In Need Of Some Guidance

Rookie (07-10-1991 / Detroit, Michigan)

Comments about In Need Of Some Guidance

  • Donna Elouise James (3/19/2009 3:55:00 PM)

    Love the poem Goodbye
    very strong use of lines
    an pacy
    gave it a 10
    Donna

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Goodbye

It's me, again
sorry to bother you..
needing a friend.
Can't hide the pain...
can't face it... can't take it.
Can't breathe, my lungs... crushing,
my heart aching... lost... stolen.
Ripped out of me... my soul...
I have one?

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