Jamie Parker

Rookie (1994 / Gates Cottage)

Comments about Jamie Parker

  • Jamie Parker (3/9/2005 7:23:00 AM)

    The Wolf Mansion is actually a story.
    I just couldn't find any where else to show people!
    I hope U all enjoy it!
    Jamie
    P.S I'm 10 not 11

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  • Jamie Parker (3/8/2005 5:09:00 AM)

    (web links)
    (the stuff below the comments about me!)

  • Jamie Parker (3/8/2005 5:08:00 AM)

    All the stuff below is about other Jamie's!
    Not me!

  • Jamie Parker (2/5/2005 12:32:00 PM)

    I like it when people comment on my poems!

  • Jamie Parker (2/5/2005 7:29:00 AM)

    Hey All!
    If somethings wrong in my poems please tell me!
    Also...could someone please tell me how that when you click on a guys name...a load of comments appear at the top! How do you do that?
    Please tell me!
    Jamie Parker
    P.S I'd like to thank Theodora Onken for giving me tips and comments and reading my poems! Thanks Theodora!
    Jamie

  • Sean De Montfort (2/4/2005 9:50:00 AM)

    Good effort but not good enough

Best Poem of Jamie Parker

School

Why do we go to school?
We have to learn
We have to strive harder
We have to go to school
School can be fun...
For some people!
I find it fun
I find it bad
I know a guy who was whipped at his school...
That was my dad!) :
So be lucky with have fair schools now
And not green liver for lunch
Like my mum had!) :
Honestly!
Be cool and calm
Or you'll find yourself...
In the headmasters palm...

Read the full of School

Drugged

I put the cup to my lips
and drank the sweet wine in one go
suddenly, as though all the strengh had gone from me
I fell from my chair and I felt my eye-lids drop
I still had my consciousness but I felt like I was dead but alive
I could just see her smile
And knew she had planned this
she slid of her chair
and poured the rust of the drugged wine down my open mouth

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