Jane Tomlin

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Jane Tomlin Poems

41. Waterfalls 2/14/2005
42. Winter 11/14/2005
43. Fairytale Poem 2/14/2005
44. Journeys End 2/13/2005
45. You Possess What You Cannot Keep 2/14/2005
46. Leaving School 2/14/2005

Comments about Jane Tomlin

  • Joshua Treece (3/17/2005 10:12:00 AM)

    i love your work and i have ehard that you have some it in book thats great. and only for writing for 2 year so far. have you ever writen any thing other poems or not. if not try a short story or some thing you would be good a one for writing them to i think.

    always loven, never haten,

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Best Poem of Jane Tomlin


My desperate love for you was so strong
But it is hopeless we have grown apart
I now know that the love we had was wrong
You are no longer deep inside my heart.

I've never known a love-rat such as you
I despise you, you are weak and helpless
Oh Hell, what mustI do, what must I do
Our love has become one gigantic mess.

We no longer have a thing between us
Love twisted my heart, put me in the dark
Love is a cold-hearted feeling of lust
My life with you has left a deep, blind mark.

Goodbye's the saddest word I know,
Pack your bags, get out of my...

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The gushing of the clear blue water is refreshing as you cool your over-heated, over-worked body. Rebuilding a civilisation is taking longer than expected.

The breeze is reviving as it rustles the palm leaves. Two, three, four coconuts fall and smack the ground, cracking open the hard shell to reveal the soft flesh and thirst-quenching milk within.

You look out to sea at the crystal waters. Fish dart in the shallows. You are in paradise, an alyssum, a utopia. But soon it maybe inhabited by