Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 566,497 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2881. Peaceful Relation 9/5/2015
2882. Neceesary And 9/5/2015
2883. The Heat Shall 9/6/2015
2884. With Full Cjance 9/8/2015
2885. In Their World 9/8/2015
2886. With New Source 9/8/2015
2887. Election Time 9/9/2015
2888. Advancement 9/9/2015
2889. Express Fears 9/8/2015
2890. Sincere Prayers To God 9/10/2015
2891. Less Talked 9/10/2015
2892. All The Fronts 9/10/2015
2893. Humbly Relate 9/10/2015
2894. Haiku 9/11/2015
2895. Happiness Around 9/11/2015
2896. Death With Delight 9/12/2015
2897. Lovely Woman In Mind 9/12/2015
2898. Lovely Woman N Me 9/12/2015
2899. Tired Of 9/12/2015
2900. Self Awareness 9/13/2015
2901. With Such Negligence 9/13/2015
2902. Your Lovely Smile 9/13/2015
2903. Strengthen The Relation For 9/14/2015
2904. To Fears Only 9/15/2015
2905. Strong Resolution 9/15/2015
2906. Firmly Drive 9/18/2015
2907. Complete Sway 9/18/2015
2908. Search For 9/18/2015
2909. In Such Turmoil 9/20/2015
2910. It Never Patches 9/20/2015
2911. Everything To Finish 9/22/2015
2912. For Correction 9/23/2015
2913. With Relief 9/23/2015
2914. New Journey 9/24/2015
2915. No Explanation 9/24/2015
2916. Behind Teeth 9/24/2015
2917. Loyalists Or Friends 9/25/2015
2918. All Woman 9/25/2015
2919. Till The Cessation 9/26/2015
2920. Till It Arrives 9/26/2015

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Catrina Heart (10/27/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Amathalal is a magnanimous dedicated modern poet of today’s’ generation. His works were all reflections of human realism in this world. Be it in individual, personal or global situations. The poet’s pieces surround to the problems arising to everyday’s life with much ado to poetic advices, claiming awareness with questions and motivations in every stanza.

    The poet makes his crafts in quatrain form of verses with fine ending rhymes. Using also vivid images so that the readers will be able to understand clearly what he wanted to convey. Grammar is less significant, bluntness or dullness of presentation is not that matters to him for he believes that the best verse will mark to the readers’ mind easily and the influence of each composition to the lives of the people is most valuable.

    Reading his works is such a pleasure and insightful. Every theme offers valuable lessons to ponder on, great take outs in eloquence.

    To the poet himself, Congratulations for the job well done! ! !

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  • Kris Templin (10/11/2009 9:25:00 PM)

    hello
    I just wanted to say that this is a very awesome poem
    a lot of feeling you put into it wow thanks for sharing

  • Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (9/23/2009 7:19:00 AM)

    ........Tremendous efforts and good poetry are your forte.But the popularity terms are quite misleading for I was India`s first last year for two weeks... Efforts for transmission of thoughts must not be ever left aloof. All the best Amathalal

  • Brittney Miller (8/16/2009 9:17:00 PM)

    Very good I quit enjoyed it

  • Tear Of An Angel S.R.B.W. (8/15/2009 1:31:00 PM)

    Your Words Flow Well With Truth And Capture The Very Essence Of The Heart. A Wonderful Poet Indeed. **Blessings**

  • p.a. noushad p.a. noushad (8/11/2009 4:52:00 AM)

    my heart gets wings on your verses

  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (8/1/2009 7:38:00 PM)

    you are a fine poet.

  • Bhanubhai Montu Shah (7/27/2009 8:51:00 PM)

    Friend in need is friend in deed,
    Modern friends only provide feed,
    Desert in right time and nev.........
    fiend who helps in time is called friend...10

  • Mariel Obog Mariel Obog (7/23/2009 5:00:00 AM)

    i aM disgrace.. i Love this one.. its nice.. evry! should read it..

  • Samaneh Nazerian (7/22/2009 12:29:00 AM)

    Hi, Dear.

    Well down! Your poems are so nice. Your “bidding farewell” was excellent and so amazing. Your way of expression is wonderful and easy to understand. Your poems’ style are very close to mine; It is good to me.
    It’ll be pleasure for me to have your comments on my words almost with God.
    I’m waiting for knowing your opinion and nice advice about my poems.
    Wish you all success and happiness,
    Samaneh Nazerian
    Tehran,
    Iran

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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