Before we begin,
lets limit the negatives to constructive criticism.
I am a poet,
you don't agree.
But these are all real experiences,
this is all real life,
and it's what's in my mind.
You may not like some...
You may hate them all.
But poetry is empathy.
It's about sharing your life,
so others may join in the ecstasy, sadness, confusion, etc.
This is not for you specifically,
it is for 'us'.
It is for ALL the people who understand feelings, and thoughts, and emotions.
...As you may have noticed,
I tend to change thoughts mid-poem rather often,
and for those who don't understand,
that's the teenage mind, the mentality:
Those occur in all people, and i find it elementary to restrict your thoughts, if more come rushing in.
Thoughts, and beliefs, change the way days do.
...And if you disagree, more power to you! :)