Jacqueline Trevejo Rubio


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  • Tim Whiteside (5/15/2018 7:11:00 AM)

    Jackie, they're both amazing poems, you're such a special person and you have so much ability!

    I spotted a typo in the second one splendour it reads then the falling of the snow and I think you meant than the falling of the snow.

    Both brilliant, good on you!

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She

She, is the most beautiful creature I have ever seen
She, is like a dream
Her lips are subtle like the petals of the reddest roses
Her eyes are round and wide, she is awake, she is alive
In her beauty she strives,

I admire her with words,
But words cant seem to express her.
She is like a work of art,
A fascination.

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