I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel

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  • Amie-Lee ...... (5/14/2008 6:16:00 PM)

    I love your poems, I guess I can just really relate to them............keep it up.

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  • B3@utiful Dis@st3r (4/24/2008 10:18:00 AM)

    I love your poems they are so deep and so true

  • Elizabeth Holyoake (2/27/2008 4:58:00 PM)

    this poem is extRemAlly awEsoMe
    and So So true
    ive comE cloSe 2 dying BeCause of thIs tOpic
    i No thAt Every TIme i reAd thIs poem i wiLl thinK agaiN! ! !
    thankk U 4 the WiLl 2 livE

  • Red Blooded Black Hearted (11/27/2007 9:16:00 PM)

    Kaila, ur an excellent poet with more skill in your lil finger than most. I love reading ur work and hope 2 c more in da future. Keep writine and remember
    Keep cool, burn doen da school
    Rissa: -)

To A Suicide...

In this park i used to dwell,
met a guy i loved so well,
there he stole my heart from me,
and now i have to set it free,
sat another girl on his knee,
and told her things he never told me...

Mum came home late that night,
started searching left to right,

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