Jazmine Demore


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  • Thomas Duncky Thomas Duncky (9/30/2013 5:29:00 AM)

    If that's your first poem called Heart Broken After All then i should say you have started on a very good note and the future of your penmanship is quite clear and bright.

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  • Thomas Duncky Thomas Duncky (9/30/2013 5:24:00 AM)

    If that's your first poem called Heart Broken After All then i should say you have started on a very good note and the future of your penmanship is quite clear and bright.

Heart Broken After All

A look into his eyes makes your day
A dream of a day looking at water sway
Holding hands laughing as the day goes away

Sunset breaks with a nice swim
For not a day very grim
A football lesson ends with a kiss
Sandwiches prepared with Swiss
A basketball lesson also,

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