Jordan Davis


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  • Edwin Drood (12/26/2007 8:14:00 AM)

    Such a stupid writer,
    i am sorry to say,
    His poems are stupid,
    So look the other way.....

    Says emo's poems are good
    and even better than mine,
    Let me tell you all a thing
    My stories shines

    I don't write poems,
    This guy thinks that is my fault,
    Listen i can write anything,
    So shut your mouth up, you little dolt

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Camping

The running water of the river is putting me to sleep
The promise of staying awake until dinner is hard for me to keep
My dog is resting peacefully beside my folding chair
In this place for camping I do not have a care
The fire's crackling noisely but aids in my hypnotic rest
Then I fall fast asleep, my last thought, 'Camping is the best.'

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