/2015
2859. How I Miss You 9/1/2015
2860. Very Existence 9/1/2015
2861. Father To Children 9/1/2015
2862. With Naked Eyes 9/1/2015
2863. Make Efforts 9/2/2015
2864. Till Taken Over 9/3/2015
2865. Feel Proud At Poetry 9/3/2015
2866. Different Colors In One 9/3/2015
2867. With Own Pride 9/3/2015
2868. Green Leaf 9/4/2015
2869. May Turn True 9/4/2015
2870. With Little Smile 9/4/2015
2871. Always Falters 9/4/2015
2872. Peaceful Relation 9/5/2015
2873. Neceesary And 9/5/2015
2874. The Heat Shall 9/6/2015
2875. With Full Cjance 9/8/2015
2876. In Their World 9/8/2015
2877. Express Fears 9/8/2015
2878. With New Source 9/8/2015
2879. Election Time 9/9/2015
2880. Advancement 9/9/2015

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Catrina Heart (10/30/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    My thankfulness for the sacred text
    you have engraved on my obelisk

    The hieroglyphics carved means so much
    In my journey to the seven seas

    You stood to be my beacon on the storm
    You stood as a tree seeing my history

    Thanks once again for the friendship
    Painting my days really worth remembering

    Thanks and love,
    Catrina Heart

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 9:49:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 10/28/2009 8: 59: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19017920 - Blood all over
    Member: Almedia Knight

    Comment: 'Blood spilled all over on ground' your poem is painful to read because of the truth it tells.As I write there're 2 wars spilling the blood of innocence men, women, and children. Where or who is the 'almighty'? Perhaps our hoping for 'it' to be rescued by the power of some unknown or myth, [ no respect to any one's belief just my personal opinion] seems to just give us a reason to relinquish our personal responsibilities. Hasmukh, without love in our hearts for the born and the unborn, there seems to be little hope for any changes in the minds and hearts of those who wishes to dominate and or suppress other human beings.In my country many pretend to care about the unborn but how can you be concern about the unborn but have no problem killing or having those that are born killed...it makes no sense to me.Anyway a good write. a 10+++

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 9:18:00 PM)

    Poem: 17309480 - All hopes against hope
    Member: Gracey Newman

    Comment: AHH...the ending is soo powerfull
    'Sun may go up with its destined time,
    target we should set as our object prime,
    luck may not favour but not let us down,
    plant will come up when seeds are sown '
    - beautiful

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 5:57:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/28/2009 12: 58: 00 AM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19924166 - Beautiful world
    Member: Vinod Kumar

    Comment: Nice job.. to identify and understand the almighty with the clear mind, that is this poem, in my humble openion there should be a godess to help the god that is Mother, who knows the cild`s needs well, thanks 10++

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:16:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 23: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19916139 - As a friend
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hasmukh bhai,
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem I liked the poem though I have a different style altogether-free verse..Your beginning lines make the point:
    'Can you tell me as a friend?
    Where the stars and world end
    May I fail to catch glimpse of beauty?
    Will not everyone will laugh at me with pity?
    A nicely rhymed poem. Rated high.
    Just a suggestion- a friendly one- if you want to continue with rhyming, you are to be careful about the metre as well.
    Rajkumar

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:15:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 33: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19917588 - Don't garland me
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hashmukhbhai.
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on an introspective poem of modern day degradation of values.I liked the poem and rated high. to me this is the best line of the poem:
    'tolerence is greatest key to success
    open to all and grant free access'

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:13:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 45: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19796378 - Hurt me again
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hashmukhlalbhai,
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem bubbling with confidence in Gandhian philosophy. I liked the poem though in some places you may re-work the rhyming pattern to have a better flow -personal opinion only.
    Saying that I have rated your poem highly. The beginning lines strikes me most:
    'Why don't you hurt me again?
    If that helps you to position regain
    Either way it has to be somebody's gain
    Concern and worry should not remain'
    Like an actor entering the stage, you have overwhelmed your audience simply with the beginning lines.
    Rajkumar

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 7: 47: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 17670074 - Cowardice act
    Member: Louis Rams

    Comment: the last verse says it all
    a cowards act is not remembered, but the damage it can do will be remembered.
    and as ou said it does not only apply to war, but to everything in life.

    excellent write a aten

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:04:00 AM)

    Benjamin Hallas (10/27/2009 10: 45: 00 PM)

    I have to say that this is one of the best poems that I have ever read. The message that this poem conveys is one that we should all heed. We all need to be conscious of the earth.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:02:00 AM)

    Yacov Mitchenko (10/27/2009 1: 57: 00 AM)

    The last stanza is the most revealing here. Peace and wholeness of being are more important than all the travails associated with success. A few points about success: there are often expectations brought to bear once we have succeeded, and we're often afraid we may not meet those expectations. Moreover, successes often incite envy, and there's always someone more successful than you. They aren't permanent either. Although I don't understand many lines here (because they're too abstract) , I appreciate the thoughtfulness of the poem as a whole.

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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