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  • Hasnain Aaqib Hasnain Aaqib (3/21/2013 1:13:00 PM)

    I hope my dear poet pals would not hesitate to comment on my poetry. I feel sorry for being absent from the site for a very long period. Now, I am back and will continue on poemhunter. thanks.

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A Smile

It is as fertile
As the valley of Nile
But it takes nothing from our bag
Of material belongings
In fact, it truly helps out
Those eternal pleasure who have sought
It is as innocent as a flowing brook
But it is too fragile to have a hook
Just like a rambling rose

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