Jeff Rubin

Rookie (04/13/48 / Brooklyn, N.Y.)

Comments about Jeff Rubin

  • Joshua Bosworth (4/9/2008 5:44:00 PM)

    While your poems provide interesting perspective, their message seems to be trite with over use. This coupled with you poor wording leads me to belive that these poems provide no real insight at all, and are merely an echo of those that you percive as brilliant. Personaly, i belive that you need to develop your own voice as a writer.

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A Little More

when someone asks how I am
I know it’s out of politeness
most people would answer, “fine”
out of boredom and triteness

but I reveal my true state of mind
which may cause awkward social distress
for when I reply to “how I am”
this is what I express:

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