James P. Roberts

Rookie - 129 Points (Waterloo, Iowa)

Comments about James P. Roberts

  • Warren Falcón Warren Falcón (9/25/2012 1:33:00 PM)

    Refreshing to read these poems on this site. If only all were required to read, In Judging 424 Hungry Poems, He Comes To Understand The Term 'Obvious Dog'! ! ! one of the bestest titles ever. Am going over my own zoomitositous poems to amend, rather, in 12 step fashion, MAKE AMENDS, guided the Ten Step Program in your poem. I would add a First Step: I admit that I am helpless over gratuitous commas.

    Keep going til Ooohaohma allows some restful sleep.

    Warren Falcon

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Migratories

Cranberry harvest over
they invade the doll kingdom
for a brief season
of musical language, coffee,
and disquisitions related
before venturing into relentless
noise: the transition of robots.

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