Hira Akhtar

Rookie - 161 Points [Angel] (19-3-1998 / Gujrat)

Comments about Hira Akhtar

  • Keith Sifelani Keith Sifelani (6/8/2014 12:09:00 PM)

    Good at explaining your feelings keep it up.

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  • Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:47:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

  • M. Shahid. H Chouhdry M. Shahid. H Chouhdry (6/1/2014 10:09:00 AM)

    In nursery rhymes it seems sometime lost in rhythm although its a nice one but it could touch up to better one and even more better, specially the 4th verse.Overall its a average poem.thumbs up

  • Hira Akhtar Hira Akhtar (1/5/2014 3:39:00 AM)

    Same to you.... :) May Allah shower His blessings on us all for the sake of this month

  • Usman Arshad (1/4/2014 1:49:00 AM)

    Happy month of rabi- ul- awal

  • Usman Arshad (12/25/2013 11:54:00 AM)

    I prayed for you may allah increase your knowledge power and give you courage to face all hardships and always keep smiling

  • Usman Arshad (12/25/2013 11:54:00 AM)

    I prayed for you may allah increase your knowledge power and give you courage to face all hardships and always keep smiling

  • Usman Arshad (12/25/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    I prayed for you may allah increase your knowledge power and give you courage to face all hardships and always keep smiling

Best Poem of Hira Akhtar

I Feel Alone

When morning wears crown,
with white light of early dawn
When the sun goes down,
and day removes its gown
When night shows frown,
and stars brighten up their town

i feel alone
i feel alone

When quaking eve arrives, i bemoan
there in no one of my own
When tantalizing spring,
glamorizes the lawn
Ah! all the desires, now have flown
None to reckon upon
like a bird, being tied to pinion

i feel alone
i feel alone

'In fall season,
when storms rigadoon
to me, no shelter is known
not any shoulder to rest ...

Read the full of I Feel Alone

Arfa Karim

I just read about a wonderful girl
That was really like a pearl

She was amazing and awesome
Like flowers when they blossom

Everyone was impressed by her vesatility
And for her country a loyality

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