jodi right

Rookie (28/06/90 / Sheffield)

Comments about jodi right

  • Andrew Konisberg (5/27/2005 11:12:00 AM)

    keep at it, Jodi. you are extremely talented. I could only just about string sentences together at your age...you are writing things that are 'up there' with some of the best poets on this site. I am only an average poet myself, but I know ability when I read it. Keep going!

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  • long gone (4/8/2005 9:46:00 AM)

    you, quite simply, are one of the most gifted writers on the entire site. I am stunned at how effortless your verse appears. and...your best is yet to come.

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  • Lamont Haywood (3/31/2005 4:02:00 PM)

    You are a sensitive and talented poet. Your work is brilliant! You are capable of writing the way most of us wish we could write and yet to be so young...It is only in age however because your heart is very mature and wise. You make me believe again.

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  • Bkhj Chen (3/31/2005 12:37:00 PM)

    you are a goddess in poetry.
    i look forward to seeing your published poetry books in the future.

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  • Emily Nunchuck (3/31/2005 12:57:00 AM)

    The first person I've read on here with an age so close to mine, as well as a talent far beyond her age. You're most definately one of the best poets of our age I've read, and it's nice to relate to poems as I do with yours.

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  • Drew Chadwick (3/30/2005 7:58:00 PM)

    You are utterly amazing and inspirational. Fantastic, deep work. Well done.

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Best Poem of jodi right

Seven Whispers

Seven Whispers pass me by.
Unknowing, unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of the mind.
The mind is imaginary, full of trickery and magical places
Which makes up fantasies of desires you wish you could posses but only have a glance of.
Seeing through the eyes of the mind you see only images you create but cannot be brought to the existence of life.

Seven Whispers pass me by,
Unknowing, unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of love.
Love is peace and beauty in which your heart creates to defend the world from complete ...

Read the full of Seven Whispers

Seven Whispers

Seven Whispers pass me by.
Unknowing, unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of the mind.
The mind is imaginary, full of trickery and magical places
Which makes up fantasies of desires you wish you could posses but only have a glance of.
Seeing through the eyes of the mind you see only images you create but cannot be brought to the existence of life.

Seven Whispers pass me by,
Unknowing, unrevealing,