Jane Tomlin

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  • Joshua Treece (3/17/2005 10:12:00 AM)

    i love your work and i have ehard that you have some it in book thats great. and only for writing for 2 year so far. have you ever writen any thing other poems or not. if not try a short story or some thing you would be good a one for writing them to i think.

    always loven, never haten,
    joshua

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Waterfalls

The gushing of the clear blue water is refreshing as you cool your over-heated, over-worked body. Rebuilding a civilisation is taking longer than expected.

The breeze is reviving as it rustles the palm leaves. Two, three, four coconuts fall and smack the ground, cracking open the hard shell to reveal the soft flesh and thirst-quenching milk within.

You look out to sea at the crystal waters. Fish dart in the shallows. You are in paradise, an alyssum, a utopia. But soon it maybe inhabited by

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