Refreshing to read these poems on this site. If only all were required to read, In Judging 424 Hungry Poems, He Comes To Understand The Term 'Obvious Dog'! ! ! one of the bestest titles ever. Am going over my own zoomitositous poems to amend, rather, in 12 step fashion, MAKE AMENDS, guided the Ten Step Program in your poem. I would add a First Step: I admit that I am helpless over gratuitous commas.
Keep going til Ooohaohma allows some restful sleep.