Comments about Jenne Kaivo
Gravity pulled in the typical way
At a foot that ought not have been bare.
The mountain-goat stones do not hold to their own,
As slick things quite like to let go.
The pool down beneath is your world.
Shall you slither inside? Well, you should
As it seems to believe-if slowed
To a slide, most graceful would be
Your descent to the water like cream.