Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 594,285 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukhlal Amathalallal Poems

2881. Into Good Will 6/25/2015
2882. Reach Daily 6/26/2015
2883. Do Not Present 6/26/2015
2884. Harp, On 6/27/2015
2885. With Cheerfulness 6/28/2015
2886. Think For A While 7/1/2015
2887. Some Influence 7/3/2015
2888. Mass Annihilation 7/3/2015
2889. No Birds Around 7/3/2015
2890. When Things 7/3/2015
2891. The Menace 7/3/2015
2892. From The Race 7/3/2015
2893. Gross Confusion 7/3/2015
2894. Do We Need Democracy 7/3/2015
2895. In Sensible Manner 7/4/2015
2896. To The Scene 7/4/2015
2897. Really Wanted 7/4/2015
2898. With The Wind 7/5/2015
2899. If Politicians 7/7/2015
2900. My Head In 7/7/2015
2901. From Point Of 7/7/2015
2902. Two Into 7/7/2015
2903. Give Best In 7/7/2015
2904. Seek And Help 7/7/2015
2905. Many Things 7/7/2015
2906. Many Tnhsig Not Done 7/8/2015
2907. Against Misfortune 7/8/2015
2908. Great Essence 7/11/2015
2909. Great Essence Of 7/11/2015
2910. Love Is No Game 7/11/2015
2911. Celebrate With 7/12/2015
2912. All Round Show 7/14/2015
2913. Extra Talent 7/14/2015
2914. False Degrees 7/14/2015
2915. Fake Democracy 7/11/2015
2916. Body And Mind 7/15/2015
2917. Sole Judge 7/17/2015
2918. It Wins 7/18/2015
2919. Know It Better 7/23/2015
2920. His Last Days 7/23/2015

Comments about Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:13:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 11: 45: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 19796378 - Hurt me again
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee

    Comment: Dear Hashmukhlalbhai,
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem bubbling with confidence in Gandhian philosophy. I liked the poem though in some places you may re-work the rhyming pattern to have a better flow -personal opinion only.
    Saying that I have rated your poem highly. The beginning lines strikes me most:
    'Why don't you hurt me again?
    If that helps you to position regain
    Either way it has to be somebody's gain
    Concern and worry should not remain'
    Like an actor entering the stage, you have overwhelmed your audience simply with the beginning lines.
    Rajkumar

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/27/2009 7: 47: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 17670074 - Cowardice act
    Member: Louis Rams

    Comment: the last verse says it all
    a cowards act is not remembered, but the damage it can do will be remembered.
    and as ou said it does not only apply to war, but to everything in life.

    excellent write a aten

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:04:00 AM)

    Benjamin Hallas (10/27/2009 10: 45: 00 PM)

    I have to say that this is one of the best poems that I have ever read. The message that this poem conveys is one that we should all heed. We all need to be conscious of the earth.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:02:00 AM)

    Yacov Mitchenko (10/27/2009 1: 57: 00 AM)

    The last stanza is the most revealing here. Peace and wholeness of being are more important than all the travails associated with success. A few points about success: there are often expectations brought to bear once we have succeeded, and we're often afraid we may not meet those expectations. Moreover, successes often incite envy, and there's always someone more successful than you. They aren't permanent either. Although I don't understand many lines here (because they're too abstract) , I appreciate the thoughtfulness of the poem as a whole.

  • Catrina Heart (10/27/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Amathalal is a magnanimous dedicated modern poet of today’s’ generation. His works were all reflections of human realism in this world. Be it in individual, personal or global situations. The poet’s pieces surround to the problems arising to everyday’s life with much ado to poetic advices, claiming awareness with questions and motivations in every stanza.

    The poet makes his crafts in quatrain form of verses with fine ending rhymes. Using also vivid images so that the readers will be able to understand clearly what he wanted to convey. Grammar is less significant, bluntness or dullness of presentation is not that matters to him for he believes that the best verse will mark to the readers’ mind easily and the influence of each composition to the lives of the people is most valuable.

    Reading his works is such a pleasure and insightful. Every theme offers valuable lessons to ponder on, great take outs in eloquence.

    To the poet himself, Congratulations for the job well done! ! !

  • Kris Templin (10/11/2009 9:25:00 PM)

    hello
    I just wanted to say that this is a very awesome poem
    a lot of feeling you put into it wow thanks for sharing

  • Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (9/23/2009 7:19:00 AM)

    ........Tremendous efforts and good poetry are your forte.But the popularity terms are quite misleading for I was India`s first last year for two weeks... Efforts for transmission of thoughts must not be ever left aloof. All the best Amathalal

  • Brittney Miller (8/16/2009 9:17:00 PM)

    Very good I quit enjoyed it

  • Tear Of An Angel S.R.B.W. (8/15/2009 1:31:00 PM)

    Your Words Flow Well With Truth And Capture The Very Essence Of The Heart. A Wonderful Poet Indeed. **Blessings**

  • p.a. noushad p.a. noushad (8/11/2009 4:52:00 AM)

    my heart gets wings on your verses

Best Poem of Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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