Hunter Dasten

Rookie (May 3rd 1987)

Comments about Hunter Dasten

  • Jonothan Queen (1/28/2010 8:44:00 PM)

    very vivid imagery, i can picture it so clearly in my head, read mine and leave feedback, thanks, if any atlest destroyed beauty, thats my best one, thanks

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  • Brandie Ybarra (7/8/2009 4:03:00 AM)

    when I read the copper tint sky one
    I loved it I could practically smell the salt water and feel the breeze

  • Laclaire Mitchell Nzerem (4/4/2009 3:18:00 PM)

    dasten did you remove your poems? We wanted to read more of your work...or, where can I buy your 10 ### book, mine made 'We All came From Borderlands' by LaClaire Mitchell my lastest one Spider...comment if you like!
    Do a haiku and more visuals you work is great! ! ! ###1010101001010 10s! ! !
    Regards, Claire Nzerem

  • ~ Jon London ~ (2/28/2009 6:07:00 PM)

    If you're looking for dreamy visual reads, Hunter's work projects everything you're searching for. A fine poet, who's voice you'l enjoy visiting

  • Dr. Rupender Jeet Singh (2/2/2009 7:16:00 AM)

    Allright your Ballerina is a martyr.

    I love this one. Keep writing & in touch.

    Thanks and regards.

  • Nithya Raghavan (12/19/2008 5:30:00 AM)

    the poem 'an immutable act' made an interesting is true that some people who are very close to us slip away quite quickly.congratulations! keep writing!

  • brianda Hernandez (12/12/2008 1:18:00 AM)

    you have potential.....

  • Nithya Raghavan (11/24/2008 12:48:00 AM)

    the poem 'the dreams' was very nice.wish it were a bit longer.

  • Allysyn Bryant (11/21/2008 6:25:00 PM)

    Hunter...your poems are great. Could almost take me into a different world while reading them, like the one about the little girl. that one got me. You're a great poem. Keep it up!

  • Peter Tamburrino (11/19/2008 10:39:00 PM)

    Very well written. Definitely have a natural talent. Will look forward to reading your other works.

Best Poem of Hunter Dasten

A Ballerina's Dance

Her feet float above the stage
as if carried by some unseen force.
From my view among the generally admitted
I can hardly make out the details of her face.
But those graceful movements are so alluring
each subtle step, precise, and all consuming.

She is the most vulnerable of all artists,
performing a dance that demands every emotion soak through her skin.
Each fluid movement pulls from the reservoir of her experience.
Trained from a young age to move agilely across the stage,
bearing the weight of the world upon her shoulders;
My Ballerina has more ...

Read the full of A Ballerina's Dance

The Climb

Tragedy surrounds us in this life.
The seeds of Hatred, Cruelty, and Oppression,
easily grow to rival the heights of Redwood forests.
It's so easy to find yourself lost in this cold dark world.
But I promise you together we can breach the canopy,
and from our perch we will see the sunlight!
As it reveals bliss too is boundless,
If you're willing to make the climb.

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